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Reviewer: edward and jacob lover (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2011 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 24

good job love this story so much!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I'm so happy you're enjoying! 

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 24

i love the reality and truful nature of this story!

Author's Response:

That honestly means so much to me. Thank you.

Reviewer: aechorp (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 22

Wow that was great!!! I was looking for an exciting story and I found it. Thanks so much.

Author's Response:

Thank YOU for your reviews! I'm so happy you're enjoying! Hope you continue to enjoy! 

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 1

i hope this is the beginning of Bella and Edward's HEA... looking forward to your next chapter.

Author's Response:

I would definitely say this is the start of the HEA! :-)

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 23

If you decide that Renee find out about the vampires then this will definitely be the first fic --- can't wait for your decision.

P.S. hope you've realized that I'm twisagaaddict on FF....

Author's Response:

Yep, I realized! Thanks so much for all your reviews! :-)

Reviewer: aechorp (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 16

Your story has a great flow to it. You really don't want to be team Jacob to read this;) You have done a great job with the subject.

Author's Response:

Hey, thanks so much! Yes, you definitely don't want to be team Jacob, lol. That's why I warned people at the start of the story, he he.

So glad you found my story! Thanks for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 24

Your story, your rules, couldn't be more simple. I'm sure glad that Edward has finally opened up to his family about what Jacob forced him to see. And even happier that he realized how it was driving a wedge between him and Bella. This all has to work out okay, just because of how supportive his family is. It's kind of like the clouds are clearing from the sun, bit by bit, as things get steadily a little better for Bella and Edward.

Author's Response:

Thank you, hun. Means a lot. Excellent way of putting it - everything is gradually getting brighter for Bella & Edward.

Reviewer: Twilight131 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 24

I came on tonight with the intention of re-reading some old stories. Little did I know that happiness awaited me :-)

What an interesting take on why Edward was so deeply upset.  I never considered that the perspective of the information would put him in the place of the rapist.  That's a fascinating take. 

I like that Edward spoke with his family first so that he could get a handle on his feelings. As much as Edward and Bella are going to get through this together, Edward needs a "rock" too.  His family is that constant for him so that he can be the constant for Bella. Beautiful.

I LOVE that she wants to wear the engagement ring. That was such a sweet moment.

Bravo on the attempts to make progress in the romance department (even just talking about it is big progress).  That's going to be a struggle for them, but  they can't let Jacob rob them of that. I can't wait to see what you do with the process in the chapters to come b/c Bella voiced her sadness at having her first time taken and now Edward has Jacob's "branding" thoughts in his head (I hate Jacob).

Oh - and Edward kisses. Yay. That's all I'm going to say about that.

Thank you for another fabulous installment! Can't wait til next time!!! As always, hoping that thesis writing goes as smoothly as it can possibly go!


Author's Response:

YAY! I'm always thrilled to see a review from you! :-)

Yes, some other people also mentioned that they never considered that. I pictured it that way because when Edward sees things from people's thoughts, he is seeing them exactly how the person saw them, meaning it would be like he was watching through their eyes.

My thoughts exactly, and excellent way of putting it--Edward also needs a 'rock.' Poor Edward. I felt so bad form him. 

THANK YOU, THANK YOU for noticing the progress in the romance department! Hardly anyone mentioned that. Even though I know it was a depressing chapter, they made some importing progress in many ways. 

Edward kisses...he that!

Thank you so much for you lovely review!

Reviewer: DarkAngel94524 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 24

Good call on the not findingg out bit and I think this is one of the most powerful stories I've ever read, you are a talented writer. I am looking forward to the brighter stuff though. ;) Best of luck



Author's Response:

Thank you for the lovely compliment! And don't worry, the brighter stuff will come :-)

Reviewer: Randy (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 02:26 AM · On: Chapter 24

Thanks for continuing to write this story. I love where you are going with it and love the interaction between Edward and his family.

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying, and thank you for reviewing! It means a lot!

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 24

I was thrilled when I saw the update. It was depressing chapter but the tension and drama were high and it was great read. thanks so much, I don't care how long the wait is in-between chapters as long as you keep updating. Thanks.



Why, can't I give this more than a ten?

Author's Response:

Aww, thanks so much, hun! :-)

Reviewer: stephsmith (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 24

The drama of this story is what makes it amazing.  Fictional depression is much more appealing than the real life version.  Of course you won't lose your followers; this story is too good to give up on.  We appreciate it when you take time to come up for air from your thesis and give us a chapter! 

