Oh how I hate that James! Dude is so freaking delusional. I really want Edward to beat the crap out of him (I think it would be hot), but I realize that it's better for everyone if Edward doesn't get arrested for assault and battery.

Author's Response:

Hi zim!

James is gross and he's got a screw loose. Totally delusional. I think it would be really rewarding for Edward to get the chance to beat the crap out of James. We just don't want our boy to get in trouble with the law.

Thanks for reviewing.

-bannerday

Well, for all your hard work on writing and rewriting...I think it was FABULOUS!!

I cannot believe that idiot followed her to class...
And Alice...How I adore Alice...
The letter from Esme was just too sweet...

Loved it! Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response:

Hi liz!

Thanks for the kind words. I got a lot of really positive feedback regarding creepy James, so all my writing and re-writing was totally worth it. I adore Alice too. She's such a cool friend and twin for Edward to have. You know she must really drive him nuts sometimes, but then again, they havd such a close bond, he can't really get too upset. Then again...she could learn to knock. hahahaha It WAS her own room. Edward.

Thanks for the review and the love. Chapter 55 is up now. Let me know what you think of that one. I can't decide.

-bannerday

I don't think Bella's words regardless to what they are will get through to James. He's just that crazy. I know it's a good idea for them to go to the campus police, I just don't think they will do anything yet. Doesn't he have to actually do something to her to get something issued against James.

I can only imagine what the rest of the gang will do when they find out. Will Bella and Edward tell Charlie when they go to Forks? Charlie is most definitely going to blow a gasket when he finds out.

Great chapter...I can't wait to find out what is going to happen next.

Great Story.

Author's Response:

Hi Rayday!

Most stalkers are out of touch with reality, so I think you're right. Bella's words probably won't do the job. But she gets good counseling from the police in chapter 55. I did research the stalking laws in Washington...well, actually Edward did the research, then he passed on to me what he had found out.

The gang does get involved when they find out, but not how you would probably have imagined. ;) And yes...Bella will be telling Charlie. He won't be happy, and you can bet he'll be in contact with the U-Dub police to make sure everything is being handled.

Glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for the kind words.

-bannerday

Banner~ Loving the story!  As Always!  I had a really hard time writing the last couple of chapters of my book too!  Maybe it is in the water???!!???  I love that Edward is so protective of Bella.  James does make a great assbag character!  Keep up the great work love it!

TAT~

Author's Response:

Hi TAT!

Thanks for the Storylove once again. This last week was even worse than the one before. I couldn't get started on chapter 55, had jury duty for three days, was trying to stay on top of work at the same time...couldn't find a spare moment to think straight until the weekend. I had a marathon and wrote 55. What a relief. I set these unrealistic goals for myself...but somehow everything works out. ;)  I guess sometimes chapters and life are like that. Hope you're flying along on your story again. :) Take care.

Thanks for the review and the love.

-bannerday

Eww, James is creepy. I hope he doesn't try to physically hurt Bella. I loved the chapter w/ the hotness between E/B. Can't wait for their weekend away. Is it Sat yet?

Author's Response:

Hi shawnd!

James IS creepy. You noticed. ;) Bella did too. Thanks for the chapterlove! It's always good to throw in a little innovent hotness between the star players. It's building the anticipation for us...and for them! :) Isn't it Saturday yet????????

Thanks for the review. Keep in touch.

-bannerday

Holy shit batman!  That was freakin awesome!!

First of all - ANY time you have Edward and Bella in bed you must know that you'll have our standing attention.  That scene, my friend, was defibulator material - HOT!

Regardless of how hot the scenes are, they are always sweet and tender, somewhat reminiscent of first love.

And then to have that scum bag seated right behind Bella!  James is one messed up headspace.  I don't like him  - please send him away. I'm so glad that Edward is going to report this to security and not take James on himself.  Keeps the kids safe bannderday.

As always, loving this story and waiting for more.  Saturday can't come soon enough or your update for that matter.

