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Reviewer: OCDvampire (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 1: Putting the Move On
Hi there, I'm glad I'm entertaining you as I've been rambling more than usual which it seems was just me coming down with a stinking cold! One of my inconsiderate men brought it home from work.
I will have you know I've only watched Supernova ONCE!!!! - all the way through, though there might be a bit or two that needed going over.
It's a shame, the link I really wanted to send you is only on the BBC which doesn't work for you. It was MM's ideas on the creation of the Scottish National Dress, specifically the men's wear, i.e. the kilt. Still, what I did send was very funny and I love the way he does the different accents.
Although I'm much impressed with the speed of your delivery, I am a little worried about my Praves, somehow that sounds so wrong!
Smirking at P's b's is acceptable (why would anyone smirk at them, most are too busy wiping up the drool), just remember not to touch!
You see what happens when you give me liberty to be long winded!
Can't concentrate with this cold, so I'm not going to look at chapter 50 until I feel better. To which end I shall be spending copious amounts of time looking at pictures. Like the background on my PC (I'm on the laptop now, so I can see my PC background), that goes into screensaver after two minutes, or I would never get anything done!
As usual, your reply has cheered me up no end and I needed a good giggle today. So thank you, Isabel
P.S. I am the missing link!
Author's Response: Hi Isabel, aka the Missing Link!
Hope you are feeling better. If not, hope you are able to stay home, take care of yourself and watch Supernova until that one little segment gets scratched beyond recognition on the DVD. LOL
I did get to see the MM segment on the development/design of the kilt. It was funny. He's very good. I really enjoyed it. Thanks. I'm sure Jasper would like a hairy cockbag. ;)
"Praves" was supposed to be P-raves, as in raving about the wonders of P. lol And I was smirking at YOU mentioning P's b's. And no touching??? I am just so sure that there are finger marks all over your TV screen from your screenings of your fave DVD.
Read you soon.
-bannerday
Reviewer: OCDvampire (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 1: Putting the Move On
OK, so it's me again! Now I think I'm about to do an Edward, breaking all the rules. I joined Twilighted before I had the balls to admit my obsession to any one, and quite like the anonimity OCDvampire gives me. I'm sure you feel the same way, as you use Bannerday.
The trouble is, I actually post on fanfic under my real name (OMG!!). Don't ask me why, I think it's partly because Leanne Golightly uses her own name, and she is the main reason I've posted anything at all. Also, partly because I guess people who are going to read it are probably as nuts as me, and why not get recognition for what you do.
If you go to fanfic, OH SOD IT!!! Here's a link
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2364655/Isabel_Southwell
You'll find a short oneshot, "Fear Not Fair Maid", which is entered in a competition called "One fine Summer Day", although they don't appear to have started voting yet.
You'll also find the poem that started this whole thing for me, "My Angel" and another from Charlie's POV. I am going to put the New Moon poem up soon, and my first ever story is going through the beta process. So maybe our roles will be reversed and you can review my chapters, lol.
Don't expect great things, my stuff is much lighter and more childish, but I'm okay with that as it's nice to have something children can read. Unfortunately certain people (Rosalie was the first, but of course Emmett is the main culprit) insisted on using some expletives, forcing me to up the age limit.
Anyway, I'm trusting you not to blab about me being, well....me. And to say thanks in advance, here's the next verse of Twilight, Carlisle's POV:
The house was very quiet, much as I’d expected.
I went to comfort Esme, who always felt rejected,
When Edward did this kind of thing, with no thought for others,
Most children, in her eyes, would have turned to their Mothers.
“He just needs space,” I told her, “he’ll need you soon, you’ll see.”
I put my arms around her and held her close to me.
“I don’t know what he’s thinking, or if he’s right or wrong,
But I do know,” said Alice, “he won’t stay away for long.
“When he’s home, leave him alone,” Rose said with rare affection,
“Remember that he did it for his own, and our protection.”
Upon his return, Edward came and sought me out, to ask
Why suddenly he’d found abstention such a task.
“I don’t know much about it, though it is extremely rare.
What can I tell you, son, except life’s never very fair.”
Oh, P's buns - no touching!!!
Long winded as usual, Isabel Southwell
BTW, our dinner that was a half hour late is now an hour late as I forgot to put the meat in!! LOL!
Author's Response: Oh Isabel!!! You are hilarious and I just love your reviews--or whatevers, links, missing links, P raves, Poetry selections, RL misadventure confessions. ;)
I'll have to go check you out. Seeing as how you told me you'd give me a link and actually included it and all.
