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Reviewer: oneillf4 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 59: As the Stars Align

Have been following this story for awhile and I LOVE IT!!!I look forward to the updates every week..something to read when i am supposed to be in college!!can not wait to see where is has brought her!



Author's Response:

Hi oneillf4!

Thanks so much for the Storylove!!! I'm glad to know you are so hooked on my story. I try to churn out a chapter a week. The last one took me a little longer than I expected, but in the end, I was happy with chapter 60. Hope you continue to enjoy. Keep in touch and thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: rrodriguez (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 59: As the Stars Align

I dying for the neaxt chapter, please give us a estimation of when each chapter may come up. The suspense is painful.



Author's Response:

Hi rrodriguez!

I'm sorry my cockblockage was killing you! I hope you enjoy(ed) chapter 60. I'm behind on my replies, but I'll get there. If you haven't already, let me know what you think of chapter 60 when you read it. I'll try to post the next chapter within a week's time. Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: ladyrip (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 59: As the Stars Align

You are such a TEASE!!!

I have to say, the way you've been blocking us for so long, I was half expecting for Carlisle and/or Esme to come home early. lol So glad they didn't!

I hate to be cliché, but ... UPDATE SOON! hehehe



Author's Response:

I am a tease. For a nanosecond I thought about cockblocking another 40 chapters or so, then I decided I would be lynched, so I thought better of it. So nope, no Esme and Carlisle...they're having their own little romantic tryst at another locale. ;)

Keep in touch. Hope you enjoy(ed) chapter 60. I'm behind in review replies, obviously, but I'll get there this week.

-bannerday

Reviewer: kerrywin (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 59: As the Stars Align

throttle is to good i have spent the last three days reading this story every free min lol.

please this is so good update soon

kerrywin



Author's Response:

Thanks for spending so much time with me and my little (BIG) fic! Glad you are enjoying. Let me know what you think of the next few chapters as the story winds down.

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: btdubsiloveyou (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2010 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 59: As the Stars Align

AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm still catching up on reviews for chapter 59. I'll catch up on chapter 60 reviews this weekend. I love the sound you make when you're hanging onto the edge of the cliffie by your fingernails. ;) Hope you like(d) chapter 60. Let me know. I hope I redeemed myself. ;)

-bannerday

Reviewer: carina2026 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2010 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 58: Part of the Build-Up

Hilarious that you named his new love interest Renesmee.



Author's Response:

I had to do canon love-interests. No one else seemed right...but then,. I couldn't wait for B & E to have a child, so I made her little embarrassing comment a key factor in their conversation. Poor Edward, all that soda down into his lungs. I thought it was entertaining. Glad you enjoyed that.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Amnotkim (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 2: Settling Down, Settling In

I do love Edwards muscular chest! :)



Author's Response:

I'm slow getting to reviews this week. I hope you are continuing to enjoy. There is more of Edward's chest...and ass...and face...and long fingers...and jawporn...and sex-hair...and happy trail...etc. to follow. I hope you are still reading.

Keep in touch.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Tana (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 55: The Waiting Game

Best chapter yet! That was hysterical! I was laughing out loud looking like a crazy person to those around me, but I don't care. :) Alice was the best! That little pixie is super funny!



Author's Response:

Hi Tana!

Thanks so much for your review of chapter 55. I'm glad you are enjoying and that I am able to bring you laughter through my characters and the story they have to tell. I'm relly behind on replies to reviews, but I'm going to make up for it this week. I have the week off, so my life will once again be filled with fanfictiondom!! Yippee!!

Alice is kind of a hoot. I've always loved her character--in most any story. I think most of us have an Alice-like friend and that makes her that much more endearing.

Hope you continue to enjoy. Keep in touch and let me know what you think. Thanks again,

-bannerday

Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 59: As the Stars Align

Gahhhhh!!!! Cliffhanger pls pls update soon!!!!! Cant wait to see Exactly what it is that he planned!!!!!! Great great chapter!!! Your awsome!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hi i!

Still catching up on reviews for chapter 59, even though I've already posted chapter 60. I'll get there. I've got a week off and what better way to spend it than with the fic review friends and fan fics of my choice? And chapter 61, too, of course. Glad you liked chapter 59. I know I left you all hanging by your fingernails...but I didn't want to split chapter 60 and 59 was already sooooo long. ;)

Thanks for the review and compliments. Keep in touch.

