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Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2012 12:13 AM · On: The Resolution

Cute story, totally worth the read. Sad that Edward didn't come clean earlier but I loved the airport scene - especially that it wasn't HEA right away. Oh and the military wife and old woman's story totally rocked.

Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 03:20 AM · On: The Drunk

lol...why wasn't he actually investigating when he started working there?..and Jessica seems too insane for it to be logical.

Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 02:24 AM · On: The Romancing

lol...i like this story, i just wish the pace was slower!!.it's going to be over too soon!

Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2011 04:49 PM · On: The Meeting

Edward is such a pervert!!

Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2011 04:39 PM · On: The Assignment

Im all you for this! Im loving Seth!!

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 06:41 AM · On: The Resolution

This was very different from anything I expected - but it was much better than anything I could have imagined :-) The old lady on the plane made all the difference, she reminded me of my grandmother...

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 06:18 AM · On: The Tribulation

I thought Mike was the biggest asshole in your story, but then, along comes James. Now I don't know which one I should hate more.

This story is amazing, and I can't wait to read (right now, of course) how you will tie up all loose ends in only one chapter. Thanks for sharing this!

Reviewer: whereru (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 09:08 AM · On: The Assignment

Reviewer: bryav (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 10:03 AM · On: The Meeting

Hey!  I just wanted to offer some unsolicited advice.  Your plot is fantastic and your character interactions are believable and interesting.  I just wanted to ask you to please reconsider the "Jesus Fucking Christ" bit.  That kind of phrasing is like a stab in the heart to someone who loves him.  I get the whole freedom of expression thing, I was just hoping that maybe you would care if you knew that some of your words hurt.  

Author's Response:

I'm sorry that your feelings were hurt but it's just words to me. I'm not a very religious person so I'm not aware of the hurt those words can cause. Again I'm sorry but it's just the way I am and that is why I have rated this story R for language. The phrase may come up again in one of my other stories which will be rated R so I'll just give you that warning. Sorry.

Reviewer: amylily123 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 07:21 AM · On: The Resolution

You made me cry. Curse you!!!!

You're so good at this. I'm gonna cry again.

Reviewer: FearlessNot (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 04:55 AM · On: The Resolution

Thank you for a cute/wonderful story.  Glad I found it.

Nice ending.

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 04:47 AM · On: The Resolution

Oh honey those two went a long way didn't they...I loved that they eventually worked thru it all and in the end they stayed together...I was thrilled! It sounds like thier lives on on a more stable path and I couldn't be more thrilled! I adored it...I hope to be able to read your newest excited...

Have a fabulous time in Florida and please drink a butter beer for me to ;)

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 04:11 AM · On: The Tribulation it really that close to being over? I have enjoyed this lil story so much but...wait?!? Did you say Cowboyward! HOLY FREAKIN HALE! I'm there baby...

Reviewer: gabys (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 03:39 AM · On: The Resolution

Loved the story.... thanks for sharing it.

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 01:07 AM · On: The Resolution

At least Edward redeemed himself. Love the end and how Bella didn't forgive him right away.

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 01:36 AM · On: The Tribulation

Oh shit on a stick!

Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 10:43 AM · On: The Tribulation

Oh. Not good! Hope Bella understands! Really good story!

Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 04:27 AM · On: The Tribulation

only one? they better end up together.. edward could lie... when found out say he was investigating Newton as a cheater....

Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 10:29 PM · On: The Tribulation

Thanks for updating. As much as I love the story - Edward has to be honest!

Reviewer: pie2moon2 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 06:37 PM · On: The Assignment

never say never 

Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 04:59 PM · On: The Need

I like it! Just read it all today! Cool story!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 05:55 PM · On: The Need


Reviewer: brown0520 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 11:03 AM · On: The Need

awww cute chapter!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 06:24 AM · On: The Need

I love Creepo-ward! It did get a little hot at the end. ::cue the porn music:: lol

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 02:38 AM · On: The Need

*Woot! Woot!* Well that was one hell of a weekend for them...and it was scortching hot! I feel for Edward's predicament and I hope he confesses to Bella before Jessica gets to her...hmmm

I can't wait to see how Edward gets his proof...

Mike is a dick and I hope he gets is butt kicked!

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