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Reviewer: Luiza (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 18
Good chapter! Looking forward to read what happens next!!
Author's Response: Thank you very, very much! I'm so happy to know you're looking forward to more!
Reviewer: Luiza (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 17
I think the phone call was surprising, I didn't see it coming. I'm sad for Bella that she has to keep being haunted by Jacob, hope it ends up soon.
Reviewer: Luiza (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 16
Loved Edward going all vamp over Bill!
Author's Response: Haha, so glad you enjoyed it! Edward is very protective of Bella :-)
Reviewer: Luiza (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 15
This chapter is an improvement of the previous in the doubled point of view matter. It went on really well, not a bit tiresome.
Author's Response: I'm very glad to hear that! As I mentioned, I've been working on improving that problem so it's very nice to know I'm getting better. Thank you!
Reviewer: Luiza (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 14
I don't know how it works in your country, but in mine, when rapists are arrested, they tend to endure the same fate as their victims in jail. I can't help but feel like that happening with Jacob would just be fair enough.
Author's Response: The problem is that Jacob is a werewolf and so he wouldn't be able to be caught by the police and locked up. But he definitely would deserve it.
Reviewer: Luiza (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 13
The doubled point of view is a bit tiresome, but I like reading Edwards thoughts anyway.
Author's Response: Yes, I realize that showing both POVs has its disadvantages. The reason I did it this way is because with this kind of sensitive subject I feel it is important to show how both of them are feeling. BUT I have been working on improving this problem of repetition and you should find improvement starting with chapter 15. I'm glad you liked to hear Edward's POV though. Once again thanks so much for all your reviews!
Reviewer: Luiza (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 12
This shower sequence was touching, I enjoyed it very much.
Author's Response: That makes me so happy to hear! It was an important scene to me.
Reviewer: Luiza (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 11
Very good chapter.
Author's Response: Many, many thanks!
Reviewer: Luiza (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 10
Like Edward's point of view the best.
Author's Response: Good to know! Thanks!
Reviewer: Luiza (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 9
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Luiza (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 8
That's horrible, Jacob appearing like that and Edward being away, stupid Ed!
I hope he rescues her soon enough.
Author's Response: Yes, Edward made a HUGE mistake by leaving her. But you can bet he won't be making the same mistake again.
Reviewer: Luiza (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 7
Jake calling to threaten her was awful. I hope he'll get locked up for good, sure Charlie won't get it lightly when he finds out...
Author's Response: Yes, Jacob is VERY horrible in this story. But don't worry you will eventually see him pay.
Reviewer: Luiza (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 6
Edward's concern for Bella is so touching!
Author's Response: So glad to hear it! :-)
Thanks sooo much for reviewing chapters as you read. I absolutely LOVE it! You are awesome! I hope you continue to enjoy the rest of the story. *HUGS*
Reviewer: Luiza (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 5
Poor Bella...
Reviewer: Luiza (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 11:30 PM · On: Chapter 4
Depressing, but real good.
Looking forward to read what happens next.
Reviewer: Luiza (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 3
Wow, things got tense! Very good writing,by the way.
Author's Response: Yes, things went bad pretty quickly. Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Luiza (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 2
Loved the fluffy moments.
Author's Response: Thanks :-)
Reviewer: Luiza (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 1
Real interesting. Going to chapter 2!
Author's Response: So glad to get you interested :-)
Reviewer: robert cullen (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 18
Did Jacob get the balls to kill someone? Who was it???
Author's Response: Lol, let's hope not. I don't want to say anything to spoil the story. But thanks for your review and awesome rating! :-)
Reviewer: Kristal_Victoria (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 18
Excellent! Keeps getting better and better! :)
Author's Response: SO wonderful to hear! Many thanks!
Reviewer: yayi2284 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 11
listen you repeat too much stuff we dont need EVERYTHING in both thier povs
Author's Response: I realize that this chapter is particularly repetitive, but I think you will see improvement as the story progresses. In the later chapters everything is not shown from both POVs.
Reviewer: Nano Annis (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2010 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 18
I haven't been able to review for the past few chapters, but I've caught up on the story now and I just wanted you to know that I still think a lot of your work. This is a hard story to read (and I'd imagine write), but you handle it all with feeling and sensitivity. My heart breaks for Bella, but she is so lucky to have the support of the Cullens and Charlie - your Edward is one of the most selfless and amazing I have ever read about! Keep up the good work! x
Author's Response: Many thanks for reviewing now! It's so nice to hear from you! I'm so happy you're still reading!
Your kind words mean a lot to me. Yes, I know it can be hard to read. It is a sensitive subject, and you're right that it is also difficult to write at times. But there is also much hope and happiness. The main theme is 'the healing power of love' and I'd like to show how Bella can get through everything with those that love her. You're right that Bella is very lucky with the support she has. Most victims are not as lucky. Aww, thanks so much for your compliment on Edward! It makes me very happy to hear! Thanks again for your wonderful review!
Reviewer: veer (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 18
WOW great chapter! Your writing gets better and better. I really liked what you did with the POVs. You also did a great job describing how Bella tells Edward everything, i loved that part. I also loved the idea of the hiking trip, but i really doubt if that still continues...
About what Jasper and Alice told Edward, well, i have no idea. Maybe Jacob is still watching Bella somehow? Or it has something to do with the hiking trip / school? Please, don't let us wait to long!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! That makes me very happy to hear! I'm so glad you loved the idea of the hiking trip. Thanks for your guesses. I won't say anything to spoil the story :-)
I'll do my best not to take too long to update. Many, many thanks for your review!
Reviewer: babyboo (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 18
Yeah!!! Awesome chapter!!! Keep going , things are starting to happen. Can't wait to see what happens next!!
Love It!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Yep, there's lots of stuff going on now! I'm so happy you're enjoying and looking forward to more! Thanks so much for your review!
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 18
i think you are writing bella and edward's pain and suffering very well. i am so glad she has told edward everything because they will be so much stronger and better for it. so how did jake know and is that what edward doesn't know how to tell bella or is it that everybody knows somehow what happened? can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! it really means a lot to me! Yes, Bella needed to talk to him about it or they would never be able to move forward. He he, you'll have to wait and see :-) SO glad you're looking forward to more! Many thanks for your review!
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