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Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 43: Miles of Aisles

condoms better be safe than sorry guys  maybe a varity box to try them on for size what size does bella think he might need xxl she needs to buy a very big box  that will shut emmett for a while huh



Author's Response:

I don't think they'll be neding the variety box, Bella has already said she's good to go, and size-wise, if she did want to use them, she's already checked out the anaconda. Apparently E's got good genes in his jeans. ;) But yeah, she should pick up large box of Magnums while Emmett is paying attention. That might shut his man-child down for a little while. ;)

-bannerday

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 42: Cleanliness is Next to Ohmygodliness

better you made it back to honoranle mention again   but i am reading this to my man here and he said to tell you enough already something about blue balls



Author's Response:

I just think there are all kinds of fun things to discover when you are beginning a sexual relationship. And I don't think every experience has to be about that one particular deed. We'll get there. it's not all that drawn out. Bella is a somewhat hesitant girl and Edward is letting her call the plays. ;) Besides...the boy went three years, he can go one more week with those indigo balls.

-bannerday

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 42: Cleanliness is Next to Ohmygodliness

Please real sex not just a hand job I dying over here



Author's Response:

We'll get there when we get there. ;) It'll be worth the wait. Edward's got to organize the Grand Gesture. Remember Date Night? That's our boy!

-bannerday

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 39: Let the Fun Begin

emphisis on some that was actually quite romantic  but your not out of the dog houes till the snake is really set loose  omg did I actually say thay



Author's Response:

Okay, so you didn't care for the "some" that Edward got. But the snake is going to stay in its place and store up some venom for the eventual event. ;)

-bannerday

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 36: Past Tense

i wont breath until he picks her up at 5  so now next chapter you better redeme your ass you promised 



Author's Response:

Ooops! So now you know that the 5 o'clock pick up didn't go all that well and we wound up with a clam in the front seat of the car in the place of a talkative Edward. *sigh*

-bannerday

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 35: Highs and Lows

still mad at you but the holding and I love you helped  



Author's Response:

Edward wasn't too happy about having his date night interrupted by the Dogboy either. But the holding during the night and the I love yous on the phone helped him to deal with it too.

-bannerday

Reviewer: lizzy49 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 52: The Gamut of Emotions

*speechless* WOW

Reviewer: lizzy49 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 52: The Gamut of Emotions

*speechless* WOW



Author's Response:

Not sure how to respond ;) I guess that makes me speechless to.

-bannerday

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 33: Rocking Her World

domt tease me now I am starting to drool



Author's Response:

Sorry...this story is all about the tease. Hell, we all read the entire Twilight series because of the tease! Four books and all we got was feathers and a bashed headboard??? I'll do us better when we get there. ;)

-bannerday

Reviewer: Yrollam (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 52: The Gamut of Emotions

update now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! argh I LOVE JAMES LOL

Author's Response:

I've updated, Mal! 

Seriously...you love James? Or is it the turmoil that he causes? Or is it Cam??? Because that boy is hot and those washboard abs...yum yum.

-bannerday

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 39: Let the Fun Begin

well he really didn't get some per say it was the thought of getting some and a little finger action for bella...thank god there back together!!!!!



Author's Response:

He already had his turn...and we're taking baby steps, but they're heading in the right direction. Besides, do we want them to miss any of the wonders of sex together? There are just so many fun things to do..... ;)

-bannerday

Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 33: Rocking Her World

I absolutely loved it....the whole fake proposal thing was hysterical.



Author's Response:

Edward---so very good at the Grand Gesture. Keep that in mind, Rayday! There's a first time coming up on Saturday night. ;)

-bannerday

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 38: Say It...Out Loud

I'm sure he smells just like heaven!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I would sooooo sniff that. And lick that, yes I would lick and lick and lick that. Shit, I'd consume and inhale that boy. ;)

-bannerday

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 37: Present Tense

Please so close and now so far away I fuckin hate jacob black!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Why doesn't Edward just open his mouth and say something????? A crumbling Edward just makes us hate Jake all the more.

-bannerday

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 36: Past Tense

I love the jammies  nothing else jacob sucks as ususal sorry about billy



Author's Response:

Jacob, always screwing things up for Edward. He'll stop eventually. Edward in jammies. Just yumy!

-bannerday

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 28: Weekend Plans

new love isnt it just wonderful    I know they both want to tke it slow i just want them to be together I hope it happens naturally slow sof kisses warm touches they both need a wondeful memory of being at peace and well loved



Author's Response:

I just love the bumbling, stumbling, experimental stage of a new love. We all know exactly what it feels like...the butterflies and uncertainty...the blushes, the touches. They are taking it slowly...although it will seem like it is taking a while, but that's because I'm such a wordy bitch and I describe everything.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 1: Putting the Move On

Poor Edward... rough day huh???



Author's Response:

I'm sorry it has taken me so long to respond. I've been swamped. i had to laugh when I read your review for chapter 1. it sums things up so well and so concisely. ;)

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 35: Highs and Lows

AAAAAHHHH!!!!!



Author's Response:

I know I have really put you through hell in some of these chapters. I'd like to recommend some blood pressure medicine. ;)

-bannerday

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 26: Points of View

poor sad boy meets beautiful girl they meet they find they have thing in common and they have a cheeering section  they meet they touch they kiss they, what I anxious to hear more about that snake they say he keeps in his pants   i am  all about animal right here need to let the snake  loose this story is so much fun to read i am having the best time here teasing you    



Author's Response:

So now you know that poor sad boy meets beautiful girl, they find they have things in common and before long, poor sad boy becomes sexily confident giggling, happy boy and beautiful girl realizes she's never experienced anything quite like what she has with the bronze-haired boy. Animal rights activists, keep your pants on...there will be a chapter or two where Edward will keep his pants off. So the anaconda will be freed. Funny...but when we get there, E & B will use a different term, not knowing Mike's term for E's peen.

-bannerday

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 34: A Change in Plans

You know fucking Jake and this cock blocking shit!!!!!!! I wanted Edward SEX NOT fuckin crying about the fuckin asshole!!!!!!!!I have no Jake sympathy!!!!!



Author's Response:

Jake is always in the way, isn't he? It won't happen again though. He's got a new focus. ;)

-bannerday

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 25: Everybody and His Brother

well every one in the whole university thinks they have done the deed   please please dont let them down hehe



Author's Response:

You kind of wonder just how many people Jessica texted/called on the night of the shower kiss. and Mike Newton...is there anything scarier than knowing that he has somehow observed E's peen?

-bannerday

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 33: Rocking Her World

HOLY SHIT MY THOUGHTS EXCATLY!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Edward puts on a good first date. imagine their first time...when they get there. it's only a few chapters away now. ;)

-bannerday

Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 31: Expect the Unexpected

James is a creep...I'm glad Alice got Bella away when she did.

Edward is going crazy over the 'stuff'...I can't wait for him to have the chance to check out Bella on their date.



Author's Response:

And now you know that James refuses to just go away. Alice may be petite, but she's not afraid of anything...and we already know just how well she can boss Edward around. Edward and his "inner stuff" "outer stuff" musings. It's enough to give a boy a stroke. ;)

-bannerday

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 32: Rocking His World

HOT DAMN!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

So I'm guessing you liked Edward's reaction to Bella's Miss Fire Bomb Dress? ;) I believe the term is "struck dumb"

-bannerday

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 31: Expect the Unexpected

OMG I fuckin love it!!!!!!!

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