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Reviewer: LissLove (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl
oh man.. you're killing me! Please update soon!
Author's Response: The next chappie is in queue, so it will be up soon!
Reviewer: OCDE (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl
ok so first of all, edward is ok, i know he is because you wouldnt do that, or else i would be crying. that person was james. edward is ok. they have to go to college together and get married and have children. soo... how many more chapters left. until next time.
Author's Response: The next chappie is in queue, so it should be up very soon. Thanks so much for caring about these guys - I've been amazed. There are 35 chapters total.
Reviewer: crazyblue (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl
I've been wringing my hands since I read this the first time, and I am so thankful to scroll through the review responses to see that I have less than 24 hours before some answers. It'll help me sleep tonight! haha (no, seriously!) :)
Author's Response: I know, it was a very evil cliffie...but the next chapter is in queue, so you should be seeing it soon! Thanks so much for caring what happens to our Edward :)
Reviewer: Sara0123 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl
NOOOOOO what the???? how could you leave it there aghhhthis chapter had me on the edge of my seat hurry and update pleazzzzzzzzz
Author's Response: I know..but the next chapter is in queue, so you should be seeing it soon! Thnaks -
Reviewer: Didi04 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 5: Scramble
laughing tears here.....excellent. loving Alice.
Author's Response: Love knowing you're still enjoying - thanks!
Reviewer: Didi04 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 4: Checking
lovin this story. i absolutely love the ones that make me laugh my ass off, so thanks. keep it up.
Author's Response: Thank you - I love knowing you got a good laugh from their antics...!
Reviewer: HeToldMeBeSafe (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl
Nooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!! What have you done!?!? No, no, no, no, no, no!!!
You can't kill him! Poor Edward!! James deserves to die!! Not Edward! :'(
Fix this!!! Now!!!! :'( They were so happy together:) This can't be happening!
Author's Response: The next update should be coming very soon - I know, this was a tough chapter...but hang int here!
Reviewer: kaybrans (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl
NO don't kill edward!!!! :)
Author's Response: Hang in there until the next chappie - should be posted any time!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl
Oh God, I'm having a heart attack! What did you let happen to poor Edward!!!!!
Author's Response: I know - hang in there with me until Tues, we'll get some details in the next couple of chapters!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 28: Goal
That was really very sweet! He showed his commitment in so many different ways. Sigh.
Author's Response: Sexy Romantic Committedward...rawr!
Reviewer: roxnroll (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl
Nooo-not Edward!!!!!! This has been such a wonderful story so far. I actually have been reading this over the past few days and I love it.
I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!
Rox
Author's Response: Thanks for joining us - although it is probably no tthe most opportune time, right? Glad you're enjoying so far, though - next chappie will be up on Tues!
Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl
Ok..breathe...
I just keep telling myself, you won't let Edward die. There is no way you would let Edward die.
Lucard on the other hand, I'm hoping is dead. And it's possible, since Bella saw Edwards hockey stick standing straight up from the "ground"...I'm hoping more like straight up from Lucards body...where Edward stabbed him with it. Is that sick that I'm hoping for that?? haha
Great chapter...although it was sad!
Author's Response: I know - it was sad - made me sad, too! Hang in there with me until Tues - thanks for having faith!
Reviewer: km1970 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl
OMG. It's all too much. Pleae make the next chapter soon and a reprieve from this nightmare. Poor Edward. Poor Bella. I can't stand it. I love your Edward so much
Author's Response: Thank you for loving him as much as I do - hang in there with me until Tuesday...
Reviewer: archy (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 17: Screen
how come she didn't tease him about the ''exhibition''?
Author's Response: It didn't make it into this version of the story - it's much better told from EPOV, which we'll hopefully see some time in the future...
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl
No, please fix it.
Author's Response: Bear with me until Tuesday...we'll get some details then, I promise...