I just absolutely ADORE the Carlisle POV poetry. It's so sweet, so touching to see this through a "parent's" eyes. It also makes Edward that much sweeter and more little-boy-lost. Just absolutely wonderful. Thank you for sharing.
Thanks for the smile, giggle, laugh, smile and smirk and guffaw. (The smirk was when I got to the part where you mention P's b's. ;))
Take care. Feel free to be long winded. It's passing wind where I draw the line. :)
-bannerday
-bannerday
Reviewer: gypsymomma (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 50: In Sickness and in WHAT?!
Period and the flu that's just mean lol.. Wonder what's up with jake. We going to hear more about mysterious flowers?
Author's Response: Hey, sometimes "When the going get tough...it goes to hell in a handbasket." I know you've had days like that. I have. Yes, what IS up with Jake? And what's up with those flowers/raggedy dead things? Stay tuned. I'm posting tonight or tomorrow.
-bannerday
Reviewer: vonch (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 20: The Movie Fades to Black
please can we move on abt Jake story..I want some loving on E/B..I'm getting bored on Jake story..please..don't get me wrong I like your story but can we move fast..
Author's Response: This story is all about the buildin of a real relationship. It's really not going that slowly, I just write about every single thing along the way. Bella's known Edward for only two weeks, most of that time has been spent pretending that there's nothing there between them. Now Bella has to deal with major emotional upset, hurting someone that she still really cares about. She's not in the healthiest place to start a new relationship quite yet, but it's coming. She'll be ready before she knows it.
-bannerday
Reviewer: carina2026 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 50: In Sickness and in WHAT?!
Oh shit! Jake! I bet he brought the flowers...
Author's Response: Edward is probably thinking the same thing right about now!
-bannerday
Reviewer: sistajalice (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 50: In Sickness and in WHAT?!
AHHHHHHHH, JAKE!
Grrrrr!
Author's Response: I know!!!!!!! Always sniffing around where you don't want him. Hopefully Edward will muzzle him.
-bannerday
Reviewer: potterkitty (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 50: In Sickness and in WHAT?!
I'm thinking, "How is she ever going to get any school work done!"
Author's Response: Oh potterkitty!!!
School work and college just don't mix! College is for social lives and new romances. HAHAHAHAHAHA
Hey, it worked for me. No, I did learn something from some of those classes, too. But I learned so much more about life when I wasn't in a class. ;)
-bannerday
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 50: In Sickness and in WHAT?!
I'm guessing the creepy flowers were from James?
Jake must be coming to check on Bella after hearing that she was sick from Charlie?
Author's Response: All will be revealed in the next chapter. I'm hoping to post tonight or tomorrow. You've got some good ideas there, twimom. Some of them might be right. ;)
-bannerday
Reviewer: KayaRayne (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 50: In Sickness and in WHAT?!
Okay my hubby still doesn't purchase tampons...I'm jealous! I'm not going to assume anything yet about Bella's truck or Jacob. I will just be patient and hope whatever it else, Edward will be mature about it and not shutdown again.
KR
Author's Response: It takes a real special occasion for my hubs to buy them. I think the last time was 23 years ago, shortly after the birth of our first child. I think it was my husband's way of thanking me for giving him a son. ;)
I hope to update tomorrow or Tuesday. So you don't have to be patient for too long.
We'll see how much stress Edward can handle. ;)
Thanks for the review. Stay tuned.
-bannerday
Reviewer: KayaRayne (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 49: It Was So Nice to See You
Great chapter. Loved the sneak peek and her getting caught. I think I blushed at that, lol. This was so fun to read. Can't wait...
KayaRayne
Author's Response: Glad you loved Bella, the sneaky Peeker! And Edward, the Not-so-Sleepy Observer. ;)
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: westosobear (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 50: In Sickness and in WHAT?!
Tampons buying was funny! Happy I don't need those ever again!!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. And amen to that, honey!!!
-bannerday
Reviewer: andib (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 50: In Sickness and in WHAT?!
No neck wring, just story love!!!! Edward is so sweet!!! Not every guy will buy his new girlfriend tampons!!!
Author's Response: Hi andib!
I love the Storylove!! I'll take that over a neck wring any day! You've gotta love a caretaker, protector who is willing to buy you tampons. (I'm not sure exactly HOW willing he actually was...) Thank God Emmett wasn't around to ask "Whatcha got in the bag, Baby Bro?" That could have been bad. ;)
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 50: In Sickness and in WHAT?!
Jake gave her the flowers tied with a black ribbon?
Author's Response: Could be..... It remains to be seen. I'll post tomorrow or Tuesday. Stay tuned. ;)
-bannerday
Reviewer: KayaRayne (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 48: A Slow Dance to Fix You
Wow...
