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Reviewer: Anitabonita2413 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve
Are we going to find out what the red head was that used as a decoy? I want to know what she told Edward when he
Author's Response: We'll hear a little more about the red-haeded accomplice, but not what she said to Edward in this story because Bella didn't hear it...
Reviewer: saene (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve
great chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve
Crying like a baby over here. I remember seeing my brother in ICU with tubes everywhere imaginable, it's heart breaking. And I'm glad they let Bella see him.
Author's Response: It is hard...I've spent time in the ICU with my hubby years ago and with a good friend before that...but thank goodness both had a happy ending.
Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve
So sad..I feel so bad for Bella. And the rest of the family. I so love this story and hope that everything ends well.
Author's Response: Glad you're loving the story - thanks for sticking with me. Give me one more chapter, and then we'll see happier times...
Reviewer: fudgie (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve
Awesome story!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: mjwpg (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve
Awesome as always!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with me!
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve
Okay, please give us an awake Edward next chapter!
This is killing me them not being together!
As usual though love your work!
Author's Response: Give me one more chappie and then we'll be hearing from Edward...thanks for sticking with me!
Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve
OMG!!!!!!! this chapter is so powerful.....God I just about cried though the whole thing...You are a wonderful author and captured the raw emotions of Bella so well.....thank you for a wonderful chapter and i can't wait until the next one....hopefully Edward will be awake and be on the mend......
Author's Response: Thank you - I know it's sad, but I am glad her emotions came through so well. Give me one more chapter and then things will take a happier turn...
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve
Bella always thinking of others beside herself. When she woke the second time Carlisle was with her. Her first question was regarding Edward's condition. She was told he was stable. Her second concern was how Carlisle was doing. Carlisle asked what happened and she asked if she could tell everyone together one time rather than repeat the story over and over again. She wanted to be with Edward for support and to make sure he was okay. Edward had some extensive injuries. Carlisle was able to arrange it. Carlisle, Esme, and Charlie were outside the door in the hallway listening to Bella's account of the events. Charlie told Bella he couldn't take the statement due to being family. Conflict of interest. She was holding Edward's hand while she gave the events from Edward picking her up at home. She told him picnic in the meadow. She left out intimate details. She wondered how James knew to set the trap. Officer Wesley said he believed James was following them. Bella is hoping he didn't see them in the meadow. She explained on the drive home they saw a woman stranded with her hood up. Edward being the gentleman stopped to help her. While he was out of the vehicle James approached and beat him repeatedly with the pipe. Bella's emotions kicked in periodically with sobs from her. The thought of all the blood and injuries of Edward. How she got his hockey stick out of the trunk and hit James in the back of the head. While James was out cold, Bella talked to Edward and tried to drag him to the car to head for the hospital. James awoke and Edward drove at James telling Bella to get to the car. James grabbed Bella broke her leg/ankle. To the conclusion of Edward hitting James over the head with the pipe and pinning his shoulder into the ground. Bella considers Edward not only a hero, but her superhero. It was hard for Bella to see Edward in ICU, but his being with her when she told the story gave her strength. Esme hugged her and thanked her for her son. Each one of them was a hero, a savior for the one they loved. I can only imagine the pain of the parents listening to Bella's account of the events. From each blow, kick, punch, slap, cracked bones, gravel scratches, etc... The visions those words created in their minds to see the damage and horror done to their children. Charlie was so glad his little girl was still with him. Bella asked her dad to postpone Renee's arrival until Edward was on the mend. She couldn't deal with worrying about Edward and Renee. Trying to calm her mother's hysterics. Only curious what condition James wound up in. Hopefully he's still in a coma as well.
Author's Response: We'll get more details about James in an upcoming chapter, and things will take a happier turn soon - thanks for sticking with me!
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve
Very hard chapter to read, but well worth it. ;)
Author's Response: I know it's been hard lately, but things will be taking a happier turn soon...
