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Reviewer: binga (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 48: A Slow Dance to Fix You
i swear this is the weekend that doesnt end lol. nah loving this fic :)
Author's Response: Hi binga!
I know, the Weekend at the Cullens is like the Energizer Bunny. Actually, chapter 49, up now, is the last of the Very Cullen Weekend chapters. ;) Thanks for the Fic-love!
-bannerday
Reviewer: OCDvampire (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 47: Good Times Then and Now
Damn! I forgot my Coldplay guess. Is it Green Eyes?
Author's Response: Nope. Nopedy-nope-nope. Not Green Eyes. It will figure into the chapter, so it was a very good guess, but it's not the song they are currently dancing to.
Thanks for playing Name That Coldplay Tune.
-bannerday
Reviewer: OCDvampire (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 47: Good Times Then and Now
Hi Bannerday, are you back at school yet? We went back today, a week early!! I need another week off!! So I drowned my sorrows on the internet until I trawled up some naked butt. I am reliably informed it is PFac, so it's really helping!! lol
Thought I'd better calm down after that, so I've been listening to Michael Buble. Then I thought sod it, and stuck on Muse at Glastonbury.
Oh, I love Kings of Leon, Sex on Fire! Here's a little something for you to enjoy
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o6oIkgI69gE
I haven't listened to the Eclipse soundtrack, but I refuse to buy the Twilight one because the song I love best isn't even on it - Let Me Sign, by some Brit.
OK enough! The chapter!
Well, the first paragraph just summed up my life right now (not with pictures of Bella, of course - I have my own, locked up tight in my head).
Wow! Do you really think throwing condoms at your progeny will get rid? Running off to shops to buy some - just in case!
I love all the chit chat and banter, you paint a great picture of family life. I'm one of five kids, and I always love big get togethers!
Esme decided to do the poem today:
I had some lovely presents, some flowers and a scarf
And a very nice book of poetry, that made Edward and Bella laugh.
Some slippers I would use when going to the pool
and celtic knot earrings to make me look so cool.
A little picture frame, the cause of much hilarity,
As they reproduced the photo, without a lot of parity.
Finally a present from my husband, no less
A weekend in Vancouver at the Hotel Empress.
Embarrassing our offspring with stories from the past
smiling at their antics, all of them happy, at last.
Signing off quickly, it's 1am here, I have to get to bed!! lol
Sweet dreams Isabel
Author's Response: Hi Isabel!
Our school started today too. I miss summer already! Our school is being remodeled and the whole campus is a disaster. I can't wait for summer 2011! One day down.... :(
Okay really? Nekky PFac buns? Tell me more!
I love Muse. Couldn't bet the youtube video--it's been removed or some such thing. Damn!
You've got to listen to the Eclipse soundtrack. Heavy in Your Arms is an awesome song, but I just think the entire soundtrack is just stellar!
I know---what the hell happened with Let Me Sign on the Twilight soundtrack??? I love that song---and the Brit that sings it. He's kinda cute. Something about him makes me want to suck his face off, which is probably really inappropriate, given my age. ;)
Glad you enjoyed the family fun fest. Esme left off a few lines of her poem:
Finishing the evening dancing in my husband's arms
Two decades of marriage--still succumbing to his charms.
Jasper, so refined, dancing with Emmett, causing laughter
Alice and Rose, not to be topped, freaking shortly after.
But best of all, my sensitive boy, smiling with his girl.
The mother in me can sleep tonight; all is right with the world.
;)
You've inspired me, Isabel!
Thanks for the review, the poetry, the laughs and the smiles. Tomorrow is Friday, the next day is Saturday and I'll be pretending it's summer. And working on chapter 49. ;)
-bannerday
Reviewer: ELLC (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 48: A Slow Dance to Fix You
Ah Bannerday. Let me tell you a little about my day. I come home from a long day at the office only to find that I am the first to arrive which means that I need to start dinner. It's amazing how the kids and hubby always seem to arrive within 30 minutes after I do. Anyway, I start fussing in the kitchen, grab a glass of wine and my laptop. Once the laptop boots up i go through my email. Some are from friends and some from family. But, the one the interests me the most is the "Twilight story from Bannerday"! I may have squealed and perhaps because of my age, I may have peeed alittle too. Just sayin.
