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Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 16

famous last words "what could go wrong?"



Author's Response:

He He. Yeah, I couldn't resist adding in that last line...

Thanks for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: bubbleskami (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 16

Oh, and I agree with LauraCullen about Rosalie kicking some werewolf ass! That would be epic! Rosalie ftw!



Author's Response:

He He. I'll have to see where things take me, but it's something to think about. Thanks for reviewing and giving me your thoughts. 

Reviewer: bubbleskami (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 16

Poor Bella. I hope things will start to get better soon. Please update as soon as you can! I can't wait to hear more! You rock!



Author's Response:

Yeah, it's a very difficult thing, but she's making slow progress in the right direction. I'm very happy to hear you are looking forward to more! YOU rock :-)

I will do my best to update soon. 

Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 16

I am loving this story so much! Thanks so much for sharing it.



Author's Response:

Aww, thank YOU so much! I'm so happy you're enjoying! :-)

Reviewer: c4rrie (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 16

this story is excellent, and really gripping, i find myself checking everyday to see if you've put another chapter up. dont stop please.



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much! It means a lot to me :-)

Don't worry, I didn't mean that I plan to stop writing. I just meant that things are pretty busy for me right now and it helps motivate me to write in my break times when I know lots of people want to read more. Otherwise (without the motivation) it might take me a while to get the next chapter finished. So thank you very much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: BethyBoo (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 16

I love this story so much! You're doing an incredible job with it, and this is one of my favorite stories right now. I can't wait until the next update! :)



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you! It makes me so happy to hear that :-)

Reviewer: gr8k8 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 16

YOU KNOW, NO ONE SHOULD EVER SAY THOSE WORDS OUT LOUD.  THINKING THEM IS ALSO A NO-NO.  MURPHY'S LAW KICKS IN IMMEDIATELY. CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS.



Author's Response:

He He. Yeah, I know, I couldn't resist adding in that last line. Glad you're looking forward to more. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: rachel49 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 16

Grad school's tough!  I will continue reading your story whenever you're able to post chapters.  Take your time. :)



Author's Response:

Yes, it's certainly very busy at times. Thank you for understanding! And Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 6

I really hope Edward finds out sooner rather than later.  Also, I'm hoping Rosalie gets involved and kicks some werewolf ass!



Author's Response:

He finds out pretty soon. As for Rosalie--that might be an idea, lol. I'll have to see where things take me. Thanks for another review!

Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 4

I can't imagine she can really mask her feelings from Jasper; and how will she explain what I imagine would be the extensive bruising and other injuries?  Reading on...



Author's Response:

No, she wouldn't be able to hind her feelings from Jasper, and it will not be easy for her to hide things from anyone for very long. Glad you're still reading. I think sometimes I scare people off after this chapter, lol. Thanks for another review. 

Reviewer: cupcakes76 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 16

So I love your story. I cry with each chapter. I have a deep connection to Bella's feelings and its hard to read and yet I have to.. Keep writing...Thanks



Author's Response:

I'm very happy you are enjoying and that the emotions are coming across so well. Yes, it can be a difficult read sometimes. But thanks so much for reading and reviewing. 

Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 1

Interesting premise!  You're taking what Jacob did in the books to the extreme (I presume...), and it's plausible to me because I view his behavior in Eclipse as being assault and I HATED Charlie's reaction to Jake forcing his kisses on her.  So, really curious...



Author's Response:

Yes, I did base things from the original Jacob's character and actions. But you're right--I'm taking it very much to the extreme. I strongly agree with your view on Jacob forcing kisses on Bella in Eclipse. It is very much an assault, and I was shocked by Charlie's reaction. 

Well, thank you very much for reading and reviewing. It's really wonderful to see that an amazing writer such as yourself would read my story (I know I'm very much an amateur writer, lol). 

Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 16

Oh, my goodness... poor Charlie. I hate how helpless he feels. What a heartwrenching chapter. I'm glad to see that some things are being resolved positively. Even though this is far from over, it's nice to see a tiny bit of progress.



Author's Response:

Yes, it is very hard on Charlie as well. Yes, it is a very difficult road, but Bella is making slow progress with the help of those that love her. Thank you very much for taking the time to review. 

