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Reviewer: Nano Annis (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 12

Words are kinda inadequate here.

Bella's pain is so raw and deeply engrained in her - I feel angrier with Jacob every time I read this.

Edward is trying so hard to keep it together for her, but the anger is difficult to push aside.

He is wonderful with her, making her feel that she is still beautiful and still the person he loves.

The exam is going to be tough, but I'm glad she has decided to have Edward with her.

I look forward to Esme and Rosalie helping her to come to terms with it all in future chapters.

Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Yes, poor Bella is going through a really horrible thing. Lol, yes and imagine how angry at Jacob Edward must feel. Very true what you say about Edward--it is also so very difficult on him as well. I'm glad it is coming across in the right way. The exam is going to be very tough. But she is lucky that she has Edward to help her through everything. Thank you so much for your review! It's so nice to hear your thoughts on it. 

Reviewer: i-was-broken (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 12

I think the idea of Emmett and Rosalie as 'mentors' during this situation is a good one.  It will be neat to see an exploration of their relationships.



Author's Response:

Yes. We can especially get some insight into Rosalie's character because (at least in my opinion) she was always a bit of a mystery in the original books. Thanks so much for your review!

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 12

wow--this was a great chapter, & so important

we all go thru this rock-bottom, & feel there is no way out; that no one will want us. we're "ruined" "stained" "damaged goods" "filthy" or that we asked for this somehow--that its our fault. we blame ourselves when all the blame belongs on the bastard that did this to us.

and there is no clean...at 1st. no amount of scrubbing with bleach or a brillo pad can ever make u feel clean. it's all mental, but you can't scrub there

thank you for writing this story. it is going to help someone out there who has/is/or will be, a victim

~Shawna 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for your review. it really means a lot to me. I feel it was an important chapter as well. And I'm so glad it is coming across in the way I'd like. It is a very sensitive subject and I really hoped that it could help victims as oppose to offending. I do write from some experience and it is very true what you say--most often it takes a lot of time to heal and not feel 'ruined' and blame yourself. Thanks again for your review.

Reviewer: Twilight131 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 12

I really liked the end of this chapter - that was perfect Edward!  I personally prefer the Bella/Edward interaction to the interactions of the rest of the characters, but maybe that's my Edward bias ;-)  Looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you liked it! The Bella/Edward interactions are my favourite too. They are the main focus of the story, and so there will always be Edward/Bella interactions in every chapter :)

Thanks so much for your review! :)

Reviewer: kkaycullen2008 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 12

omg keep writing!!!!

this is amazing.

and very emotional. i ve had bad experiences and this just makes me cry.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! The next chapter should be on its way soon :)

Reviewer: Michrob (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 12

Great chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Michrob (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 12

Great chapter. 

Reviewer: rivruskende (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 12

I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

So glad to hear it! Thanks so much for reviewing! :)

Reviewer: BellaSoriano (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 12

wait...there's no next button!!! wth???!!!



Author's Response:

LOL. Next chapter should come soon :)

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: BellaSoriano (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 12

you jerk!! you made me cry :(



Author's Response:

Lol. Sorry

Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 12

I love the way your are handling this. Edward's love for Bella is so complete and she sees that, finding comfort and strength in it. As hard as it will be, she needs to get to the hospital and get it over with. One step at a time.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. I'm so glad you like it! Bella is lucky that she has Edward who can help her through everything. That is very true. The hospital visit is going to be very difficult for her. And she still has a long way to go before she heals. Thanks so much for your review! 

Reviewer: Barbiegirltwilighted (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 9

ok so im only on chap.9 & i  love it it  is sooooo sad but i love how you kept S.Meyer's idea kida just added soooooo much drama!!!

i hate Jacob so yeah but great!!! JOB!!!

=D 10!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you soo very much! I'm very happy to hear you are enjoying! 

lol, well that's definitely good when reading this story. I'm team Edward all the way :)

Thanks for your review and I hope you enjoy the rest! 

Reviewer: Trysh (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 12

OMG...the emotions in the chapter!!! Poor Bella!! I am so glad that Edward is so gentle with her...not that I would expect anything less from him lol. I am still waiting to see Billy's take on things, but I am trying desperately to be patient..lol. You update so regularly and I literally squealed when I saw your story today :) Keep them coming!!!!



Author's Response:

lol, yes it was an emotional chapter. Glad it had the right affect. Yes, of course, Edward is perfect as always :)

You will definitely be seeing Billy's take, but unfortunately that is still a few chapters away.

Lol, that's so nice to hear. I will do my best to continue updating regularly. I'd like to thank you very very much for always reviewing! You're awesome! :)

Reviewer: Trysh (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 12

OMG...the emotions in the chapter!!! Poor Bella!! I am so glad that Edward is so gentle with her...not that I would expect anything less from him lol. I am still waiting to see Billy's take on things, but I am trying desperately to be patient..lol. You update so regularly and I literally squealed when I saw your story today :) Keep them coming!!!!