Each chapter is such a delight and wonderful surprise. Some are really funny, some are serious, some are suck face hot!! But this chapter was sad yet tender and sweet. I had not expected Bella to feel so much compasion for Edward and his issues with Tanya. I thought she may have uncovered some petty jealously yet, I was touched by Bellas words and this chapter truly moved me. I am such a sap!
Now the horn dog in me truly LOVES the last part of the chapter. They are finally in their birthday suits and while you have me believe that they are going to do the dead, our little Bella has some thoughts are her own. Not that I'm complaining - that was HOT!
As always, love the story and am patiently waiting for more.
ELLC
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Author's Response: Hi ELLC!!
Sorry I am running behind on my replies. But RL started back up with a KABOOM. I'm so happy that you squeal at my updates! I'm so disturbed that you may have peed a little, due to your age, however I can totally relate. Where the effff did my youth go?
I absolutely love what you had to say in your review about the nature of the different chapters I've written and specifically the last chapter. It was an emotional journey kind of chapter. I'm glad I'm not alone in my sappiness.
Now, if the horn dog in you loved the last part of the last chapter, the horn dog in you should love chapter 49 which has been posted. There's more of that HEAT, along with a few surprises, a few funnies, and a really inappropriate Edward. I just love him.
Hope you enjoy. Let me know. As if you wouldn't!---you're so good to me!
-bannerday
Reviewer: renesalecau (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 48: A Slow Dance to Fix You
Yay!!! we got some alone time in! and some alone time, as well! as always, banner, i loved the update. b&e's progress as a couple makes me smile and I love how you have quotes from the movie and books with your own personal spin! good stuff, as usual.
~Tay
Author's Response: Hi Tay!
More good stuff available online now. I've just posted chapter 49. I think you'll like it. It's more alone time, the ending of the Very Cullen Weekend. They are progressing some more---both physically and emotionally, and some of it is even embarrassing in a cute way. I think, anyway. More movie/book quotes and content with my personal spin.
Thanks for the review. Hope you enjoy 49.
-bannerday
Reviewer: sistajalice (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 48: A Slow Dance to Fix You
YAY!
Incapacitated Edward was hilarious!
Author's Response: I think a rather incoherently, rambling, babbling, sleepy Edward is kind of sexy. ;) Once he's used to this kind of thing ( ;) ) he'll have better stamina. ;)
-bannerday
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 48: A Slow Dance to Fix You
I'm with you... I also got sappy. Your chapters keep getting better and better... Though I do believe its time for some relief for Bella...
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Hi Cina!
So glad I'm not alone in my sappiness. You mentioned Bella getting a little relief---perhaps you should take a look at chapter 49. It's up now. Let me know!
-bannerday
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 27: Comparing Notes
Alice is a pistol. They have a strong friendship. I am simply enjoying Edward and Bella being together.
Author's Response: Hi Dulcinea!
Alice is kind of a pistol, right? She's the Tiny Tyrant. But she's on Edward's side and she's looking out for him. She's a happy twin that wants a happy twin. ;)
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: Sophi157 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 48: A Slow Dance to Fix You
Loved this chapter! you made me cry, my chin quivered and everything.LOL...
Author's Response: I'm so glad you loved it, Sophi! I'm glad I'm not the only crier! lol Now I know I'm not alone.
-bannerday
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 26: Points of View
This was great. Carlisle and Esme on the phone were hysterical!!!
Author's Response: Hi Dulci!
Glad you liked it. Nothing like a loving parent to embarrass the hell out of you!
-bannerday
Reviewer: Rory1984 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 48: A Slow Dance to Fix You
Dear bannerday,
I was soo sure that when you they came into the meadow they were going to do the deed... but then my braincells came back and I realized that it was WAY too cold... :(
Anyway, a beautiful, emotioanl, moving, sweet and hot chapter!! I gave my best to keep the tears at bay but when Bella said that beautiful sentence to Edward at the end "...if you were at all the beautiful for Tanjy that you are for me ... well I am sure she had some happy moments. I m sure you gave her some light sprinkled amidst her darkness. I cant help but think you must have given her that." i cried ... they fix each other in every way imaginable.
There was a lot of pysical stuff and teasing and goofiness going on in the previous chapter - which I LOVED dont get me wrong - but I really liked the depth of this chapter, which showed that it is not just physical attraction between them, but that it goes deeper than that!! I am glad they had this talk before they went any further pysically.
It just was beautiful.. I have no other words.