-bannerday

Reviewer: TeriAnn (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 59: As the Stars Align

oowww what a cliffie, the sexual tension has been hitting me through the screen, I would be surprised if they didn't spontaneously combust from it all lol... I shall be eagerly awaiting the next chapter. T x



Author's Response:

I hope your fingernails were dug in good and tight for that cliffie. I'm running behind on reviews, so I'll get around to the ones for chapter 60 this weekend. Good to know the sexual tension is so palpable.

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Siren (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 59: As the Stars Align

Just to assure you. I don't feel like throttling you. (Maybe just shake you a little bit) Lol! Loved it and I loved how Edward didn't even think about food but itfit nicely cause then Bella got to show off her mad skills.

Another great chapter of course! Loved it and Love you!!!!

Kate :D



Author's Response:

Hi Kate!

I'll consider myself shaken. ;) Sorry about the cliffie at the end of chapter 59. I hated to leave it there, but I really wanted chapter 60 to be it's own entity. Glad you liked Edward's lack of planning in the food department. Man cannot live on bread alone. But apparently man can do just fine with all kinds of sex and no sustenence. ;) But Bella did get to whip up a lovely dinner to impress Edward. It was the first time she made him a meal. I think that's kind of sexy too. And I'm sure Edward appreciated it. He knows she likes to cook and he got to hear about her making meals for Charlie and also for Jake, when he spent the night at Charlie's...so it's only right that Edward gets to have Bella "feed" him as well. ;)

Thanks for the chapter/authorlove. ;)

-bannerday

Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 59: As the Stars Align

You are killing me here.  I can't wait much longer.  Where the hell are they and what is Bella so "Oh Edward" about? 

btw good chapter.



Author's Response:

I'm still catching up on the reviews for chapter 59. I'll catch up on the reviews for chapter 60 this weekend. I'm glad you liked the last one---sorry about the cliffie. I hope I redeemed myself. ;)

-bannerday

Reviewer: Jessa1326 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 59: As the Stars Align

So I am finally caught up....AND THIS IS WHAT I GET?!?! Hahaha!

I can't wait for the next chapter! I have my theories on where he brought her.



Author's Response:

Hi Jessa!

So all caught up and frustrated...that was the theme for chapter 59 I think. I'm still catching up on reviews from that chapter. I'll catch up on the reviews for chapter 60 this weekend. Hope you like(d) it! I'm curious to know if your theories were right.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Kat N Hat (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 20: The Movie Fades to Black

ok, I take back some of my prev comments, I did laugh out loud at the first part of this chapter.

 

giggly edward and jakeass good combo.



Author's Response:

Glad to know you liked chapter 20 and found the beginning funny. Their relationship is in the baby stages and they are feeling things out as Bella's relationship with Jake winds down. There is a lot more fun coming, though. Hope you continue to enjoy.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Kat N Hat (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 19: This Might Be Working Out

I am going to keep reading, but there is lots of angst going on and not as much of the funny stuff I thought there would be. Emmett giving advice seemed to have lots of potential that just isn't coming out in the story.

 

I guess what I mean is it is a good story, just not living up to the first chapter expectaations I set. I am only half way done though.



Author's Response:

Hi Kat

I'm slow on replying to reviews. I apologize. I like to hear what readers have to say and I like to respond. You took the time, so I will...I'm just slow. ;) Chapter 19 and 20 were the angsty chapters. There have to be a few, every now and then, but rest assured, I really like humor and I have a hard time just doing angst and seriiousness. I hope you find more humor to enjoy as you continue. There's a lot coming. Keep in touch. thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 59: As the Stars Align

Ahhhh, cliff-meanie... just kidding... love the chapter... can't wait for the update... don't leave me hangin' too long :)

My favorite line in this chapter was when Charlie told Edward he looks a bit jumpy... that was too funny!!!



Author's Response:

I know, I was a horrible little author last chapter. I'm still catching up on reviews form chapter 59. Hope you like(d) chapter 60. I'll catch up this weekend. Glad you liked Charlie's line. I had fun writing Charlie. He's so droll and Edward is just so panicky around him. ;) With good reason,. I guess, the man's got guns.

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: renesalecau (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 59: As the Stars Align

OMG!! How could you do this to me. I think you've made a wait long enough!

