This was a wonderful story.  A clever handling of mythology, a readable, empathetic writing style, and a great grasp of your characters.  I loved it.  Thank you for sharing :)

I hate for it to end.  this last chapter has made my night.

 

Thank you.

Wow, what an amazing conclusion!! It truly never crossed my mind that they would opt to live amongst mortals. This chapter was immensely heartbreaking but somehow skillfully delivered a HEA. I have loved this fic and its affiliated mythology since the beginning and this was such a fitting ending. Congratulations on completing this unique and amazing story!

Oooooo, what's gonna happen? :]

Keep up the great writing!

Please update soon!

So excited to see an update from you. I absolutely adore this story! Love your use of the mythology--so creative! Looking forward to the next update.

Hey,......last update was in June. You gonna write more for this one? I really, really, really like this story and am missing what comes next.

Good work.

Thanks!

Just wanted to give a quick comment since I wrote a little on Aengus.  This story is so much fun.  They supernatural stuff and the lemony goodness are super!  Can't wait for the updates.  :-)

Sooo happy you updated this!  I would really have enjoyed seeing what Renee had to say in this chapter, though.  Of course, the fact that I'm greedy and impatient might have something to do with that. ;) Anyway, I'm interested to see what Renee says, because it certainly seems like she, Alice and Esme are picking up on the fact that they aren't in Kansas anymore. :)

Starshinedown, you really are a beautiful writer. I just started your stories today, in the early hours of the morning. With the long chapters, it has taken me well over three hours just to reach the end of chapter ten!

    This idea is new and unique. I have never read a story like this one before. I like the idea of Irish-Love-God-Edward. It just makes me smile whenever he reffers to Bella as "My Heart".

    You have really researched for your story. And that shows in your chapters. I love how long they are, and how much information they hold of the Irish Gods. Though, some of it may just be beneficial to your story, it still is nice to learn about the Irish beliefs. Other than Aengus, I have to say that his mother and sister are my favorite characters.

    You plot line is so unique - and I mean that in a good way - and refreshing after reading the same stories with the same ideas. I mean, after reading five stories where Edward is the man-whore and some how Bella comes into his life, and he suddenly feels the need to change his man-whoring ways to please her, become a little boring after a while. While  reading your story, not once did I ever want to stop. I never felt the urge to close the browser as I have with many stories before. When searching for a good story on Twilighted, I always tell myself to read the first chapter before deciding if I want to continue reading it or not. And let me tell you, after reading your one-shot for Jayeliwood's Sexy Eddie Contest, I didn't want to stop reading.

    At times I can be very picky when it comes to stories, but yours, I knew from the very beginning that this would be one of those stories where I would be checking my inbox everyday to see if you've updated.

    Thank you for coming up with such a unique idea. Your story really has me intrigued. I can't wait for more! Update soon, please!

-LovesHisGoldenEyes1901

Great chapter, I love how the story of Aengus was woven in with the Newgrange and I know I would've been just as enthralled as the other tourists if I was there! Plus the little lecture from Renee was priceless. I think there would have to be some sort of magical connection between Bella and her blood relatives since they are so observant, though they may just chalk it up to woman's intuition.

I'm looking to forward to the next chapter and finding out who's been pushing on the wards!

Delightful. Especially liked your Thanksgiving dinner scene, couldn't help giggling. And your characters are spot on.

I love being able to tell all the different myths and legends in a fic for once, it's great!

I am really enjoying your story. I love the combination of fantasy and reality within the realm of mythology. Just thought i'd letya know. thanks

Author's Response:

It's been fun combining fantasy and mythology, I'm happy to hear (read?) that it's translating well. Thank you!