I am guessing the next chapter will be the last of Cullen weekend? Back to college .. cant wait to see how they are going to handle being back in reality. I mean when they left, they had just gone out on their first date, and it just seems that so much has happend in the few days.
Also cant wait to read what Edward has planned for their "special night" and I not worried ;) the King of the Grand Gestures is not going to let us down, but makes us proud and probably as tingly... ;)
Take care, until next time :D Thanks also for the speedy updates, I dont know how you do it, but do you see me complaining... NOOO.. I am doing a happy dance :D
Author's Response: Hi Rory!
Nope, too cold in that meadow for "deeding" but it'll be a good place to return to before summer. ;)
I'm glad to know I'm not the only crier at the "beautiful boy" comment from Bella regarding Edward and Tanya. That was a pretty emotional chapter to read...and to write. ;)
The next chapter, the End of the Very Cullen Weekend, will have some surprises and be a little more on the sweet and hot side---with a slightly unfiltered Edward. Again, a nearly all B & E chapter. The following chapter will get back into the school and dorm routine. With a few curveballs thrown in for good measure.
Thanks for the kind words and compliments. Look for the chapter 49 update in a day or two.
-bannerday
Reviewer: divine devon (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 48: A Slow Dance to Fix You
what a beautiful, intimate and moving chapter!!
im also loving the speed you update!!
Author's Response: Hi div dev!
Glad you enjoyed it! O tried for all three--beautiful, intimate and moving. Sounds like I hit a homerun! I will update soon.
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: RobstenLuvre (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 48: A Slow Dance to Fix You
OMG i can't believe i didn't even THINK about Fix You! That's one of my top 3 favorite Coldplay songs *slaps forehead* Anyway, i admit i got a little teary eyed because they are so happy, and they really have been fixing each other along the way. It's just so cute! I'm still so baffled that they've only been together for such a short amount of time, it's still so refreshing and new. I enjoy these kids of stories :) You pretty much make my day, i sincerely thank you xx
Author's Response: Hi RL!
I'm so totally behind!!! RL has commenced.
So yeah, FIX YOU, ya silly! I particularly love it, it makes me cry even without a semi-defective-but-on-the-mend-Edward. You are right, they are cute, happy, fixing each other, and it has been a fairly short time---they really are still getting to know each other. It just seems longer, because I get really descriptive about each nanosecond. ;) I'm glad you enjoy this kind of story---I do too. I don't think a story has to have a tremendous amount of angst to make it enjoyable when the main characters FINALLY get together.
Thanks for the review and the compliments.
-bannerday
Reviewer: CanadianMommmyX2 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 48: A Slow Dance to Fix You
That is my favourite Coldplay song. I actually listen to it daily. This was such a sweet update. I am so glad Bella and Edward talked. They connected on a whole other level. This was a discussion they needed to have before getting even physically closer. These talks just strengthen the bond between them.
I like that Bella is "fixing" Edward as much as he is "fixing" her. I find that your Bella and Edward seem to be on a more equal footing in that regard. I have read alot of fan fics where Edward is always the hero saving Bella. I like that your Bella is obviously as much the "hero" as Edward is.
What Bella said to Edward about Tanya made me teary eyed. It was exactly what he needed to hear. It was so sweet.
I think this was one of my favourite updates. As much as many of the other ones made me laugh, this one shows the true relationship between Edward and Bella. They have alot of fun together, but it always comes back to this bond between them.
Great work! I love this story more with every update
CM
Author's Response: Hi CM!
Such a great song, no? You are right--they have connected on a much deeper level than ever before. And it does deepen their bond. It's good to know that Bella isn't jealous--that wouldn't be right, right?
They are indeed fixing each other. and you are right they are on pretty equal footing---both of them have sojething to give to the other. I don't like a wimpy Bella. I like a Bella with backbone and with smarts. Why would Edward like a nondescript wallflower? They are both heros---just like in the original---he had something to give her, but she also gave him something.
Glad you got teray about the Tanya thing--Bella's a great girl and she has a lot to give Edward. It was what he needed to hear, and it was based on fact. He makes her feel good, he must have made Tanya feel good.
I really loved this chapter. It kind of gets to the whole heart of the matter between the two of them. They both have something to offer the other. It's not all just about hotness and sex appeal.
