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I just hope that the pack and the cullens aren't too far behind!

 

This was a great chapter!!!! I loved it!!! As for your video trailer, it was very creative. just a little on the choppy side though.

Author's Response:

You'll see what happens in the next chapter! :-)

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Hmm, thanks for your comment on the video, I'll work to improve that next time I make a video. 

Thanks so much for reviewing! 

So glad you updated and now I'm on the edge of my seat!  You really had me at the 2nd nightmare...GREAT update!

teddi

Author's Response:

I'm so happy to hear it! Ha ha, glad I fooled you. But of course I could never really kill off Edward! I could never write anything without a happy ending. Thanks so much for your review! 

God, that was reaaally amazing. I'm checking this side every day for updates. ;)

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! You totally just made my day! I'm so happy you're enjoying! The next chapter is now awaiting validation, so hopefully it will be up soon! 

Yep, it's official: it gives you a great pleasure to "cliff" us.

Author's Response:

Ha ha, no, I just like to keep you wanting to read more, and I'm trying to build suspense as I work my way to the climax. After that there won't really be any major cliffies :-)

Thanks for reading and reviewing! 

Nice chapter! A really stunning moment in the bathroom. And i can't wait to see what Renee write in her e-mail.
But i have just a tiny question for you; Would you write a bit more Edward/Bella interaction in the next chapter? These are the parts that i love the most about your story, and i mist them a little in this chapter.
Keep up the good work! Love, Vera

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Ah, yes, I missed the Edward/Bella interactions in this chapter as well. That was also part of the reason it took me longer to write this chapter. It takes me so much longer to write the stuff that's not Edward/Bella moments. The E/B interactions are by far my favorite as well. However, the other stuff is necessary because otherwise the story would have no substance. It needs to be well-rounded for the story to make sense. BUT, have no fear. Once Jacob is out of the picture for good (which will be happening VERY soon), it's going to be all about the E/B interactions. So just bear with me until then :-)

Thank you SOO much for taking the time to review and tell me your concerns. It is MUCH appreciated! 

i love it

Author's Response:

I'm so happy to hear it! Thanks so much for reviewing! 

I thought the way you wrote Alice was aboslutey brilliant in this chapter, she made me laugh so much!!

 I'm so looking forward to seeing what the Cullens do to Jacob when they get their hands on him!

 This is such a good story!!! :}

Author's Response:

Thank you so very much! I'm so happy you enjoyed it! I hope you realize how much your lovely reviews mean to me! :-)

I love this story! I happen to stumble by it and decided to give it a whirl. I’m so glad I did you have done an amazing job and I can't wait till the next chapter. ^_~

Author's Response:

Well, thanks so much for giving it a chance. I know it's not exactly the easiest subject to read. But I'm so very happy you're really enjoying it! And thank you sooo much for ALL of your reviews! :-)