Ciao for now.

Author's Response:

Made it this far. I let myself get so far behind! So glad you liked the last chapter. Glad you liked B & E and their bed predicament as well. I really do want this to feel like a first love, but I also want this to feel like it is "The" love, so I'm trying to get that across slowly but surely too, Next chapter finds our kiddies in the Police Department Office. Glad you are still loving this story. More should be here on Monday.

Thanks for the storylove and this review. Keep in touch.

-bannerday

Bannerday,

Thanks for updating! I was getting worried that you would wait until next weekend.

Silly Edward, getting all over protective and then feeling terrible about it. I love that you've made him so impulsive.

James has just the right amount of creepy in his character. SO GOOD!

Thanks again for updating, and please, can the next chapter be Saturday? Please? Poopr Edward needs to get laid. Puh-lease????

Jen

Author's Response:

I think I'm in one-chapter-a-week mode now that I've gone back to work. This chapter took a little bit more time to pull together. I love impulsive, react-first, think-later Edward. Glad you liked the way I wrote the sicko-psycho. I'm sorry to say that it still isn't Saturday...chapter 55 will be up tomorrow, hopefully. then 56 before next weekend---that will be the trip to Forks, then finally 57 will start off their Saturday. Once I get into the high-fifties, the story is nearly over. So I don't want to rush to the end.

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Hi ya girlfriend!  I haven't read it yet, but I SOOOO excited!!  I'm as giddy as a school girl **** with a mini skirt, thigh stockings and a top tied under my boobs****  <====== I wish!

talk to ya in a bit!

 

Author's Response:

Ha! I got to this one at least, tonight. You silly little Catholic schoolgirl, you! I could just see myself in a mini skirt, thigh-hi's and tied boobie-top. It's been decades since I've rocked that look. The only place I could probably get away with wearing that now would be in the insane asylum or in a dark, locked closet.

Soon.

-bannerday

yipee yet another fabulous chapter! iv been waiting rather patiently..... whom i kidding! ive been sat at my laptop..gagging for your update!!

ok that james is an absaloute ball bag!! why didnt bella tell him in a rather ballsey but raunchey way that "little cullen" was rather far from little, and he knew excactly what to do with his rock hard massive dick thankyou very much!!

that would surely piss him off.... wanker!

loved it as always eagerly awaiting the next.. god i carnt wait till saturday!!

Author's Response:

Hi div dev!

Glad you liked that last update. I hope chapter 55 will be up tomorrow morning. It's probably a good thing Bella didn't mention Edward's lovely and massive member---James might have gone after Edward and we don't want him to mess with that fine looking example of young manliness. ;)

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

You wrote James like a full on creep.  Perfect! 

Author's Response:

Glad you liked my version of the creeper.

-bannerday

I like it !!!!!! I love how protective edward is. Post soon please

Author's Response:

Thanks!!! Protectward is a doll, isn't he? We all want one. Chapter 55 should be up tomorrow. Thanks for reviewing.

-bannerday

James is creeeeeepy.  And Edward swoon-worthy!  Just incase you didn't know... :)

You wrote it well.. really loved Esmes letter, very very sweet.  I love seeing them (can you see something in a story??hummmm) fall more and more in love.  Edwards protectiveness over bella is just so.. so... awwww! 
I really hope that you plan of following up this story with a sequel.. i don't know how i will deal when this is over!  Just sayin!

you know the rest..

love, ownage.. etc etc etc

Author's Response:

Hi accsmom! James is a creeper. More darling Edward around the corner. Thanks for the compliments. Glad you loved Esmes' letter. She loves Edward's lovely girl. I'm glad you feel like you can see their relationship grdually deepening.  ;) I'm not sure how I'm going to deal with the loss of this story once it's over. It'll be like losing a friend. Plus I'll miss all of the reader reviews. I do have another story I plan on doing. I've got to wait until this one finishes, I think.

Thanks for the review , love and ownage.

-bannerday