Thannks for the compliments and kind words. you write me such great reviews. I'd send you an Edward if I could. ;)
-bannerday
Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 48: A Slow Dance to Fix You
I love this. Read it in two days! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Hi ns!
Thanks for the Storylove! Glad you are enjoying it. More soon.
-bannerday
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 48: A Slow Dance to Fix You
Sneaky, and here I thought they would finally do the deed. Is it going to be some big extravagant event or jus happen when the moment is right?
Author's Response: Hi twimom!
Nope, no deed yet. They have to get through a little bit more. Edward is the King of the Grand Gesture---think back to their first date. Now imagine what he might come up with for a very memorable first time. :) VERY MEMORABLE. Just sayin' ;)
=-bannerday
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 48: A Slow Dance to Fix You
thats so sweet! and i loved them getting locked out and having to sneak back in the window! thats too great!
Author's Response: Glad you thought it was sweet. They needed to talk about it a little. And I had to get the window thing in there a little. ;)
bannerday
Reviewer: Yrollam (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 48: A Slow Dance to Fix You
Dude I finally thought It was going to citrusious and it kind of was. Great job-o
Author's Response: Slowly, we're getting there slowly. And when we get there, it'll be pretty spectacular if I do say so myself. Remember--Edward is the King of the Grand Gesture. Think about their first date, now imagine what he might come up with for their first time to make it memorable. ;)
-bannerday
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 25: Everybody and His Brother
This wsa like the telephone game unfolding!
Author's Response: Exactly! I had such a blast trying to get inside each of the different characters minds. Mike Newton's mind is not a cool place to be. ;)
-bannerday
Reviewer: dhull (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 48: A Slow Dance to Fix You
I'm so glad Bella explained to E how he could have given Tanya some light in the darkness that obviously consumed her. Very well written BD!!! You ROCK!!! And, hey, it's ok to be sappy sometime BD! *gives BD a Kleenex*
By the end of this chapter, the song I was thinking of was "Fixer" by Pearl Jam.....IDK, just my random thought.....
Have a GREAT Labor Day weekend! I'll be lake'n it here on Lake Travis trying to stay cool from all the 100 degree heat!
dhull (Austin, TX)
Author's Response: Hi d! Thanks for the okay on my sappiness! I think Bella helped Edward see something he never thought to look at, you know?
Fiver---great song. You're right.
Enjoy your weekend. I'll do the same. Not going anywhere-just staying inside E's and B's heads and writing chapter 49. ;)
-bannerday
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 24: A Jury of Our Peers
Yeah!!!! I am so happy for them. Bella's description of shower events was fantastic. I love how she had them all speechless!
Author's Response: Finally, right? Bella shut Emmett down. That's no easy task. ;)
-bannerday
Reviewer: andib (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 48: A Slow Dance to Fix You
You know I love this story, thanks so much for it. I love being brought in the their world. You are a great writer!!!! And, you are super super fast with updates, which makes me smile!!! : )
Author's Response: Thani you so much for the kind words and thanks for the Storylovel! I'm glad you love their world and taking a peek at it.
-bannerday
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 48: A Slow Dance to Fix You
You did find the perfect song for these two. I cried along with Bella a little. By the end of the chapter Edward was fixed more than he could imagine, lol.
I loved what Bella said about Edward bringing a little happiness to Tanya's unhappy life. He is so giving that I cannot imagine anyone being totally miserable around him. He must have been an island for her.
Author's Response: Glad you liked the song and found it touching. Also glad that I'm not the only crier out there, Yeah--Edward had a relatively good chapter. ;)
I liked what you said about Edward: <"He is so giving that I cannot imagine anyone being totally miserable around him. He must have been an island for her."> Exactly what I wanted Bella's words to convey. I'm glad he actually thought about what she said too--the fact that she's his girlfriend and would know the kind of person he would be to a girlfriend. I think that would be a very comforting thing to know.
So it seems like he can really allow himself to move on and not feel like he failed T. Kind of a cathartic chapter.
Thanks for the reviewl
-bannerday
Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 48: A Slow Dance to Fix You
Super, fab chapter!!! I loved it!! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment, l2rff! Thanks also for the Chapterlove!
-bannerday
Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 48: A Slow Dance to Fix You
AWWW... Bella's words made me cry a little, too!
Great chapter, as always!
Author's Response: Hi Tammygrrrl!
Thanks for letting me know that I'm not alone in my tears. ;) Thanks for the compliment.
-bannerday
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