Reviewer: Meghaja (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve
I hope it doesn't take too long for him to recover.
Author's Response: Give me one more chappie, and then things will take a happier turn...Thanks for sticking with me!
Reviewer: SugarBluesSmoken (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve
gasp! if he has a brain injury that bad, he might not remember bella!!please update soon!
Author's Response: We'll be hearing from Edward soon - bear with me for another chapter...Thanks!
Reviewer: Meiki (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Lineup
*narrows eyes* Alright... you've just won my undying loyalty with that response.
Reviewer: abc (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve
Wow! Heart wrenching chapter! Thanks for not leaving us hanging long.
Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with me!
Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve
Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve
I love this story. You have to read this chapter with Kleenex by your side but it is worth it. The love between those two and the family that surrounds them is enthralling. I actually can feel my chest constrict when I read Bella's story. Thank you. Also great touch at the end where Esme acknowledges Bella's efforts. Thank you and I can not wait to see the consequence for the red head whom I am assuming is "Victoria-esque" in villany. Again I am sincerely grateful you did not kill either Bella of Edward. Having them around makes everything richer!
Author's Response: I know the last few chapters have been hard, but thanks for sticking with me and letting me know that the emotions are coming through. We'll be getting more details about James and Co. in an upcoming chapter, and things will take a turn for the happier soon...
Reviewer: sapphire_light (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve
oh my friggin goodness. *sniffs* that was just...i *really* need edward to make a full miraculous recovery--i didnt want his injuries to be that bad. that was touching. i hope her statement is enough to have james put away for the rest of his life!! and please let edward wake up next chapter...
Author's Response: Give me one more chapter and then we'll be hearing from Edward...thanks for sticking with me!
Reviewer: kathy6900 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve
He is a damn hero. :) Another great chapter. Hurry with the updates! I need to see Edward's dazzling green eyes again!
Author's Response: I think he's a hero, too. Give me one more chappie and then we'll see those eyes again...Thanks!
Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve
*sniff* *sniff*
great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with me!
Reviewer: melferd (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve
Mine too.
Author's Response: He is a hero - and Bella, too! Thanks...
Reviewer: warpedweaving (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve
I love it! Bella was such a badass! Can't wait for Edward to wake up. I want to know what he was thinking!
Author's Response: Give me one more chappie and then things will take a turn for the happier...Thanks!
Reviewer: RobstenLuvre (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve
Ugh, you are absolutely killing me with this stuff :( I don't think a fic has ever made me so depressed/lonely/empty than yours has the past few chapters!! When am I gonna see Edward again? When will he wake up? Will he make a full recovery? Will he be able to play hockey again? What will happen with James? I am literally going INSANE...
Author's Response: I know it's been hard the past couple of chapters, but I am glad the emotions are coming through. Giv eme one more chappie and then we'll be hearing from Edward again - thanks for sticking with me!
Reviewer: whypick (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve
Thank you so much for posting today. I was worried I wasn't going to get my fix this weekend, because I am hooked on your story. I love the humor in the characters and the great interaction. I'm waiting for Alice and Jasper to visit. Great work. Thanks so much.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for letting me know you're enjoying! We'll be seeing some of the others very soon!
Reviewer: she-rah (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve
Poor Edward! He won't have any memory loss will he? omg it would be just awful if he forgot his love for Bella!
Happy Fourth sweetie! Drop me an email n let me know what all is happening over there! What's new with you-know-who? When are you coming back for a visit?
Going to see Eclipse on Monday! First showing of the day, then the following Monday we're hitting the IMAX at Henry Ford to realllllllllly get the experience! Have you seen it yet?
Author's Response: Give me one more chappie and then we'll be heairng from Edward...and you'll be gettng an e-mail soon - promise!
Reviewer: need2read (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 31: Injured Reserve
That was such an amazing chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you - I appreciate you letting me know you liked (even though I know it's sad...)
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