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Reviewer: jeanne (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 16

Famous last words. I can't wait to see what is going to happen!



Author's Response:

lol, yeah, I couldn't resist adding that last line...

Glad you are looking forward to more. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Tralalaura (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 16

Please update soon! I love your story!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I'm very happy you are enjoying. I will do my best to update soon.

Reviewer: SouthrnBelle (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 16

This was such a great chapter. I loved her interaction with Charlie. It almost made me cry when you did his point of view - to see how helpless he felt as a father who couldn't protect his daughter. Gah that was heart-breaking! And I love the bracelet! That was so sweet...I need to get me an Edward. Pronto. BTW, I had no idea you were a chemical engineering graduate student. That sounds seriously hard. I'm in grad school as well to get my masters in speech pathology. I can emphasize with the work load. Except for some reason, chemical engineering sounds harder, haha. I really hope you plan on continuing this story because I've fallen in love with it! Your updates always make my day :-) So update soon if you can! Good luck at your research conference. You're in my prayers! Can't wait for your next chapter :-)

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. I thought is was important to show a bit how Charlie was feeling. Glad you liked the bracelet. *sigh* I wish I could find an Edward, too. 

Yeah, chem eng can get busy at times, but I actually find grad school much less stressful than my undergrad, which was brutal. I had no social life, lol. And I wouldn't of had time to write, either. Being a research Grad student is nicer. Of course it can still get busy, too. That's neat that you're in speech pathology. My sister is in a similar field and I can imagine that you certainly know about busy times, too. 

Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm so happy you are really enjoying this story. Your reviews make my day :-)  Don't worry, I do plan to continue the story. I just meant that things are fairly busy right now and it helps to motivate me to write in my break times if I know lots of people want to read more. I will do my best to update soon. Thanks again for your review! 

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 16

Excellant chapter dealing with her first night home and Billy's invasion! I like the way you handled Charlie's views on things. Poor Bella is still suffering and Edward is so good for her! Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it! It's really nice to hear you are looking forward to more! 

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 16

im worried that jake is going to do something really stupid! and get himself or soemone else killed! i do hope that he does get punished for his crimes! and that bella is able to get help. of course when someone says what could go wrong? thats usually when something goes really wrong!



Author's Response:

Yeah, sorry, I couldn't resist adding in that last line. Don't worry, you will get to see Jacob pay eventually. Thank so much for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: JamesB (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 16

I did not think I would like this story, because of the content, but you have achieved so much, so well, in telling a difficult story about rape.  Please continue, and as always, as fast as you can!  I am sitting on needles waiting more, to see where you take this!  Thank you!!



Author's Response:

Yes, it is a difficult subject, but thank you very much for giving it a chance. I'm very happy you are looking forward to reading more. I will do my best to post again soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 16

Thanks so much for the update! I just LOVE your Edward!



Author's Response:

Thank YOU so much for your review! I'm glad you're loving this Edward. *sigh* If only I could find someone as perfect in real life. I can dream, right? lol :-)

 

Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 16

What could possibly go wrong in such a short amount of time?

Ugh. Don't.Say.That.

Kill the mutt, yeah? :-D

Spikey

 



Author's Response:

LOL, sorry, I couldn't resist adding in that last line...

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: rivruskende (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 16

I really can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I love hearing that :-)

Reviewer: Jesi007 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 16

I absolutely love reading this story.  The love and devotion displayed between Edward and Bella is so endearing that I just can't fathom the depths they would go to help each other.  I love how the characters are all helping each other in some way as to help get Bella better.  I hope to see soon that Bella will see that, despite all the wrong done to her, she can move on knowing its not her fault.  Thank you for the dedication in writing this story despite your busy schedule.  I'm always excited to see the update waiting in my inbox to be read after my busy day.  Keep writing! =)



Author's Response:

I'm so happy to hear that! I'm glad Edward and Bella's love is showing through so well. Yes, Bella has lots of people that love her to help her through everything. Thank YOU for your lovely review. It's so nice to know you are excited to read more. I will do my best to update soon. 

Reviewer: Motherthing (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 16

Your studies are much more important than writing this story but that doesn't mean I don't want you to continue.  Take your time but please finish this fine story.

Motherthing



Author's Response:

That's true. But don't worry, I do plan on finishing this story. I just meant that things are a bit busy for me and it might take longer for an update. Also, when I get stressed out, reviews especially motivate me to write in my break time so that the update comes faster. So thank you very much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Michrob (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 16

Hmmm I sense something going wrong.  Can't wait' for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

He He...couldn't resist adding in that last line...

I'm so glad you're looking forward to more!

Thank you very much for reviewing. 

Reviewer: Love23Bug (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 16

I absolutely LOVE this story. You've been doing a fantastic, and realistic, job so far. I can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you SOOO much! I'm so happy you're enjoying and looking forward to more :-)

Reviewer: LOVE_VANESSA (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 16

OMG!!!!it's the best fan fic i have ever read and i mean evey words!!!please write more i can never get enough of this story!!you're amazing<33



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you SOOO much! You just made my day so much brighter! :-)

YOU are amazing! 

I will do my best to post more soon! 

