Reviewer: Bonnie85 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2013 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 73: Epilogue: Seasons Part ll: Winter Lands
OW MY GOD!!! I feel so, sooooo sad that its over... I LOOOOVED IT! Your storie is absolutely the best fan fic I've ever read.... And believe me, I've read a lot fan fics... Don't you ever think about a part two??? PLEAAAASSSE! Write a part two... I really don't want it to be over :(
Reviewer: michellea71 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2013 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 68: Moving Forward
Omg...the image of a kilt-clad jasper leaning his soft blond head onto big emmett's manly shoulder...almost peed my pants I laughed so hard!
Reviewer: michellea71 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2013 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 67: This Is Not the End, Part 2
I think if Edward were to suddenly and unfortunately meet a hair ripping, cry me an ocean demise...jasper would sooooooo do!
Reviewer: michellea71 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2013 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 64: The Bubble Bursts
Really intense.
Reviewer: michellea71 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2013 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 62: Across the Night Sky
Awwwww....she's his lobster.
Reviewer: michellea71 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2013 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 61: Orbitting Celestial Bodies
Are you an English teacher? I swear...I LOVE YOUR WORK! I teach English to 7th graders, and you are HYSTERICAL!! I like your AH version of these characters better than any others I've read...they are so believable, even down to their idiosyncrasies...
Author's Response: Hi michellea71!
I am not an English teacher--although I did teach freshman English for one year. I teach foreign languages and I really do love language. Thank you for your fabulous reviews. I am so far behind in replying to reviews. I usually do better over on FanFiction getting back to reader/reviewers, so apologies.
Thank you for letting me know how much you love my characters. They feel real to m--like people I went to college with and lived in the dorm with.
I don't know if you've been reading my other story--Fan Fiction, Sex Gods and Single Girls--I can't remember what pennames sound familiar anymore, but if not, you might really get a kick out of that story. I think I really must like getting into the idiosyncrasies of my characters. LOL
Thanks for the LOVE!
-bannerday
Reviewer: michellea71 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2013 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 57: So Near and Yet So Far
Your one-liners are getting me in trouble...I'm pissing my hubby off with all my giggling and plain out loud laughter...
Author's Response: Hi again michellea!
Whoops! Yep, I just took a peak and yes, you have FFSGSG on your list of favorites too. So forget that last (or the next?) review reply. I'm just going crazy.
-bannerday
Reviewer: michellea71 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2013 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 56: Flirting With the Long Arm of the Law
Edward is so cute in his attempts to not piss Charlie off!
Reviewer: michellea71 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 32: Rocking His World
As long as any epilogues don't have them doing an Archie and Edith Bunker rendition of "those were the days" I must say that this was beyond sweet! Love love love Edward's reaction to Bella's look!!
Reviewer: michellea71 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 31: Expect the Unexpected
Your dialogue is absofreakinglutely the funniest, most creative I have ever read!
Reviewer: michellea71 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 26: Points of View
Can't type on this effing iPad, but the Carlisle/Esme conversation with dear Edward was to die for!
Reviewer: michellea71 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 22: Non-date? Nonsense!
Well, if she won't pucker up, I will!
Reviewer: michellea71 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 21: A Black Day For All
Not really. Both of them knew things were not right, and jake showed his maturity when he and Bella agreed to remain friends. Bet he looked hot hot hot in those jeans and t-shirt, though!! And Edward to the rescue? Romantic!
Reviewer: michellea71 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2013 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 12: Just Let Go
You are the master of making us wait for it...in a good way!
Reviewer: michellea71 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2013 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 8: One Step Forward
We need a break up chapter...on the double!
Reviewer: michellea71 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2013 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 5: Reorganizing
Stretching Edward....mouth watering.
Reviewer: michellea71 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2013 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 2: Settling Down, Settling In
Nothing would beat naked, sweaty Edward. N.O.T.H.I.N.G.
Reviewer: michellea71 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2013 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 1: Putting the Move On
You are THE most hysterical writer I've ever read!
Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2013 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 6: Starting to Squirm
Omg bag pipes? That is freaking hilarious!
Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2013 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 2: Settling Down, Settling In
That was good. I think I feel sorry for someone. But don't know who yet... I don't think I want to meet this Victoria, and Jessica seems worse than the original one. This is going to be good.
Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2013 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 1: Putting the Move On
Omg that was so funny! Some one mentioned this story and so here I am. Until you get the next chapter up on FFSGSG this is going to be my next story to come to. Cool.
Reviewer: bookworm- (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2012 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 1: Putting the Move On
Please write more stories like this?! I adored this and now no other fanfics stand a chance against it! :(
Reviewer: LaughingWithEmmett (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2012 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 43: Miles of Aisles
OK, I didn't stop reading yesterday to review - but I stayed up til 1:30 reading. I laughed so hard at the inquisition at the dining hall I almost woke my kids up! Love the story, love your clever writing.... And just about split a gut reading this chapter. The visual of all three guys separately offering condoms to Edward - brilliant!
Reviewer: bookworm- (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2012 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 1: Putting the Move On
I have never, ever read a fanfiction that I have loved as much as yours. It is absoloutely, freaking amazing. Seriously, there were parts that made me laugh out loud, lot's of parts that made me laugh out loud actually; Jasper was especially hilarious. And cry! Yup, I teared up at parts. So, I want to thank you for such a good story, I fell in love with it. On the other hand, I loathe it.. I now can't seem to find another story that measures up! You've ruined all other fanfiction for me and for that I applaude you! :)
Reviewer: sarasue (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2012 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 61: Orbitting Celestial Bodies
I think Roberta would smile I did love this story soo much please keep on writing
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