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Reviewer: alexandra (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 1: Putting the Move On

Nice start!  I know I'm going to like this!



Author's Response:

Hi alexandra!

I'd like to know what you think as you continue. Let me know. Keep in touch. Hope you enjoy my little world.

-bannerday

Reviewer: renesalecau (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 49: It Was So Nice to See You

awesome weekend. i'm happy the kids got more alone time, but i'm really excited to see what's going on at school. i know you're hella word (just like moi) so what could happen in ten chapters? good stuff!

 

~Tay



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the weekend. All good things must end, though. They got more alone time---now we get to see how they handle in-love-ness back at the dorm---they hadn't gotten to that point when they had left. What could happen in 10 chapters?? You'll just have to wait and read. I hopw to post today or tomorrow.

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: luv2readff (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 49: It Was So Nice to See You

GREAT CHAPTER!!! Now back to the real world!



Author's Response:

So glad you ENJOYED it! Back to the mundane reality of college life. Or IS it mundane????? Update tonight or tomorrow hopefully.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Belle36 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 49: It Was So Nice to See You

Really enjoying your story! Thanks for writing.  Edward lack of filter was so funny!



Author's Response:

TGlad you are enjoying. Edward, filter-free---is there anything cuter? I don't think so. I'd take him. ;)

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Siren (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 49: It Was So Nice to See You

Sometimes I love my imagination because when I read something really good, I can see it all in my head. Then there are those other times when I get into trouble... This chapter was toeing the line for me. HaHa!

The description of Edward was incredible. Loved how he teased her about it too!

Soooo good and as always I loved it. Definitely never disappoint.

Love and God bless

Kate:D



Author's Response:

Glad you loved the description of our favorite boy. Such a dreamy, steamy boy he is! And he is so in love and in lust with his lady love!!!

Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the awesome review--like always.

-bannerday

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 49: It Was So Nice to See You

Well GOOD MORNING! Talk about a nice wake-up call :) Sad that the weekend of fun is over but can't wait for the other upcoming adventures to come (he he)



Author's Response:

Hey, HC...Every morning with Edward is a GOOD MORNING!!! lol The weekend is over, but there's a lot of stuff coming their way. Chapter 50 should be up today or tomorrow. Let me know.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 49: It Was So Nice to See You

OMG that was great when Edward asked if she liked what she saw... priceless.  But his come back telling her what her liked about her... just amazing.  Now back to school.. can wait to see what awaits our love birds...Thank you.



Author's Response:

Edward--he's kind of incorrigible these days, isn't he? But such a sweetheart, and so in love with her. But it's back to reality and some crazy stuff coming up. Hopefully chapter 50 will be up today or tomorrow. Let me know.

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: CanadianMommmyX2 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 49: It Was So Nice to See You

So I am going to ignore the AN at the top that mentioned only 10 or so more updates.  That just doesn't fly with me LOL!  I may need to borrow the bat and bucket of balls the day this ends.

I love no filter Edward.  It seems like he had an almost perfect weekend.  He must feel a little "drained" though.  Poor guy (yeah really not feeling too sorry for him at all).

Now really I can't blame Bella for oogling her man while he "slept".  I would have done the same thing.  Although I probably wouldn't have been able to resist touching.  After all and awake Edward in bed is better than a sleeping Edward in bed, as he proved to her.  I would also NEVER lock a door on him.  He could join me in the shower whenever he felt like it.

Another great update.  I love, love, love this story.  I have now put off going to bed when I have to get the kids up for school in the morning, just so I can read this update and review.  That's dedication!  LOL!

Can't wait for more...

CM



Author's Response:

Hi CM!

Ignore away! LOL Who knows...this might go on for another 40 chapters given how wordy Edward and I both are! Love the bucket O'balls idea. Just don't aim at me!

Filter-free Edward is pretty cute, isn't he? And honest! He's just tellin' it like it is! I'm sure he felt "drained." He was coming and going all over the place this past weekend.

I'd so ogle that Culleny Goodness, just like any other fan-fic reader/writer. ;) I'd probably touch, grab, stroke and devour as well. Isn't there a saying like "An Edward in the hand is not quite worth as much as an Edward in the bush"??? Something like that, I'm sure.

Glad yo9u enjoyed the update and that you love, love, love the story as well. Thanks you for the on-going STORYLOVE!!

Thanks for your dedication, your lovem and your awesome reviews. I appreciate all of it soooooo much.

More tonight or tomorrow, hopefully. Hang onto your hat!

