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Reviewer: beansprout (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 12: Save
arghhhhhhhhh...
now I can't wait for the next chapter... (^_~)
Author's Response: At least they got their smoochies in before dad showed up! Next chapter on Saturday!
Reviewer: Bluecanoe (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 12: Save
That was a hoot! Close call!
Author's Response: Very close! Imagine getting caught by Charlie decked out in full uniform and equipment...poor Edward!
Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 12: Save
This reminds me of calls of 5 0 , 5 0 ! LOL
Author's Response: LOL!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 12: Save
great chapter!! update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Next chapter up on Saturday.
Reviewer: kaybrans (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 12: Save
Sneaky Edward!! I realllllllllly like!!! :)
Author's Response: Clever boy! Glad you liked!
Reviewer: megsten (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 12: Save
Super cute chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you - love heairng you're enjoying!
Reviewer: Brandinm05 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 12: Save
Oh sweet baby jesus! This story is just..... ugh! So... ugh! Ha, words can't even explain! The tension between Edward and Bella until they finally kiss, adn when they do! Sparks fly- fireworks go off... It's just incredible!
Seriously- i don't think I've laughed so hard while reading a fanfic before-- ever! Thanks so much for writing this story, its amazing! can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: So glad you hung in there through all the UST and liked their first kiss! And thank you - really - I take it as a great compliment when I hear you get good laughs and are enjoying the story.
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 12: Save
This is just an absolutely wonderful story....I recently discovered and was disappointed when I had to wait for another chpater. I'm glad I didn't have to wait for long.
Author's Response: So glad you found us, and thank you for letting me know you're enjoying! I'm updating twice weekly, on Tuesdays and Saturdays.
Reviewer: chewycui2 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 12: Save
oooh yay!! :D lol I can understand Edward's frustration. They're always being interrupted, so much so even I'm frustrated. hahaha. great chapter :)
Author's Response: I know - I put everyone through a lot of UST and frustration, but hopefully their first kiss was worth the wait!
Reviewer: Tsherm (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 12: Save
wow... Great chapter! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter up on Saturday.
Reviewer: warpedweaving (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 12: Save
Fucking finally!!! That was hot...and hilarious! And quite the teaser...can't wait for that update!
Author's Response: Glad you liked their first kiss - and yeah, I'm a fan of button flys!
Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 12: Save
I laughed out loud...ALOT! They are being stalked by the God of akward situations. Thanks for the post and looking forward to their next adventure.
Author's Response: Love hearing you laughed while reading - love it when that happens to me! Yeah, one of them is really a bad luck magnent *bella*, but they're working through it!
Reviewer: tracey1520 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 12: Save
Haha I loved the ending! Oh Emmett
Author's Response: Glad you liked - and there will be some Emmett eventually!
Reviewer: kayphere (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 12: Save
Finally! Bravo, encore! Whew... I want him to kiss me......
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with me - and I completely agree. Who wouldn't want some out of control smoochin from Edward?
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 12: Save
hahahahahahahaha hilarious!!!!!!!!!!!! GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Couldn't stop laughing!!!!!!!!! Fun times being a teenager!!!!
Author's Response: Oh, it's so much fun messing with them! Love hearing it made you laugh - thanks!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 12: Save
They may have escaped Charlie for now, but I have a feeling that the stubble rash on Bella's face may give her away! I hope she wears it proudly!
Author's Response: Oooh, Edward stubble rash...excuse me for a second...
Reviewer: kjoyp (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 12: Save
Smooth. Very smooth. Not to mention lucky.
Author's Response: Imagine getting caught by Charlie...yikes!
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 12: Save
hot!!! great first kiss. so lucky they went to his car. can't wait to read the next one!
Author's Response: Glad you thought it was worth the wait - next one up on Saturday!
Reviewer: roxxidoll (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 12: Save
I loved this chapter!!!! Can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed! Next chaoter up on Saturday.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 12: Save
Wow they are so cute!
Author's Response: They're havng fun - especially now that their feelings are out in the open!
Reviewer: eliza6801 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 12: Save
Awesome. It almost makes me miss high school... nope nevermind. There was no Edward Cullen at my school. I'll stick with fiction. Great chapter!
Author's Response: I know - fun to be nostalgic, but don't want to go back. That's why fic is so great!
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 12: Save
About time! I swear, I was going to bust with anxiety if they didn't get that kiss. This story is so close to real life it's crazy. Brings back alot of memories. Great job with this. I'll be waiting to see what else these kids can get into. ;)
Author's Response: Thank you - love to know it's at least a little realistic! It's been *a while* since those days, but who can forget the crazy emotions and drama of those years?
Reviewer: buggybell13 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 12: Save
awwww! thanx for mentioning my banner!!!
and keep writing! ur awesome!!!
Author's Response: Love the banner - thank *you*!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 12: Save
damn that was a hot 1st kiss....lol, omg if she would have gotten busted by Charlie....yikes! will Jazz & Alice be able to sneak out the back?
Author's Response: Whew - glad you thought it was worth the wait! And yeah, just imagine getting caught by Charlie - poor Edward! Alice and Jazz make it out safe and sound, don't worry! Alice might have had a feeling they'd need to make a quick exit...
Reviewer: vegetarianvamps (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2010 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 12: Save
FINALLY!!
And I think the wait was worth for Bella! Edward Cullen kissed her against the wall and it was.. I can only think amazing. Raise your hand if you want to be Bella Sawn right now *raises hand*
Hahahaha, I laughed so much when Charlie arrived, they were so scared!
Author's Response: Hope the wait was worth it for everyone! Wall-slam kisses...yeah. And just imagine if Charlie would have caught them! Good thing Edward's a brave boy!
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