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Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2010 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 6

Part of me wants Edward to see more of the injuries she sustained by Jacob. I hope he finds out soon, and I hope that Bella doesn't try to go along with Jacob's demands when he does call her.

Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2010 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 5

Will Edward put it together? Will Bella talk about the incident in her sleep?

Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2010 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 4

Bella really needs to tell Edward and Charlie what happened. I don't think that the pack would seriously follow Jacob's directive, especially after they find out what he did to Bella.

You have a really good story here.

Reviewer: Blkjklady21 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2010 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 23

I just found this story and started to read this at about 1:30 am and it's now 7:43 am.  I was so taken into the story that I had to read it all the way through.  You are a great writer and cannot wait for the rest of the story.  Please keep it going, though I know that you are busy with school, it would be a shame if you couldn't finish it.  Lots of luck with both of your projects.

Author's Response:

Really? Wow! What a lovely compliment! You made my week! Thank you! 

Reviewer: miasmiclouds (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2010 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 23

Just once I wish I could read something where the wolves get what they deserve for their rigid, hippocritical beliefs.  But, I glad to see your story up and running again.

Author's Response:

Ha, ha, I know what you mean. You will get some more insight into the wolves behavior in the next chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: rivruskende (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 23

I am glad your're back! Good chapter.

Author's Response:

Glad to see you're still reading! Thank you!

Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 23


Reviewer: karenbush2007 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

I have a story on,its called Edward and Me. please read it and let me know what u think of it!?

Author's Response:

Sure! I'd love to take a look at it! 

Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 21

Wow! Can you imagine how powerful of a vampire and the ability Renee would have and Charlie?!?

Author's Response:

Hmm, yes, that would be interesting...especially Renee.

Thank you for your reviews and lovely ratings! :-)

Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 20


Reviewer: RedDragonTattoo (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 16

Love, LOVE this story.

Author's Response:

Aww, thank you so much! It means a lot! I hope you continue to enjoy! :-)

Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 20


Reviewer: lpeaz814 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 23

glad to see this story up and running again! I don't see how renee couldn't find out about vamps if she lives in the cullen house. Looking forward to another update soon

Author's Response:

Well, I'm glad you're still reading! Hmm, yes, it will be interesting with Renee living in the Cullen house, but I think it's possible for them to still keep the secret, but we shall see. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 19


Reviewer: vickid (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 23

The chapter was well worth the wait. I think E's POV will be very insightful as well. Good luck in RL.

Author's Response:

Aww, thank you. It means a lot! 

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 23

Wow, what a ride! Great chapter, very realistic, I was wondering when they'd finally talk about it, and no one is really okay yet, but that's to be expected. Thank you for taking the time to write and post, I love this story!

Author's Response:

So glad you feel it's realistic. Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm so happy you're still enjoying!

Reviewer: deborahlicious (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 23

Poor Sadward. Still blaming himself. I'm just glad Tanya and Jacob are gone! Rat bastard!- Deborahlicious

Author's Response:

I know! I feel so bad for him :( But things will start to look brighter in the next chapter! :-) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: spockdatabones (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 23

alright! i am so glad you were able to update. hope you finish your thesis soon and all goes well.  i would like to see the wedding/honeymoon also.  we all need to see that bella is able to physically love edward without having to flinch away from him.  you do a wonderful job. thank you!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I definitely plan to take it to the wedding/honeymoon, it just may take me some time to get there. Happy new year!

Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 3

Definitely not good. Bella should never have even gone over there.

Edward is going to kill him!!!!!

Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 2

Jacob is most definitely immature.

Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 1

I really like how you have been able to show the love that Bella has for Edward. I also like the fact that Bella intends to tell Jacob that they can't see each other anymore. Something I wish she had done in the book for everyone's sake.

Reviewer: stephsmith (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 23

So glad to have you back when you're able.  This chapter was just as good as every one that built up to this point.  The depressing aspects were necessary.  I don't think Renee should find out about the vamps, but it will be interesting with her in their house.  Oh, and I love your video for this! 

Author's Response:

Aww, thank you! And thanks for your vote on Renee. I'm leaning toward her not finding out. Glad you liked the video trailer! I didn't like the old one and had to make a new one, lol. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 23

Glad to see you back!

Author's Response:

Glad to see you still reading! :-) 

Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 23

something i forgot

I would also love to see them still have a baby but not be so emotionally painful and dramatic. This would also give you a chance to correct the horrible original idea of having jake imprint on the child of the woman he claimed to be madly in love/lust with, lol. YUCK!

I don't hate SM's Jake. I just think he was childish and too arrogant in his thinking: that Edward was a worthless murdering bloodsucker but its ok for Bella to be with him, a young volatile shapeshifting werewolf. it really burns me up that he thinks he can 'make' her like him or want him instead of edward. he even pretty much calls her a shallow gold digging whore, though not in those words, when he asks her to explain it to him because he didn't get it. 

he thinks with enough time and persistance that he can make it like edward, and her love for him, doesn't matter. it may be unfair and i'm sure jake lovers won't like it, lol, but it kind of compares to a stray overly affectionate horny dog that followed her home and wont go away.

he is a great character, just not for Bella or her child. The pseudo-love triangle and then the imprint was the worst part of the entire series for me.

Author's Response:

Wow, I completely agree with everything you've said here! Very well put! I don't hate SM's Jake either, but I think he was VERY childish, and he was MUCH too pushy with Bella. I haven't completely decided about the baby part, but if I do include it, it certainly won't be anything like what happened in the book. I think this Edward and Bella have been through quite enough already! Lol. 

Again, thank you so much for all your input! I appreciate it sooo much! 

Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 23

well, I don't know about everyone else, but I am still here, lol. You are a great writer and I will stick around to see what happens with this fic.

I would love to see this go past the wedding and honeymoon. I would like to see this go past her change actually. I want to see them normal and happy again and Bella stong, fast, and not clumsy, lol. I know she will never really forget but she is resilient, she can heal and she can still have an HEA.

I would also really like to see Rene know the truth. in most fics they act like she is too fragile minded to handle the truth but I don't see her that way. personally I think that Bella's hairbrainedirratic, and perceptive mother would be more likely to get to the truth (like Bella) and accept the Cullens and the hidden supernatural elements of Forks better than Charlie, lol. Charlie is practical and down to earth. if he can be around the rez all of his life and not know anything and then accept easily enough after what little he finds out I think it would be easy for Rene.

Author's Response:

Well, I'm so glad you're sticking around! 

I definitely plan to take it to the wedding/honeymoon, but I'm not sure if it will go past her change. I'll have to see where things take me. 

I agree with your perception of Renee, and I also think that she'd actually be more likely to get the truth than Charlie. However, I think I'm actually leaning toward not having her (or Charlie) find out for various reasons, mostly because it may complicate things too much and take away from the main focus of the story. But I still haven't decided on it for sure yet. And thank you sooo much for your input! 

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