Reviewer: Rainbow12 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 12

Awesome chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! :)

Reviewer: smarie (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 12

I love how sweet and tender Edward was with Bella.



Author's Response:

So happy you like it! Edward is my dream man, lol. Thanks so much for your review! 

Reviewer: BellaSoriano (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 6

okay. i have to say it. this is kind of bugging me. why didn't Alice see Bella crying in the shower at the very least? bella returning home AFTER? i don't get that part,



Author's Response:

Ah, well, if you remember from chapter 5, Alice is currently having problems 'seeing' Bella. And don't worry you will find out the reason for this in a later chapter (It is not because she's pregnant--she is NOT pregnant). Hope that clears things up for you, and I hope you enjoy the rest. Thanks again for your review! 

Reviewer: BellaSoriano (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 5

at the moment, i'm entranced, i'm only leaving review because you keep asking for one when i want to READ!! so :P

i was a little weirded out with the last chapter....i know Jacob is not right in the head....but for some reason (this is my point of view) i think he talked too much. after the um...incident. maybe if it was more of an incoherent ramble? self justification? i dunno. just my two cents.

 



Author's Response:

Lol. Well thank you very much for reviewing as you go. 

Hmm, maybe. But he wanted to get Bella to hide everything. Thanks for giving me your thoughts on it.

Reviewer: jsjohnson73 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 12

You are doing such a wonderful job and handling a very sensitve subject with much sympathy, tact and grace.  I look forward to the next chapter and seeing how the Cullens rally around Bella.  They all love her so very much and I know that Edward and his family will see her through this



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your kind words. It means a lot to me. It is very true that Bella has many that love her and can help her through this. 

Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 12

Sigh. Poor Bella. I know she's not herself right now, otherwise she owould know Edward will never leave her. I'm so glad that she understands that he does love her. I can't believe that the family wants yto use her as bait. Hoepfully Carlise can talk them out of it.



Author's Response:

Yes, she's going through a very difficult thing. Well, it's not really quite how Edward put it. They just can't find him right now and they plan to protect Bella. Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: twilightnewborn (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 12

This is a very emotional story and although I have never been assaulted as Bella was, it seems to be a very good representation of what a victim would go through.  I am glad that you are not going to rush Bella through her recovery because I am sure that would be impossible for a victim.

Keep up the great work.



Author's Response:

Yes, I'm trying to make it realistic. I'm glad you like how it's going. That's very true. I think not rushing it is very important because what she went through was really horrible and takes lots of time and love to heal from. 

Thanks so much for your lovely review! :)

Reviewer: amhatfie (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 12

Wow hun, I actually started a similar story to this last year but it was never continued. I am not saying I hate Jacob but I agree that you needed a villian. Edward and Bella's love is so strong that I think it could survive anything. Most people would be lucky if they could have half of that.

I am sorry that I didn't review sooner but I couldn't stop. The next button needs to be after the review box. lol

I think this is an awesome story and you are a good writer. Keep up the good work. I will be checking for an updated daily.

Alaina



Author's Response:

It is a difficult topic to read and write. I don't hate Jacob either (except the one in my story, lol). I'm glad you agree with my villain choice anyway. I agree very much and I wanted to show how their love could get them through this. 

LOL. No problem, I'm glad it caught your interest and you wanted to keep reading. And you are giving me a lovely review now! :)

Thanks so much. It really means a lot to me!

Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 12

I thought of the glimmer of hope I’d just seen in her eyes and realized that she was ready to fight for us. And I would always fight with her.

very lovely....



Author's Response:

Thanks so much:) 

Reviewer: robert cullen (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 12

I was wodnering, will we get to see where Jacob is anytime soon? No offense to Edward, but I personally think they should change Bella and let her get her revenge, because, well, she deserves it. Either change her, or have Edward hold Jacob down while she bashes his head with a baseball bat. Tee hee. That'd be cute. I like the baseball bat idea alot. Keep up the good work. --Robert Cullen



Author's Response:

Don't worry, we will see Jacob pay. I don't want to say when or how because I don't want to spoil anything. But keep in mind that in terms of the timeline of the story, this last chapter was only the morning after we last saw Jacob. I don't want to say if she will be changed in this story, but here are some thoughts. It is a very traumatic thing for her to be changed and the last thing she needs is something else drastic to deal with. Also, don't forget about poor Charlie and what it would do to him if Bella was changed now. Lol. I'll keep that idea in mind. Thanks so much for your review! 

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 12

Poor Bella.  Nicely written chapter.



Author's Response:

Very true--she's going through a very difficult thing. Thanks so much! :)

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