-bannerday

Reviewer: ELLC (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 49: It Was So Nice to See You

Who can possibly blame Bella for taking a scenic route of Edwards body! How she was able to keep her hands to herself while taking a trip down Edward lane I'll never know!  You had me in stitches when sleeping Edward wasn't so sleepy and caught her in the act. That was priceless!

Edwards discription of Bella's uh hum atributes was hot!  Loved the unraveling of Miss B and the duel pleasure that followed!  Once a horn dog always a horn dog.

That was a great weekend BD - I'm looking forward to their time in the faculty of higher learning!

P.S.  Only 10 more chapters>?? WTF?  you could go on and on with this story and never bore us at all.  That sounds incredably selfish of me to assume that you want to continue writing for our pleasure  but you need to know that it is truly a pleasure to read what you gift us with.  Thank you!

Are you intending to write other stories?? 

Ciao for now! 

E



Author's Response:

Hi ELLC!

Wouldn't we all take the scenic tour of Edward's fine landscape...manscape?? I know...I'd have been very hands on in that situation. Sneaky Edward...sneakier than our sneaky peeker! Glad you liked that. You know how much he loves to make her blush!

Obviously Edward loves his ladylove. From head to toe---or at least to the midway point--he never did get around to mentioning her legs or feet. ;)

They are both preyy much horn dogs---i can't say that I blame Bella one bit.

Glad you liked the weekend. Back to reality in chapter 50. It's an odd reality.

10 chapters, 40 chapters...who"s counting, really? You know how wordy Edward and I both are, it could go on for a while. ;) Maybe I'll wind up telling the story of a Very Cullen Retirement Home.

Thanks for the kind words and the awesome reviews you always leave me.

i do have another story in the works when this one winds down a bit more.

Ciao, Bella!

-bannerday

Reviewer: RobstenLuvre (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 49: It Was So Nice to See You

Hello daaaaaahling! I always love an Edward list of things he loves about Bella, just makes him even cuter when he's all open and honest like that *dreamy sigh* The Cullen Weekend was quite a serious of events, I'm still trying to sort it all out. Just 10 chaptes left?! I refuse to let you go so easily *angry pout* I will never get enough of these two, I can tell you're gonna send them off with fireworks and happy times. I really love that this story wasn't all angsty and depressing, fanfiction should be happy and silly and, let's face it, smutty. The world is angsty enough, this needs to be the fun break from it all; you've certainlly succeeded, babe ;) You rock my striped and polka dotted socks xx



Author's Response:

Hi RL!

Such a dreamy, steamy boy, no? The Cullen Weekend was very busy. Who knows? 10 chapters, 40 chapters...who really knows by the time wordy Edward has his say. lol Fireworks, happy times and a forever...I hope. ;) Glad you loved the angst free story--there is a little bit of business coming, but stick with it, I'm not too much into the angst. I like HEA. ASmut to come. Or maybe I should say COME. Glad I rocked your socks!

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: NinaWright (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 21: A Black Day For All

I think that was such a realistic break up. I get where Jacob was coming from. Did he act like a douche? Sure, but I could hardly blame him. The way he acted broke my heart, asking if he's ever going to make love to her again, or kiss her again. That's something that hits you so strongly when you're faced with a break up you're not quite prepared for. With that said, I'm SO glad that's out of the way!



Author's Response:

Hi Nina!

I'm glad you found the break up to be realistic. i tried to make it so. I tried to also put Jake in a better light than he seemed form Bella's phone conversations with him. You know he was upset about her being gone, he was worried that they would completely drift apart---and turns out, his worries were well-founded. It's hard when one half of a couple begins to feel that drift before the other. You can't force a fit that no longer works, you know? but if you truly cared for that person, and they haven't wronged you in any way, you can't help but feel devastated at having to devastate them. Been there, done that.

And even as she was breaking things off with him, he still loved her and was still hoping that things would maybe change back at some point. It's such a sad, sad situation. it is heartbreaking---and I'm glad it touched you that way.

But the good news upon finishing this chapter is: Edward Cullen, Full Speed Ahead! ;)

Thanks for the review. Let me know what you think of some of the other chapters you get to if you particularly enjoy them...or even if you don't. Keep in touch.

-bannerday

Reviewer: valentina1972 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 49: It Was So Nice to See You

Bannerday, don't tell me that there are only 10 chapters left!!  Can't we carry this on to A Very Cullen Retirement?  Or would that be jumping the shark?? 

I LOVED Edward describing how he spent his weekend.  It sounds like he was utterly spent after the weekend.  :)  It was an ejaculation mini-vacation.  Stop me now...........