~Tay



Author's Response:

I know, Tay! Chapter 59 had a rather cruel yet lovely ending. ;) But that just meant that chapter 60 had a lovely beginning...and middle...and end....and then there's chapter 61 coming up soon, because I want to share the EPOV from that eveining...and night...they were busy, I'll tell you that much. ;) Still catching up on reviews, as you can tell., I'll get to the ones from chapter 60 this weekend.

Thanks for the review,

-bannerday

Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 59: As the Stars Align

Damn Girl,

I mean really just leave me hangin'...... well at least you didn't get me to the totally good stuff and the stop right before take off!!!!!!!! hahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!

I will be looking forward to the next two chappies..... then I want to find out about what happens to James!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

No throttling for you, "Fifty" is too busy I checked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!

boink points abound!!!!!!!!!!!!

till next time

Twi-Ho!!!!!!!!!!!

 



Author's Response:

Hi Twi-Ho!

I'm still playing catch up with reviews from chapter 59, so I'll get to the ones from chapter 60 this weekend. Sorry I left you hanging from that cliff. I hope your fingernails were strong and long.

Ooooohhh, I'd take a Fifty throttling, or anything else he wants to float my way...or make me float...or float my boat...or take me on a honeymoon trip on a boat...or anything, really. ;) I think I'm up for it all with that man. *sigh* *shiver*

Thanks for reviewing.

-bannerday

Reviewer: ed1113 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 59: As the Stars Align

cruel,cruel Bannerday.  I am so bedazzled.



Author's Response:

Awwwww! I'm proudly wearing my dazzlosity! Thanks for the review. Hope you enjoy(ed) chapter 60. I'm still playing catch-up with chapter 59.Thanks for taking the time to review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: noni LG (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 59: As the Stars Align

gahhh juz short: please post next chapter... ur killing me! * LOL * ;p



Author's Response:

Hi noni!

Still catching up from chapter 59. Not sure if you've read chapter 60 yet. I'll catch up this weekend. Sorry for the lethal cockblock. :) Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: Kat N Hat (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 1: Putting the Move On

Emmett, advising.... I can hardly wait either.

 

Good start, I am looking forward to catching up.



Author's Response:

Let me know what you think. I hope you enjoy.

-bannerday

Reviewer: ELLC (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 59: As the Stars Align

Hey bannerfay - You my friend, are an evil evil evil woman!  Oh and yes, throttling has crossed my mind!  Really - I need to wait til the next chapter!!??  You are cruel woman - just cruel.

Loved the chapter as usual - Loved Edward's inner inner monologue. 

"The coming evening…

Fuck!

Yes, please.

Damn it! Don't think about it. Don't think about it. Don't think about it. Don't think about IT!" 

You always have me chuckling and shaking my head.

I can't wait to find out where Edward has taken her.  As always, you have me looking forward to more.

See ya next time!



Author's Response:

Hi ELLC!

I'll admit it...I'm evil. I'm sure throttling crossed the minds of many. I'm still catching up on reviews from last chapter. Glad you loved chapter 59 and Edward's inner monolog. There's just so much trash in that boy's head. Such a beautiful head on the outside, such a disaster going on in the inside. ;) I missed Edward in chapter 60. It was pure Bella. I'm not even sure if I ever wrote an all-Bella chapter during this entire chapter...so I miss my boy. He's next.

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: fradycat (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 59: As the Stars Align

Aren't Carlisle and Esme in Vancouver for her birthday gift weekend?  I think Edward just drove around for a while and headed back to the house - hence the blindfold.  Just wondered if anyone else had this thought as to where he took her - his bedroom?  Great story.  Can't wait for next chapter.



Author's Response:

Ooooh, good memory, fradycat! I'm still catching up on reviews from chapter 59. No one else mentioned your theory...don't know if others suspected the same. Glad you are enjoying the story. thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: kmac17 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 59: As the Stars Align

the build up is killing me Post soon please



Author's Response:

Still catching up on reviews from last chapter. Hope you made it long enough to read chapter 60 without me killing you beforehand. ;)

Thanks for reviewing.

-bannerday

Reviewer: mrsgunsage (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 59: As the Stars Align

Woman, you are a TEASE!  An evil genius and fic-goddess... but seriously a TEASE!  So not nice to leave us hanging like that.  :p

 

 



Author's Response:

Still catching up on reviews from last chapter. Yes, I'm a tease, and I kind of like being called a fic-goddess. I know you're no longer hanging, so I'm glad you got some relief.

Thanks

-bannerday

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