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Reviewer: she-rah (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve

Poor Edward!  He won't have any memory loss will he?  omg it would be just awful if he forgot his love for Bella! 

Happy Fourth sweetie!  Drop me an email n let me know what all is happening over there!  What's new with you-know-who?  When are you coming back for a visit? 

Going to see Eclipse on Monday!  First showing of the day, then the following Monday we're hitting the IMAX at Henry Ford to realllllllllly get the experience!  Have you seen it yet? 



Author's Response:

Give me one more chappie and then we'll be heairng from Edward...and you'll be gettng an e-mail soon - promise!

Reviewer: need2read (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve

That was such an amazing chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you - I appreciate you letting me know you liked (even though I know it's sad...)

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve

I hope i never have to see that asa a mother!

Author's Response:

No kidding - I know it's been hard the past couple of chapters, but thanks for sticking with me!

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Sexygirl2 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve

Oh poor Bella.....Thank God Carlise let her do that in Edwards' room. Oh, I just know he is going to be ok, long road to recovery but ok right? I love this story so much and I so want a happy ending.....and for him to go to college play hockey and for her to join him there. Can't wait until next time!



Author's Response:

Give me one more chapter and then we'll take a turn for the happier...Thanks for sticking with me!

Reviewer: LuckyLamb (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve

I know that people probably tell you this all the time, but I love this story. If you don't mind my asking, how many chapters do you plan on making it?



Author's Response:

That's okay, I never get tired of hearing it! I'm glad you're enjoying. I've got thirty-five chapters planned, so we're getting close to the end of this story...

Reviewer: wazzoes (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve

thanks for the quick update things are starting to look a little better for B & E



Author's Response:

Thngs will take a turn for the better soon...Thanks!

Reviewer: breakingdawn57 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve

Thanks for not leaving us on pins and needles. Hopefully Edward will remember Bella? Hmm



Author's Response:

You won't have to wait for long - only a couple of days...Thanks for sticking with me!

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve

i really hope that james goes away for life! and that he never sees the light of day again!



Author's Response:

We'll get more details about James and Co. in an upcoming chapter...Thanks!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve

Totally should not have read this in Panera. Crying like a baby. I hope he wakes soon and quickly . So will James be charged with attempted murder ?

Author's Response:

Things will be taking a turn for the happier soon...thanks for sticking with me! And we'll get more details about James in an upcoming chapter.

Reviewer: kayphere (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve

Sigh of relief.  How painful for all.  And what of Lucard?  Hope it's bye-bye!!!

 



Author's Response:

We'll be getting more details about james later - thanks for sticking with me!

Reviewer: HeToldMeBeSafe (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve

OMG! This is so emotional written, I really feel for these characters. I hope everything will be okey, and that they find Victoria! Edward is truly a hero and I really hope he will be able to play hockey again. See you on Tuesday :D



Author's Response:

I know it's been hard, but I am glad to know the emotions are coming through. Next chappie is in queue, so it will be up soon! Thanks

Reviewer: Branin (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve

These chapters are making me cry every time! I hope you don't make us wait long for Edward to wake up!



Author's Response:

Give me one more chappie and then things will take a turn for the happier - thanks for sticking with me!

Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve

::sobbing::

 

::sobbing::

 

::sobbing::



Author's Response:

Give me one more chappie, and things will look better...thanks for sticking with me!

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve

as long as edward is going to be ok



Author's Response:

We'll hear from him soon...thanks for sticking with me!

Reviewer: TwilightLove48 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve

amazing as always :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: leerleer (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 30: Body Check

Wow this was awesome please update soon

Author's Response:

Thank you - glad you're enjoying!

Reviewer: Anitabonita2413 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 30: Body Check

I totally agree with Bella. I don't wish death on anyone but the fact that Edward is in surgery because of this lunatic would send me wanting to take matters into my own hands too. I'm happy that Edward was able to protect Bella from James. I just hope Edward is not hurt to bad.  



Author's Response:

I know, she was a bit distraught, but I'd do the same thing, too!

Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 30: Body Check

Wow. Super depressing. Still great! But so, so sad.

I love Edward even more. Is that even possible? It must be. I felt like my  heart was just bursting, like I was feeling everything Bella was in this chapter! Edward did so much to try and save her. He always puts her first. I can't wait for next chapter to find out how Edward is doing!

And I have to say, I was really hoping James died. Although I agree with Bella, that I wouldn't want that guilt and all that put on Edward.

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know you're loving the boy  - more on his condition next chapter!

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 30: Body Check

He really IS a hero.  My poor boy!



Author's Response:

He is - and we'll learn more about his condition next chapter - thanks!

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 29: Bench Clearing Brawl

Okay... I am glad to be a few chapters behind.  I would have vomitted if I had to stop here.

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 28: Goal

Ah, this was so romantic and so erotic. I loved the dialogue at the end!

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 30: Body Check

I am glad and relieved that Edward is doing well so far.  Bella is breaking my heart.  Her fear and pain for Edward is overwhelming.  I do love that she is still showing her spunk - by wanting to hurt James.  Her reaction was completely understandable to me.

I am anxious for more.  I hope that he recovers well and soon!



Author's Response:

Me, too, I think I'd do the same thing! More on how he's doing next chappie!

Reviewer: roblovertina (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 30: Body Check

really good carnt wait fo up date does james get to bella or edward in hospital oooooooo so good



Author's Response:

Next chappie - on Saturday - Bella will chat with Carlisle about Edward's condition. See you then!

Reviewer: edwardandbellaforever (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 30: Body Check

i'm so happy Edward is alive!! Almost all is forgiven! You'll be back on my huggable list if you kill James and let Edward live! I'll even do a happy dance just for you! Right now all you're getting is a little jiggle 'cos of thjat cliffy... i'm gonna have a heart attack one of these days if you keep ending it like that!!!

Loved the update... super Edward to the rescue! Love conquers all and all that jazz!!!



Author's Response:

Oh, I like huggable lists - I'll see what I can do! ;)

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