Can't wait until the next chapters!

 



Author's Response:

Hi val!

10 chapters, 40 chapters...who really knows? You know how wordy Edward and I can be. I do have another story in the works when this one finishes.  I love the idea of a Very Cullen Retirement and the sequel: A Very Cullen Rest Home for the Aged. ;)

And jumping the shark? Shark, schmark! I say.

Edward has quite the memories from this weekend, doesn't he. Something tells me he'll be replaying those moments in his mind (and maybe in the shower) quite a bit. ;)  "Ejaculation mini-vacation" HAHAHAHAHAHAHA.

I hope to update on the weekend. Thanks for the review and the giggles.

-bannerday

Reviewer: hisbrandofheroin (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 49: It Was So Nice to See You

Is there anything I can say that I haven't said before? I'm still in BLISS from the whole chapter. I'm ANXIOUS to see how everthing ends with my favoritest (yes, I spelled it LIKE THAT. On PURPOSE) couple, but that would mean no more updates or banter or expeditions where SIGirl and BDSM save Sexual Innuendo deprived stories. So before we have to SEPARATE, I hope you know that this was a supercalifragilisticexpialidocious awesome story, and I loved every single DRAWN-OUT, TORTURE FILLED moment of it. :DDDDDDD <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 Dammit I can't put enough hearts :P



Author's Response:

Hi HBoH!

Thanks again for the LOVE-FEST of a review. ;) Glad you got some ENJOYMENT from this chapter once again. I don't know...10 chapters, 40 chapters...who really knows???? I do have another story in the works, so maybe you'll like that one once I finish this one. Thanks for all the hearts. I officially have a HEART-ON now. ;)

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: FanNan46 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 49: It Was So Nice to See You

They certainly, um, enjoyed each others company this weekend!!  :)

Yeah, it would be hard to go back to campus after a weekend like that, especially when Bella has so much homework to do!!  Edward had better let her do it alone or she'll get nothing (school related) done.  ;)  Not that that would be bad or anything!



Author's Response:

No doubt about the enjoyment factor for these two kids this weekend. Things have changed in leaps and bounds and moans and groans. ;)

The homework is going to be problematic...as well as a few other things going on this next week for B & E. ;)

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 49: It Was So Nice to See You

WEll damn I can't blame Bella one Iota for being a Snealy Peeker...Hell I'd be right there with her giving commentary. =)

LOL...Edward's filter is definalty gone and went the way of the dodo...snicker...it was so nice to see him so carefree. It is great that he is feeling so comfortable with Bella. I think he "spent" his weekend in a very pleasant way.

I'm with them...don't want to see the weekend end either...but alas real life awaits. Maybe even thier first time to look forward too...snicker...I'm pretty sure Edward will be planning that next.

Sniff...snifff...only about ten chapters left...I don't know if I want to let go of these characters just yet...



Author's Response:

Hi AJ!

Yeah, I think I'd be going over that lovely specimen with a fine-toothed comb and a magnifying glass, just so I didn't miss anything.

I think Edward is most definitely carefree and filterfree with Miss Bella these days. He's so comfortable with her, but he does love to make her blush. I think Edward "came" away with some very nice memories of their weekend together.

Yep, Edward will begin planning their first time in the car on the trip back to Seattle. Such a one-track mind these days. ;)

I don't know---10 chapters, maybe 40, who knows???? ;) I'll hate to be done with these characters. But I do have another story in the works.

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: OCDvampire (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 1: Putting the Move On

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I was laughing hard enough to fall off my chair!!!!!

I know I've been tired lately, but that takes the biscuit!!!!

They do say third time lucky, I hope so as it took me ages to find the right clip. As before, enjoy it all (I love Michael McIntyre) of you like, otherwise the bit I am endeavouring to show you is at about 5.45mins.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SE4rtne9Oj4

Good Luck!

Isabel

 

 



Author's Response:

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHH

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Okay, Isabel! That one worked!!! I may never quite enjoy that song the way I did before. I'll still enjoy it, but I'll have a whole new spin on my enjoyment now! ;) I guess I should keep the fire extinguisher handy for the next time my sex is on fire. Or maybe a tube of ointment, depending upon the severity of said fire.

I also enjoyed your comment. I've heard "That takes the cake" but "That takes the biscuit"? You Brits are just plain wacky with your language. Ohhh the English language---gotta love it in all its glory! I've never heard Michael McIntyre before. He was very good. Enjoyed the clip.