Reviewer: kony1994 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 16

Love it! Love it! Love it! Damn! Billy is such an ass!!!!!!!!!!!!! And the bracelet! God, how romantic!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I'm so happy you're enjoying. Yeah, it kind of seems that way, but it is also difficult for him to believe that his own son could do something so horrible. Glad you liked the bracelet :-)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: sara1985 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 16

I have to say I really love this stroy, it is definitly one of may favourites. I love a loving, kind, Edward, he is much nicer then the arrogant ones. Please kee p writing, I understand that life gets in the way, but I lvoe seeing the emails in my inbox telling me you have updated.



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you so much! It really means a lot to me. Glad you are loving Edward :-)

I will do my best to update soon.

Reviewer: veer (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 16

Nice chapter! It's good that Charlie and Bella talked a little. Let's hope Charlie can forgive Billy. It's really good that Edward realises Bella is not afraid of him, but she still can't forget. You showed that really good with Edward just gently grapping her wrist (i found that the best part of the chapter) and Bella starting to panic. Let's hope she opens up to him fast, that wil make things easyer for both. It's true Edward needs to get hunting and also loose some anger, but i'm so afraid of what wil happen...

I absolutely LOVE your story! Really!!!!!! I check for updates every day. Your writing is so good. Please, keep up the good work. I really hope we can convince you NOT TO STOP.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Yes, Bella needed to get things out in the open with Charlie. Yeah, poor Bella is okay for a bit, but then something just triggers her to panic. She will be opening up to Edward more soon--sometime within the next two chapters. Very true--Edward has been suppressing his anger for too long. As for what will happen when he leaves, you will have to wait and see. But at least she is being protected by Alice, Rose and Esme. 

Thank you SOO much! It really means so much to me. I'm so happy you are continuing to enjoy. Don't worry, I'm not planning on stopping writing. I just meant that real life is fairly busy for me right now and so in might take longer for updates. And when I get stressed with other stuff, it is nice to get reviews that motivate me to write in my break time. 

Reviewer: smweins (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 16

I love your story. Your Edward is perfect! So please write more.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so happy you're enjoying! Glad you like Edward. I can't find someone as perfect in real life, so I'm writing him instead *sigh* 

I'll do my best to post again soon. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: i-was-broken (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 16

nice update.  I'm really liking Edward's patience and understanding with Bella, but I'm a little worried about the next chapter.  *gulps*



Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad you are liking Edward :-)

lol, yeah, sorry. I couldn't resist adding in that last line...he he

Reviewer: Arizona Hale (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 16

You're doing a wonderful job of representing PTSD. Well done. I'm writing a Port Angeles story, and I know how difficult it is to be faithful to this sort of experience. I look forward to seeing how Bella heals.

 

You're doing a great job. Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. I'm trying to be as realistic as possible and I'm glad you think it is being portrayed well. Glad you know you are looking forward to more. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. 

Reviewer: Tantsu (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 16

Hi! This is my first time reviewing a story. I am totally hooked on this one. I can´t wait to see how this turns out. When I try to think how Bella will ever be able to let Edward hold her intimately, I come up with nothing! The way you ended this chapter, has me holding my breath for the next one! I hope real life doesn´t keep you too long from posting the next chapter!!! Love you!



Author's Response:

Hello! Well, thank you so much for reviewing! I'm glad I got you hooked :-)

Yes, it is going to take lots of time and TLC from Edward before she will be able to be intimate. It's not going to be easy for her to get through everything. 

lol, yeah, I couldn't resist adding in that last line. I will do my best to update again soon. Love YOU :-) You are awesome! :-)

Reviewer: bonniearies (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 16

Please continue, am looking forward to seeing if and when Jacob returns and what the outcome will be. I'm enjoying reading this very much. Thanks and keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I'm so happy you are enjoying and looking forward to reading more. I will do my best to update soon.

Reviewer: twi_mom_teddi (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 16

Great chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you! :-)

Reviewer: dejr88 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 16

Hi!  I just started reading your story, and I love it.   I have never been a Jacob fan, and while this paints him in the worst possible light... it really gives Edward's love a chance to shine and I think that sometimes that got lost in the drama of the books.   This is the man that every woman dreams of.   I'm really looking forward to the next chapter... what could happen indeed.  How easily they all forget that Alice can't see what happens around Jacob.  Maybe she saw Bella's stay and Bella's future as OK, but if Jacob hasn't made a decision to go after Bella, Alice wouldn't see a blank spot for Bella yet, would she?   Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

Hello! Thanks for reading. I'm so glad to hear you are enjoying! Yes, that was what I really wanted to do--show that Edward and Bella's love is strong enough to get through something so horrible. He He, you'll have to wait for the next chapter to see what happens :-)

Thank you so much for your review! 

Reviewer: LeeLeeLee (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2010 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 16

i hope nothing will go wrong but jacob has to come back sooner or later and i hope he dies no matter what happens actually i hope he tries to take bella and she is hurt heaps bad so she has to get changed and she kills him herself mmmhmm yeh thats the way to go lol

I love it post soon Xx Leonie =]



Author's Response:

You're right, we certainly haven't seen the last of Jacob...

lol, he will pay, but I don't won't to give anything away and say how.

I'm very glad to know you are enjoying. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! 

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