Author's Response:

Aww, thanks so much! It means more than I can say!

Reviewer: Kristal_Victoria (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 24

Love it as always! Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! :-)

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 24

well im glad in the end that he finally let his guard down! 

Author's Response:

Me too! He thought that by keeping to himself he was sparing Bella pain but he ended up making things worse! Good thing he has a family support system in place! :-)

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: JamesB (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 24

Again, you are handling this storyline so well, and I am so pleased!  It is a terribly hard subject to write about, much less think about, but this story is truly amazing in it's depth, and love.  Thanks so much!!

Author's Response:

Thank YOU so very much! That makes me so happy to hear! :-)

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 24

oh finally! I was getting worried how long Edward would stay in the dark on his troubles. Very curious as to what he has in mind though with working his "magic" regarding the engagement :)

Author's Response:

He he, yeah that should be fun! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: musicluvr (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 24

I loved this chapter. It's good to see some progress for E&B. It was a depressing chapter, but they've just dealt with a traumatic event. So glad they're starting to talk about it with each other - that's critical! And the happy note at the end made it worth it.

Believe me, I love fast updates, but I love quality chapters more. You always update with a quality chapter, so that more than makes up for slow updates. I've noticed that this story has become very popular (over 1300 reviews!) and that is no doubt in reaction to your great story and writing. I'm happy to say I've been with this story from the beginning and I will be with it to the end! I can't wait to see what you have in store for them!!

Author's Response:

Thank you soooo much! I can never post a chapter that I'm not 100% happy with and it often takes me a while until I get there, so your words me so much to me. I needed to hear that! Thank you again. 

Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2011 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 24

thanks good chapter

Author's Response:

Thank you! Nice to see you on Twilighted! My chapters will always update here before TWCS because I wait for them to validate before posting on other sites. 

Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 24

The chapter was perfect... and believable.  Having Carlisle get through to Edward was done exceptionally well, so BRAVO!  :-)

Thanks for sharing your awesome talent.  :-)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I found that part the most difficult to write, so it means a lot. 

Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 24

cant wait for the unicorns and rainbows lol - love ur story cant wait for ur next update =)

Author's Response:

If you look real might see them starting to peek through...he he. So happy you're enjoying and thanks so much for reviewing! :-)

Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 24

Awwww! So sweet!

Author's Response:

Now THAT is the reaction I was aiming for when I wrote the end of this chapter! Thank you! :-)

Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 24

another great chapter, and yes it was a little depressing, but they turned a very important corner

Author's Response:

Thank you very much! And you're right--that's what i was going for. Glad you agree! 

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 1

okay...sorry i am not upset at you anymore!  you are a great author to invoke that kind of feeling in a reader.  I see that you are on FF too...I will continue reading the story....i still hate "your jacob" here.  thanks for responding to my two reviews earlier and not getting upset at me.  :-)

Author's Response:

Whew! *Steps out of hiding place* No worries at all! I completely understand. In fact, I'm pretty sure that if I was reading this as someone else's story, I'd have the same reaction! That doesn't really make sense, but there you have it, lol. I'm very happy that you still want to keep reading! And thank you for your compliment on my writing. And I really appreciate you letting me know how you feel, even if it's because you're not too happy with things. It's nice that you take the time to review at all. 

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 4

HOLY SHIT!!!  I decided to read the chapter after all and I think I am regretting it.  I am so upset at you and Jacob.  I don't ever remember reading a story where I felt like throwing something at the go ahead and hide!!!!!  I have mixed feelings about reading the rest of your story.  Obviously, I am Team Edward although I don't hate Jacob I think you just turned me into a hater of JACOB BLACK!!! 


Author's Response:

*cringes and ducks from flying objects* So sorry, hun! I know it's not a nice chapter! And you don't need to hate SM's Jacob, just the Jacob in this story--he's the evil twin. 

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2011 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 4

i also don't like the fact that you de-virginized her in this story.  just to let you know i didn't read this chapter and i'm not sure i want to continue reading the story.

Author's Response:

Yes, I know that this is a sensitive subject to many. It's not always easy to read or write. Unfortunately, I do write from experience, though obviously mine was quite different than Bella's and things have been dramatized in the story. Also, everyone is different and deals with trauma such as rape in different ways. But I do my best to be as realistic as possible. I don't believe that this chapter is overly graphic, but it certainly isn't a pleasant one. And I understand that this story definitely isn't for everyone, so I completely understand if you don't want to read farther. Thank you for giving it a chance anyway.

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