Thanks for the laughs.

-bannerday

Reviewer: mrsgunsage (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 49: It Was So Nice to See You

Maybe I should carry a bat and some balls around... that has to be a better way to let out the aggression than my personal favorite of screaming at people until they are a quivering pile of tears on the floor.



Author's Response:

I'm with you. Your approach is so much more portable. Really, it's the travel version of what Edward does. Kicking and throwing things are also time-tested and you don't need any extra equipment for either of those activities--youo just use whatever is at hand.

Thanks for the giggle.

-bannerday

Reviewer: accsmom (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 49: It Was So Nice to See You

oh sigh..

what a fun weekend.  can i  come along next time??? 

as always... story- love it!  Ass- miss it (sometimes)!  Rocking my fanfic world- you are!



Author's Response:

I think we all need to sign up for this bus trip! Storylove--thanks. Ass--taken care of. My fan-fic-fan world--rocked. Thanks for the review and the smile.

-bannerday

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 48: A Slow Dance to Fix You

Oh lord...its hard to see the screen as I teared up but in a good way. I was thrilled when Bella told Edward about what was bothering her about to song and had so many warm fuzzies when they made new memories. This was just so sweet...ane THEN you had to turn up the temperature didn't you...Hot damn honey that was pretty scortching. LoL...I do believe Bella is taking her " taking care" of duties pretty seriously. Snicker...wouldn't Ms. Cope be proud.

So I wasn't able to log on and read this until now but I am excited to have two chapters to read! Hooraaahhh!



Author's Response:

I think chapter 48 was one of my favorites. I like the tension, the sharing and the sexy. Glad you enjoyed it. Glad to know there are other sappy readers out there, tearing up at touching scenes. ;)

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: sweetnees75 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 49: It Was So Nice to See You

lol do u like what u see  i would be like hell ya lol

jules



Author's Response:

Does he really even NEED to ask? Sheesh!!! ;)

-bannerday

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 49: It Was So Nice to See You

bannerday, like Edward you have batted one right out of the park! Fabulous end to the weekend of all weekends. Loved the sense of intimacy and honesty that is the foundation for Edward and Bella to base their relationship. You get the sense not only do they love each other but they mutually like and respect as well. So much fun in this chapter.....and fuck me sideways but what I wouldn't give for that peek of Edward...and yes, I would take him up on that offer to show his ass!! You are doing such a great job with this story banner, I feel like I know these characters, and have fallen in love with all of them, thanks to you.



Author's Response:

Hi spunk!

Glad you liked that one. Nice basebal analogy! E & B are just so right for each other, right? ;) I would so take that peek of Edward and his fine Culleny Goodness/Hotness/Nakiedness. And I too, would have taken him up on the offer to view that Cope-coveted ass, if nothing more than to give him the spanking he deserved. ;) I'm glad you feel so close to these characters and that they have come alive for you.

Thanks for the review,

-bannerday

Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 49: It Was So Nice to See You

Totally perving on your sweet Edward!! I would be a "sneaky peeker" too!



Author's Response:

Oh Tammygrrrrrly!

You and me both. I write him and then I lust after him. I think I'll end this story with a chapter about Bella dumping E. He'll be all sad. He meets a lovely, cougaresque fan-fic writer/wife/mother of two shildren roughly his age, and he begins a torrid affair. I think I'm feeling a spin-off fic. ;)

I'll be the only one reading that one.

thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: ladyrip (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 49: It Was So Nice to See You

Fabulous chapter! Full of citrusy goodness!

And it's back to school... for me, too. The kids are back tomorrow. :( So not ready for this!



Author's Response:

I swear, the summers get shorter and the school years get longer. I think my pay increases incrimentally, but hell if I know where it goes. How long until June? B & E are going back to school. You're starting up again. Me too. Let's all go out for a drink to drown our sorrows. Edward's buying.

Thanks for the review and the chance to commiserate.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 49: It Was So Nice to See You

Man, too bad it wasn't a holiday weekend, then we could have got another four chapters in. I seriously loved this whole weekend series. See you back at campus.



Author's Response:

Oh Jacque!

You've got the count off. 13 chapters between Friday afternoon and Sunday afternoon---I think a 3-day weekend would have meant another 6.5 chapters. ;)

Glad you loved the weekend. It gave them the oportunity to really bond. It gave Bella a chance to see really happy family/couple dynamics.

I'll meet you back at the library. Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 49: It Was So Nice to See You

Wonderful story!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you are enjoying! Keep me posted.

-bannerday

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