KR
Author's Response: I'm hoping that was a good "wow."
-bannerday
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 10: Cookies Anyone?
Forget Jacob. Just be her "friend"
Author's Response: Hi again twidi!
Right. He should just do that and see how long that lasts. ;)
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 8: One Step Forward
Damn, Jake. Get rid of him B.
Author's Response: Hi again twidi!
You know it. I know it. Alice probably knows it. Edward might feel it. But Bella...she's a little slow on the uptake. She's going to drag her feet a little. ;)
-bannerday
Reviewer: RobstenLuvre (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 50: In Sickness and in WHAT?!
Well, well, well...At first i was thinking hmm, maybe someone slipped her something and that's why she's feeling so bad. Nixed that one quickly, the flu seems much more plausible. The flowers? My guess at first was that creeper, James, from the coffee shop. But now, I'm thinking it's Jake, since Bella's truck is back. Great, I knew we wouldn't see the last of him yet *angry pout*... I'm guess this is the beginning of that bumpy road you were telling me about? Grrrrrreat.....
Author's Response: Yeah, just the flu, and Aunt Flo from Redlands making an appearance. The flowers...there is a lot of speculation regarding them in the reviews for this chapter. We shall see...
Seatbelts on? Not too bumpy, hopefully...hm...
Thanks for the review. I'll post tomorrow or Tuesday.
-bannerday
Reviewer: tinaconnor (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 50: In Sickness and in WHAT?!
since you asked about reviews, I have to admit that I found this story over on Fanfic and it is complete so I cheated and read it there. But I am still looking for updates here since you said that you were making some changes. So still loving the story and the smut, there can never be too much smut.
Author's Response: Hi tina
The fanfic version was my starter kit. This is an expanded, better version with additional storylines and it will go beyond the version over on fan fic. I'm updating that version with chapters from this version, so eventually it will be the same. I just hated to delete the fan fic version in case people were reading that one---i didn't want it to abruptly disappear for them.
Thanks for the love. I'm glad you are continuing to read this version here.
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: Luvtwilight14 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 50: In Sickness and in WHAT?!
Boy, I commend you on your fabulous quick updating!! Great chapter as well. Now we have two mysteries brewing...the ratty old flowers and her truck and possibly Jake being there. Why would he come there? I love Jake's character and I hate it when he is being bad in fanfiction so go easy on him. (Don't make him look like too big of a monster like some do.) I cant wait till next update to find out!!!
Hugs, Stephanie
Author's Response: Hi Stephanie!
I spend my weekends now, pretty much planted in front of the computer all day, writing, editing, reading and writing replies to reviews. I'm totally obsessed. Glad you liked the chapter. Yup we've got some mysteries and turmoil a-brewing. Don't worry your little head, Steph...have I ever done anything terrible before??? You know you can trust me. I think. ;)
I hope to update tomorrow or Tuesday. I'm anxious to hear what you think. Keep in touch. Hugs to you to.
-bannerday
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 6: Starting to Squirm
Oh what can they play to get rid of Mike?
Author's Response: Mike is his own worst enemy and he doesn't even know it. ;) Just wait until Mike hits the dancefloor.
-bannerday
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 5: Reorganizing
Damit Jake. Stay put
Author's Response: His full name is Jerkob. Or maybe it's Jakeass. ;)
-bannerday
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 4: Ground Rules
Oh how can she get away from crazy ass Victoria. I am also who happened to Edward to turn him off the relationships
Author's Response: Stay tuned, it'll get figured out. And stay tuned, Edward will explain when he's ready.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
-bannerday
Reviewer: girlygirl0706 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 50: In Sickness and in WHAT?!
Did those flowers come from James??????????? or Jake??????????????. Thanks for the update can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Well, girlygirl, that's the big question. And the big debate, if you look at the other reviews. I will update tomorrow or Tuesday so we can find out why the hell the truck is there and where those flowers came from.
Thanks for the review.
-bannerday
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 2: Settling Down, Settling In
Edward running and sweaty, yummy
Author's Response: Yep, I'd pretty much lick that! ;)
Thanks for the review and the reminder of that loveliness.
-bannerday
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 50: In Sickness and in WHAT?!
AWWWW, he is so sweet...and I'm with Alice, he definitely earned EXTRA bonus points for buying Bella tampons. I've been married for 26 years and my hubby still wont buy me feminine products.....lol
Author's Response: He is such a good caretaker, isn't he? And a protector. God, I love that fictional boy!
My hubs and I have been married for 25 years this December. I think he bought me pads after the birth of our first child. I think it was his way of going all out and thanking me for giving him a son. LOL
Thanks for the giggle. And the review.
-bannerday
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