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Reviewer: Nano Annis (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 10

Edward was amazing here - loving and reassuring Bella every step of the way.  There is so much pain still to overcome though.  It's painful, but I like this story a lot.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it :)

Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 10

ok that was.....sooooo.... Lovely  :)

an A+++ in my book, you nailed the emotions perfectly!



Author's Response:

Thank you very very much! It means so much to me :)

Reviewer: Loves to read (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 10

I like your style.  The trust Bella feels, and the compassion Edward

lavishes on her, is awesome to behold.  Thank you so much for this

chapter!  I can't wait for more!     : )                      Jeannie



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I'm glad you like it :)

Reviewer: 78slayer (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 10

I love this story so far even though I hate the idea of Jacob raping Bella (rape is just to horrable to think of honestly). I love how you are swiching pov's and going over the same thing so that we can see how each person reacts to the same thing. I am looking forward to the next installment of this wonderful story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it even though it is a difficult subject. I'm also really happy you like the pov's because a some people think it can be redundant. But for this kind of story, I really feel that it is important to express how both Bella and Edward are feeling. Thanks again for your review! 

Reviewer: Loves to read (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 6

This is my favorite ch. so far!  I'm glad you didn't belabor it. I love your

portrayal of Edward.                                                       Jeannie



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed! And thank you for reviewing different chapters as you go along. I love it :)

I hope you also enjoy the other chapters :)

Reviewer: djwolf55 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 10

Edward is so sweet!  Can't wait to see where your story takes us.  I strongly suspect you're going to throw a pregnancy in the mix! 

 

Good job!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you're liking Edward :)

I guess you missed it when I mentioned at the end of chapter 4 that Bella will not become pregnant.

Thanks so much for your review! 

Reviewer: Aleea-b4u (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 10

Another heartbreaking chapter. Bella's pain and fears are so sad to read my heart hurts. Again you've done a fantastic job of writing out these complex emotions and allowing your readers to feel what these characters would be feeling. I'm grateful that Edward seems to be strong enough to be what Bella needs right now, and that the Pack has broken away from Jacob. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. You so have me on the edge of my seat. 

Beautiful and very fitting song choice/lyrics. I really like how you're incorporating them at the end of the chapter and that you include a link to the song for us.



Author's Response:

Thank you soo much for your review! Your words makes me really happy :)

I'm so glad that you like the songs I included because I know that a lot of people aren't really interested. So it's nice to hear that there are people that do like them :) 

Reviewer: Loves to read (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 5

That's so sweet!  He's no fool, so hopefully he'll figure it out soon.

K am really enjoying this story.    : )                              Jeannie



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying :)

Reviewer: Loves to read (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 4

Wow!  I cried when I read this chapter,t was very disturbing. I hope she isn'able to keep it a secret for too long, and she better not be pregnant!  What a scum bag!                                                                               Jeannie



Author's Response:

Yes, it is a disturbing chapter. Don't worry, as I mentioned at the end of the chapter, Bella will NOT become pregnant. Thanks so much for reviewing! 

Reviewer: Loves to read (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is nice.  I like how easy they are with each other, and can't wait to read more!                                                    Jeannie



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you like it! :)

Reviewer: ludo (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 10

Wow! What a stunning and powerful chapter! You have written this sensitive subject with such skill and understanding. I look forward to your next chapter with much anticipation.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! It means a lot to me :)

Reviewer: loyalluv (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 10

Another amazing chapter! That's right Edward, theirs hope!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! :) lol :)

Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 10

I hope things get better for Bella soon, and Jake is found and killed.



Author's Response:

This will get better, but it will also take some time. As for Jake, you will see later on what happens with him. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Ellwood (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 10

One word... Brilliant! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! :)

Reviewer: Desiree0825 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 10

Wow that was an intense chapter and so on point with her guilt and shame.  It must have been so hard to write it.  Kudos to you :)



Author's Response:

Yes, this story is definitely hard to write sometimes. Thanks for your review! 

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 10

Ah, I am so glad that they had this time to talk in private.  Yay!  I am hopeful that Bella will allow herself to be examined and that she'll learn to trust in the love of those around her and move forward to heal.



Author's Response:

Yes, Bella definitely needed it, but she does still have a long way to go before she's healed. Thanks for reviewing! 

Reviewer: mOrE_tHeN_mY_oWn_LiFe (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 10

This story is amazing! Im excited to see her interaction with the cullens and rosalie, I think this will bond them.  Keep up the amazing work! And I am loving the quick updates :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! There will definitely be interaction between Bella and all the Cullens, but it will come a bit later. Glad you appreciate the quick update. My Beta is also to thank for that--she was super fast at validating this chapter. 

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 10

This has been the best chapter yet. I love how you described how Bella heard her lullaby and came back to Edward. That was just beautiful. The rest of the chapter was logical and needed to be addressed. Looking forward to the next one!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I'm so happy you liked it :)

Reviewer: Mrsleahcullen (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 10

Great. I can't wait till they get a hold of Jacob. You have a great righting style and I love the multi-view points. Keep up the great writing.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: sweetblood17 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 10

thank you for updating so fast. is jacob going to be killed? and how is rosalie going to be involved? she's gonna be pretty pissed at jacob, almost guarenteed.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! You'll have to wait and see what happens with Jacob. And you will see Rosalie, but it will come a bit later on in the story. 

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 10

excellent  ... the emotions Bella was  feeling were very real ...



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 10

Awe this is cute.... In a sense. Bella is semi back to her normal self, which is really good. Can't wait for the next updat =3

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it and are looking forward to more! Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: Venus_Star2_com (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 10

I wonder how edward will convice Bella



Author's Response:

Guess you'll have to wait and see :) :) 

Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: amylizhawkins (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 10

Wow!!!  She really does need her knight in shining armor right now.  I look forward to the Pack, Cullens, & Charlie getting their hands on Jacob and making him pay for waht he had done. 



Author's Response:

lol. Thanks for reviewing! 

Reviewer: GangstaT (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2010 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 10

that was a really good chapter...and it will contribute to the healing process....im soooo glad that it is over for her (in terms of the fear and jacob experience) altho the healing process will b just as bad :(



Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm so glad you liked it. You're right--the healing will still be difficult. 

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