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl
Victoria lured Edward and Bella to stop. It was a trap. I actually thought it was a set up. Especially when Bella saw the other car. Bella was smart though calling her dad right away. She knocked James out at first with the hockey stick, but should have kept pounding on his head, back, wherever she could reach. Wouldn't even have cared if she killed him. With his last ounce of strength Edward took James down to protect Bella. He obviously was in bad shape with all the blood, pipe to his mid section, head bleeding, and all the vomiting. sounded like concussion, bruised/cracked/or broken ribs. Made even worse by James kicking him. What a coward, James couldn't meet Edward on an even keel. Had to get him alone but not man enough to fight one on one. No he was prepared with weapons. The pipe for Edward and whatever he threw at Bella to tie up her ankles for her to fall. I hate James. Such a creep. Also sounds like James broken Bella's leg/ankle. All three will be in the hospital getting treatments. Edward will be out of commission for quite awhile. Did he fall into a coma? Or just pass out like Bella? Looking forward to the next chapter. Can't wait to see what Charlie does to James. Does anybody own a bullwhip? James sure does deserved to be whipped. He has done nothing but cause pain. He needs to feel pain himself. Hoping he has a concussion also.
Author's Response: We'll get some answers and some details next chapter on Tuesday - thanks!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl
I think it was harder reading this the second time. It started off so good - with them in their post-loving bliss and ended so heartwrenching tragic.
I couldn't believe the turn of events. James is truly an evil and cruel bastard. I was glad that Bella tried to help Edward. I realize it wasn't the most brilliant of choices but it was realistic that she wouldn't listen and would help.
I truly hope that Edward will be ok. I adore him and don't know if I can handle something bad (really bad) happening to him. I may need the support group for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for loving him as much as I do. I know it was hard to read, but hang in there with me until Tuesday - we'll get some details in the next couple of chapters...
Reviewer: helena_handbasket (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl
You. Are. Killing. Me.
I hope you're happy!
(Actually, you should be. You've gotten your readers to care so much and your Chapter Of Agonizing Agony was really well written.)
~Patiently Waiting For More~
Author's Response: Thank you - I've been humbled by how much everyone loves this Edward, it really showed with the comments for this chapter! And I just may rename this chapter I love yours so much! Hang in there with me...
Reviewer: sulin0105 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl
hey! dont do this! edward must be alright!
Author's Response: Thanks for caring about him so much...bear with me until Tuesday...
Reviewer: ipreferbrunettes (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl
I don't do grief well, so if he dies....well I'm sorry but I gotta stop reading! And if he can't play hockey again....not happy!
Author's Response: I know - thanks for caring about him so much, and hang in there with me until Tuesday...We'll get some details in the next couple of chapters.
Reviewer: jadeokelani (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Lineup
So I power read this fic in like 2 days - NATURALLY I would wait to read it until THAT'S the last chapter updated. Oh, my luck. Really wonderful fic - it might be my favorite AH high school fic I've ever read!
I kind of felt it coming when "Goal" was all beautiful and perfect and big plans for the future and lack of condom-wearing - and then of course, the big one-two punch. Brilliantly done. I'll just be over here in a corner, obsessively checking for an update.
Author's Response: Thanks for joining us - but yeah, the timing stinks a little, huh? Thank you so much for the compliment - I really appreciate it and am glad you're enjoying the story! The next chapter is in queue, so it should be up any time
Reviewer: Elizmeagan (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl
Boy, that one was a hard one to read. Hard to see bad things happen! Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: It was hard...hang in there with me until Tues, we'll get some answers then - thank you!
Reviewer: arian134 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl
OH NOOO!!!!!!! update soon!!!
Author's Response: Hang in there with my until Tues...
Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl
Oh god! what a cliffie. Been reading this all day! what an ending. Please let Edward be ok.
Author's Response: Thanks for joining us - you picked a doozy of a time, right? Bear with me until Tuesday, we'll get some answers in the next couple of chapters.
Reviewer: TigerGirl (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl
Holy crap!!! Amazing chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! *wipes brow* It was a tough one...
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