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Reviewer: ELF (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 11:11 AM · On: A Human Counterpart
wow that was amazing, your writing puts me right in the story with them its petrifying. brilliant chapter cant wait for your next update! im loving both your stories
Reviewer: CarliCullen1995 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 10:21 AM · On: A Human Counterpart
Edward is sooo sick. Worse than sick. He takes sick to a whole new level. At the very end of the chapter, I swear I was about to throw up. The way you write is so graphic, I really feel like I'm there. Can't wait to find out what Bella's plan is!
UPDATE!!!
Reviewer: edwardishandsomelvr (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 07:26 AM · On: A Human Counterpart
yuk its discusting but i want to read more
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 01:50 AM · On: A Human Counterpart
Oh yuck. Ew. Horrid. Gagging here. Oh my word. You really went there with that last bit. *shudder* Very Hannibal Lechter of you.
Okay. The chess game was nice. Mean of Edward to "play with his food" that way but yeah. And letting Angela "out." Eric was too freaked out to negotiate -- like it would have mattered -- and so she was out of the game.
Brava to Bella for having the presence of mind to attempt a negotiation. From reading your prologue, I have hope. Thank you so much for that. For that knowledge in all of this that she does get out and is able to talk to someone, anyway. Even if, in the end, they put her in a looney bin, at least she will make her case.
I am loving this story, creepy as it is. You write great suspense.
Reviewer: louisianagirl900 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 07:04 PM · On: A Human Counterpart
OMG! That was demented goodness...
Obviously, your Edward isn't going to fall for Bella and turn over a new leaf.
I'm totally rooting for Bella to give him his due.
Reviewer: louisianagirl900 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 07:03 PM · On: A Human Counterpart
OMG! That was demented goodness...
Obviously, your Edward isn't going to fall for Bella and turn over a new leaf.
I'm totally rooting for Bella to give him his due.
Reviewer: dancer15 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 06:54 PM · On: A Human Counterpart
This story is so twisted and wrong and thats why its amazing haha. I can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: m7707 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 06:03 PM · On: A Human Counterpart
Wow, shades of Hannibal Lecter - nice! Great job on the Edward-crazies - talking to himself in the library. This is a good old-fashioned horror story, and I'm really enjoying so far!
Author's Response: Yes, definitely shades of Hannibal going on here. I'm thrilled that you're enjoying it!
♥ Raggdoll
Reviewer: rmcrms5 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 05:28 PM · On: A Human Counterpart
that's just really gross! I do wonder at Bella's plan to escape
Author's Response: Her plan is in the next chapter. Two more and then the story is finished... aside from the outtakes. =)
Thanks for reading!
♥ Raggdoll
Reviewer: salesgirlone (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 06:41 AM · On: The Hunter
I love your dark edward!!! I check every day to see if you have updated both!!! CAN't WAIT!!!!
Reviewer: nbpowlk (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 04:05 AM · On: The Hunter
i am so anxious for the next chapter to get posted. i wanna know what happens! please post it soon! this story is too good to discontinue =)
Reviewer: ddot (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 02:07 PM · On: The Hunter
dude where's an update
i read the last chapter again, and i'm all riled up ..AGAIN lol
we need an update! lol pwetty please?? *puppy dog stare* where'd you go? :(
Reviewer: Mizzbesserwisser (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2010 11:31 AM · On: The Hunter
wow I love it! Please update, your story is so so so good!
Reviewer: hellyea (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2010 02:25 PM · On: The Start of Something Horrifying
i love the title "Lions Eats Lamb"
both of your story are my fav! can't wait for more
update please!
you rock!
Reviewer: jillangel (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 07:44 AM · On: The Hunter
Awesome, one of the most different stories I have read, I find after a while they are all the same, but this one is definetly diffrent, and I love it! I hope you update soon!
Reviewer: jillangel (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 07:24 AM · On: The Bloody Remains
Creepy Edward!!!!
Reviewer: jillangel (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 07:10 AM · On: Big Fish, Little Fish
Ohhhh scary!!!! I like it!
Reviewer: jillangel (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 07:02 AM · On: The Start of Something Horrifying
INteresting....
Reviewer: Loves to read (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 10:01 PM · On: The Hunter
Edward's explination was cut short, by the er, frightfest that ensued. Is
Emmett's ability, or lack thereof, a silent mind?? : ) I loved this chapter!
Jeannie
Reviewer: Loves to read (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 08:21 PM · On: The Bloody Remains
Ok, another nail biting chapter! Well, He is a charming host. lol
Why does he find her unuque? Is it because she's attracted to him,
where as most people are instantly afraid? The suspense is killing me!
As ever, I am loving your style! : ) Jeannie
Reviewer: Loves to read (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 07:24 PM · On: Big Fish, Little Fish
I absolutely love the way this story is progressing, and the double intendres!
I noticed that you don't always finish your stories, I hope that isn't the case here, as I'm intrigued by your style, and hope to continue through. You really have a unique writing style. Jeannie
Reviewer: Loves to read (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 06:48 PM · On: The Start of Something Horrifying
This is twisted,and exciting! I love your writing style! I hope you update often, as I haven't read anything this exciting, and will be all over this story. You rock! Jeannie
Reviewer: nbpowlk (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 12:28 AM · On: The Hunter
wow! this story is amazing good job
Reviewer: speedelee (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2010 10:35 PM · On: The Hunter
Just started this fic tonight, and although I know Bella makes it out of the woods alive, my heart was pounding as Edward filled her in on what he is and what he has planned.
Great story so far. I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: ddot (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 09:48 PM · On: The Start of Something Horrifying
YAY A GOOD OL' FASHIONED HORROR FIC
THIS IS SCARY! great job on the writing...i just have a couple questions so that i understand better.
Edward's face changes? how? like the vampires on Vampire Diaries? and does he have fangs like them(VD)..or like true blood? this is all just so i can properly see the visual lol.
lol is it twisted that when I read the end I found myself laughing along with Edward, and whispering "run bella, run my little pet" hahahaha i love a good ol' fashioned bad guy. LET THE CHASE BEGIN!!!
Author's Response: Hey ddot! =)
YAY HORROR FICS! FTW! I don't think there are enough in this fandom, lol. There really needs to be more.
Anyways, to answer the couple of questions you have, I was kinda leaving Edward's face up to the imagination of the readers, but I picture it as the vampires from Van Helsing. Have you seen that movie? Their face changes into something quite monstrous. He can control how hideous he allows himself to become during the change (ie: half contorted or full contorted or somewhere in between those, etc). So it's never just regular guy to "straight up" demon.
I haven't seen TB but I watched a few episodes of VD, so I think I could compare his fangs similar to that of those in VD, perhaps slightly longer. They are also retractable, so to speak.
And don't worry about laughing along with Edward...I do it, too. lol
Thanks for reading and leaving some feedback!
♥
Raggdoll
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