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Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Lineup
Ha! This sounds great. Can't wait to see where you take this. ;)
Author's Response: Thank you - hope you continue to enjoy it!
Reviewer: Ilse (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 6: Rebound
good chapter hope you update really soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks - next one up on Saturday!
Reviewer: ga4ever (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 6: Rebound
Hi,
great chap :) but, one thing: I, too, want to feel free... I think that many of us would die and go directly to heaven if Edward would say something like this to us...
update soon
xx
Author's Response: I know - full permission and unrestricted access? Gah...
Reviewer: edwardandbellaforever (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2010 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 6: Rebound
Woo hoo! Lol! Finally things are moving on and i can't wait for the next installment!
Author's Response: Edward's been confused, but he's had enough of that - time to get it on!
Reviewer: april09 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 6: Rebound
Don't feel bad--it was a liitle vague in the wording! (when he asks her to homecoming)
Loving the awkwardness. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: He was vague, and Bella (and I!) just had no idea he was actually, truly interested, so it never occured to her he might be asking her to the dance...ah, the awkwardness of those years...
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 6: Rebound
good thing....I was starting to get preturbed!
It will be about time.....hopefully you'll update soon!
I liked this chapter....hopefully he is just feeling torn as to what to do ans say to Bella............
Author's Response: It's a bit of a slow burn, but don't worry, they're going to get cooking soon!
Reviewer: njdevil30718 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 6: Rebound
i love the banter they have now, too cute......i was really surprised how anrgry he was in the hallway with her.....i thought she was gonna bolt
Author's Response: Nah, she was just shocked that he might be feeling insecure, too - she had no idea!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 6: Rebound
ready for more
Author's Response: Should be up on Saturday - ish!
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 6: Rebound
I love this chapter. Can't wait til they get their shit together.
Author's Response: Oh they will - E's a smart guy...
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 6: Rebound
Yay! They are starting to make progress ...finally!
Author's Response: Edward's starting to figure out that she's just shyer than most girls - but he likes it - and they'll get it together!
Reviewer: TessLouise (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 6: Rebound
Her internal musings are pretty funny!
Author's Response: Edward's the best kind of inspiration, isn't he?
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 6: Rebound
bella is totally oblivious and needs a wake up call. i seriously hope she tells edward that she didn't realize he was asking her out. can't wait to read the next one! ;-)
Author's Response: They're both a little insecure about the other's feelings, but they're both smitten, so...they'll figure it out very soon!
Reviewer: wishfulthinking (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 6: Rebound
Yes! Come onnnnnn next chapter!
Author's Response: I know, finally, right? Should be up Saturday - ish.
Reviewer: jessicasheehan (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 6: Rebound
I am so loving this story. My husband was making fun of me for reading it with a big old grin on my face. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Oh, that's a fabulous compliment, thank you! Next one up Saturday-ish.
Reviewer: Laine Quinn (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 6: Rebound
This story is seriously good. Maybe you should try to incorporate some Mystery, Alaska references in. That was a pretty good hockey movie, since you have a bunch in here already.
Author's Response: There was a little chat in the reviews for that chapter about Mystery, it is a good one. The line about the Zamboni making her wet cracks me up every time...
Reviewer: Dada2612 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 6: Rebound
I loved it.
Please update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thank you - next one up early this weekend!
Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 6: Rebound
so , i really enjoy this story .
you should update .
Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter up on Sat, I think.
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 6: Rebound
Wow I hope the next chapter doesn't take to long because I am ready for these two to get their shit "together"!
Poor Edward looked pretty uncomfortable in Biology!
Author's Response: I know, I kind laugh, thinking the poor boy's going to get hard just walking into the classroom pretty soon...Ah, young love... ;)
Reviewer: Nilla (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 6: Rebound
Ooh, loving this story. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! Great to know you're enjoying!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 6: Rebound
great chapter at least there is some flirting now
Author's Response: Edward's about done with being confused, he'll make some stride next chappie!
Reviewer: seattlegirl (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 6: Rebound
Really enjoying your story, especially Bella's internal bantering with herself :)
Author's Response: Thank you - she's got one heck of an insiration for her musings, doesn't she?
Reviewer: she-rah (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 6: Rebound
Well well well....so communication is a good thing! Nice chapter to set up the hockey game weekend. My guess is that they're going out after the game? Hope so finally! Biology seems to be getting a tad uncomfortable for both of them. Time to make it fun!
Wings clinch a playoff berth! Whew! Now they have to stay injury-free. Wait----does Edward get injured? Hmmm.....hubby was out 6 weeks once with a seperated shoulder, has been knocked out on the ice, broken front tooth, stitches in mouth, smashed nose...yikes! I'm sure there's some I've forgotten. Can you believe in all instances except when he was knocked out that he always finished the game? These guys are crazy. Paging Nurse Bella? :-)
Author's Response: Oh, you should know me better than that! Once he decides he's done with all the confusion and mixed signals, do you think he'll share? Hmm...
Go Wings - now the city can stand down from the hari kari. We could have an afternoon of comapring hubby injuries - I've spent more time in the ER with him than any wife should - they knew us by name at U of M ER when we lived in A2, stopped asking us for his insurance card. Ribs, collarbone, shoulder, hand, knees, too many fingers and toes to count, nose, splenectomy (that was ten days in the hospital, five in intensive care and two blood transfusions) and a titanium plate with eight screws in his arm...just off the top of my head...yeah, crazy. :0
Reviewer: peltohen (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 6: Rebound
Keewp it coming - I love your fast updates!
Author's Response: Thank you, next one up on Saturday!
Reviewer: Nikkycoly (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2010 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 6: Rebound
Aww man oh well...at least they are moving somewhere and flirting a little. You have to start somewhere right? I cant wait for more.
Author's Response: He;s starting to figure out what he needs ot do, and she's starting to realize he really likes her! Gonna be fun!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2010 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 5: Scramble
great story
Author's Response: Thank you!
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