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Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl

Oh god! what a cliffie. Been reading this all day! what an ending. Please let Edward be ok.



Author's Response:

Thanks for joining us - you picked a doozy of a time, right? Bear with me until Tuesday, we'll get some answers in the next couple of chapters.

Reviewer: TigerGirl (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl

Holy crap!!! Amazing chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you! *wipes brow* It was a tough one...

Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl

OMG! Is Edward dead or just knocked out?

This cheered me up - in a way - after the beating England just took from Germany. Update soon!!!!



Author's Response:

Hang in there with me until Tuesday - we'll get some details then. Kind of a weird way to cheer up, right? I was bummed both the US and England got booted.

Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl

Did you seriously just kill Edward? I think I am going to be sick to my stomach. Life is hard enough - please recant.



Author's Response:

Hang in there with me until Tuesday - we'll get some answers then!

Reviewer: runner28 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl

Omg! Please tell me you're gonna update soon. I can't take this!

Author's Response:

Hang in there with me - next chapter up on Tuesday!

Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl

oh boy. Talk about your clift hangers, there had better be another chapter soon. Or I might just go nuts. Wonderful chapter, very well written and intense. I can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thank you - I know it was an evil cliffie, but just too good to pass up! next chapter will be up on Tuesday.

Reviewer: aly1390 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl

WHAT?! NO! that's really mean putting a cliffie like that! i hope they caught james



Author's Response:

I know it was mean, one of the bummers about fan fic is that you can't just turn the page! Next update on Tuesday, hang in there with me...

Reviewer: staiashas (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl

I think I'm going to need some tissues for the next chapter.  I love this story.  My heart is in my throat about what has happened and what is going to happen.  Thank You



Author's Response:

Thank you for loving the story and B and E - next update is on Tesday, so hang in there with me until then...

Reviewer: ande (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl

 Oh, you did not just leave us there!?!! I will be expecting an update PDQ! Great chapter!



Author's Response:

I know...bear with me until Tuesday, the next chapter will be up then! Thank you -

Reviewer: edwardandbellaforever (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl

you are an evil and horrible woman and the only way i will retract that comment is if Edward is alive.

I can't believe you ended it there... Edward can't be dead! That would be the most unfair ending ever!

Plea, for the love of Edward & Bella, update ASAFP!



Author's Response:

I know, it was an evil place to end...but just too perfect. Bad thing about fan fic postings is that you can't just turn the page! Next chappie will be up on Tuesday - hang in there with me until then!

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl

Oh, no!!! From your quote I hope Edward took James out before he could inflict even more damage. What a despiceable creature! Please, please let Edward and Bella be both o.k. eventually, don't make him have to end his hockey-carreer because of that s.o.b. ..... Can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

Thanks - bear with me until Tues, we'll get some details in the next couple of chapters.

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl

You can't kill off Edward! That's blasphemy! I'll go all hockey on your ass and we know what that means :)



Author's Response:

Hang in there with me until Tues...and thanks for caring so much about the boy!

Reviewer: Robin Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl

AHHHH, That was a horriable place to stop. Stupid James, always messing things up.  Loving this story though, so can't wait to find out what happens.  All I have to say is that I hope the reason his hockey stick is straight up in the air, is beacuse it is sticking out of James' back!



Author's Response:

I know - hang in there with me until Tuesday, and thank you so much for loving the sotry and E and  as much as I do!

Reviewer: ObsessiveEdwardDisorder (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl

GAAAHHH YOU HAD TO STOP IT THERE! T_T" OH DEAR LORD. i'm going to be spazzing for the next few hours.

edward better live. if he doesn't live...i'll....I'LL STOP RECOMMENDING THIS FIC >:o

i did, however, love how bella whacked james over the head with a hockey stick. teehee. ;D

wonderful chapter as always.



Author's Response:

Thanks - I know, evil, bad cliffie - just bear with me until Tues, we'll get some more details then...

Reviewer: breakingdawn57 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl

Please don't kill off Edward!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! We love this Edward (and Bella).What a cliffhanger. You should be hiding under the talble!!! We will forgive you if Edward is ok!!!!!!!!!!!!This chapter caught me by surprise.



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you so much for loving these two as much as I do! I know it was a surprise, but bear with me until the update on Tuesday...

Reviewer: fundip (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl

What the fudge!?!??! YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT AT THAT! Guh probably the worst cliffie in the history of ever, I am so distraught right now it's not even funny. ={



Author's Response:

I know, it was a bad, bad cliffie...but...hang in there with me until Tuesday. The next update will be posted then, and we'll get some details over the next couple of chapters.

Reviewer: polkadots90 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl

Oh God, I don't even know what to make of this chapter! I was nearly in tears at the end. Hoping that Edward is not dead, just banged up!



Author's Response:

I know, it was sad...next update is on Tuesday, so hang in there until then!

Reviewer: rfortu01 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl

That cliffhanger was so not fair!!!!!!

rene



Author's Response:

I know, it was an evil cliffie...next update on Tuesday, so bear with me until then!

Reviewer: edwardsvolvo (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl

aaaaaaaaaahhhh! please tell me it is not so!



Author's Response:

We'll get some details in the update on Tuesday, hang in there...

Reviewer: Aiisling (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl

What a fab chapter. OH MAN I am on the edge of my seat, can't wait for the next update...!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you - it was a crazy chapter. Update on Tuesday - see you then!

Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl

OH MY GOD!  WHAT THE FUCK HAPPENED?

please write quickly....



Author's Response:

Next update on Tuesday...bear with me until then...

Reviewer: warpedweaving (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl

geez...what a freaking cliffhanger!



Author's Response:

I know, it was a biggie - update on Tuesday, and we'll get some more details!

Reviewer: junior88 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl

how can you end it like that, so cruel. LOL

can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I know, evil, bad cliffie... ;) Next update on Tuesday!

Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl

Damn James to the deepest pit of hell where he belongs. For sucks sake he should should be bound to a pole and beaten until he is begging for death and not freedom.

 



Author's Response:

Ah, we'll get some details of what happened with James next chappie - thanks!

Reviewer: dejr88 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl

NO!!!!!   You may NOT kill off Edward!  James does NOT get to take him away!   You must fix this in the next chapter... and post it tomorrow... because this is just cruel... to us... and to Bella... and to Edward... James can go away!   Soon... please!   Aargh, how could you do this?



Author's Response:

I know, it was a bad cliffie, but bear with me, we'll get some details next update in Tuesday...

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