Reviewer: JAYS1 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 16

so glad Bella got her heart charm back, figured irt could be gotten outof the pipes

love the story, please keep going



Author's Response:

Yeah, it would not be nice if a diamond like that was lost forever. I'm so happy you're enjoying! Thank you for reading and reviewing. 

Reviewer: Mrsleahcullen (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 16

More famous last words. huh? I really like it. I'm so glad she got her charm back. I didn't doubt you for a second. hehe

Author's Response:

He He, I couldn't resist adding that last line...

Glad you liked it! Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: FatalxDesire599 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 16

I check this story almost everyday to check for new chapters!  Great job and keep going! 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad to know you're enjoying and looking forward to more. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Gigib (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 16

great story



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! 

Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 16

loved this chapter. i think it was my favorite so far. i really like that charlie is seeing edward differently now and that bella, edward, and charlie had a good time now that he is giving edward a chance. can't wait for more. question at the end sounds ominous, lol.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you really enjoyed it! Yes, I didn't like how Charlie and Edward didn't have a good relationship in the original books. And it is nice to show how good things can come out of something horrible. lol, yeah, I couldn't resist adding that last line...

Thank you very much for your continuous reviews. I really does mean a lot to me. 

Reviewer: Ellwood (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 16

Wow  i just loved this chapter! Soooo good. haha the last line.... edward shouldnt have said that cos now something's gonna happen isnt it? If i havent already said it before you are a very talented writer and i have no idea how you manage to make the story lines so good ad gripping and also make the actual writing good as well!!! Can't wait for the next update as i really wanna know what happens next. Any idea when the nect update will be? Please be soon because i am too eager :D x x



Author's Response:

Aww thank you sooo much for your kind words. You just made my day soo much brighter :-)

I'm so glad you are really enjoying! And thank you for your continuous reviews! You are so awesome!

Not sure exactly when the next update will be, but I will do my best to post it soon.

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 16

It is absolutely necessary for Edward to get the opportunity to give vent to his anger. Away from Bella.  He should take it out on some trees, a mountain lion, maybe even a BEAR. ;-)  Emmett would probably not fight with him on that one. This time.

Billy's denial surprised me but I was really glad that Charlie didn't support that but instead supported Edward.  I was UNsurprised to see Edward go near-caveman on Billy.  

Your ending there has me worried. What can happen with mulitple vampires watching out for Bella???

Why do I feel that something will? I so want Bella to be able to heal.



Author's Response:

Glad you agree that Edward needs to vent his anger. LOL :-)

Yes, I guess it is a bit surprising, but I figure it would be difficult for him to believe his son could do something so horrible, at least initially. lol, yeah--overprotective Edward.

lol, sorry. I couldn't resist adding in that last line. But that's true--it should make you feel better that she has multiple vampires protecting her, right? Or maybe not. Guess you have to wait and see :-)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! And for the awesome rating :-)

Reviewer: andib (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 16

of course I want more!!!!!!  Can't wait to see who gets to finally get ahold of Jacob!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm very happy to hear it! Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 16

I always worry most when a character finishes a chapter thinking/saying "What could possibly go wrong?" - that's usually the point that we really don't want to give it a chance to find out.

After all his protectiveness, it seems out of character for Edward to go without at least Alice present to "guard/comfort" Bella, even if she's been asking him nicely to go... it just doesn't "feel right" that he'd go with all the possible risks. Charlie's presence isn't a valid defense against Jake.



Author's Response:

lol, yeah, I couldn't resist adding in that last line.

Oh, I think maybe you misunderstood when you read the chapter. Edward certainly isn't leaving Bella with Charlie (he can't protect her). He is leaving her at his house with Alice, Rose, and Esme. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Jennixst (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 16

I have found this story both heart-wrenching and very well written.  I hope you'll update soon as it is a wonderful story.  You've handled the unpleasant asspects with great dignity and I look forward to the pack and the cullens getting a bit of payback.  Bella deserves it.



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much! It really means a lot to me. Thanks for brightening my day :-)

I will do my best to post again soon. 

Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 16

I really love this story.. I'm so glad that Bella has the Cullen's and Charlie:)  Can't wait for more!!  But completly understand not having a lot of time:)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I'm so happy you are enjoying and looking forward to more. I will do my best to post again soon. 

Reviewer: Niluvien (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 16

Great story, please keep up the good work we are reading.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! :-)

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