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Reviewer: sareliz (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 13: Slow Whistle
::happy grin:: Oh, it so lovely. Thank you for another delightful chapter, and I so look forward to the next. :)
Author's Response: Happy grin right back atcha! Thank you!
Reviewer: klingie (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 13: Slow Whistle
The things I would do with Edward if we were alone in my room! LOL
Author's Response: I can't even wrap my brain around actually having Edward in my bedroom..oh, wait, maybe I can...!
Reviewer: Cora (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 4: Checking
Hey!
I have so much fun reading this...I don't know why I haven't discovered this story until now.
I don't know if anyone else told you but the German phrase was absolutely correct :-)
Lots of greetings from Austria!
Cora
Author's Response: I'm glad you found us, and love heairng you're enjoying the story! Also glad the German was correct - for some reason the languages gave me fits when I tried to format it to transfer over to Twilighted, so it was kind of a mess to get it to display correctly!
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 13: Slow Whistle
So good--really enjoying--can't wait for more! Incredible UST!
Author's Response: And the big fun is getting to resolve all the U in that UST...! So glad you're continuing to enjoy.
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 12: Save
Wow!
Author's Response: Bella had had enough - and so had we, I think!
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 11:Power Play
Great! Mmmm...Edward in a hockey uniform....
Author's Response: My own personal fantasy Edward has always worn a hockey uniform...he's been fun to write!
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 10: Give And Go
So good! Really enjoying!
Author's Response: Thank you - never get tired of hearing it!
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 7: Equalizer
So good!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 4: Checking
I'm really enjoying this story! Saw it rec'ed on facebook!
Author's Response: I'm amazed and very humbled every time I hear the story is being rec'd - please tell whoever it was on Facebook thank you for me!
Reviewer: Minoy (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 13: Slow Whistle
Wow! Great chapter... hits you right in the heart!!
Author's Response: That's actually great to hear - means I'm doing my job!
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 3: Power Forward
Urk -- hilarious.
Author's Response: Love knowing it gave you a laugh - thanks!
Reviewer: helena_handbasket (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 13: Slow Whistle
I love, love, love this story. Truly. It's such a wonderful blend of the sweet and the sexy and all that first love should be.
Author's Response: Thank you - really. Trying to get the terrifying, wonderful, thrilling, devastating emotions of that first real love expressed in writing was so daunting. I appreciate hearing it came out as I'd hoped!
Reviewer: FanofFiction247 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 13: Slow Whistle
I'm enjoying this story very much. I like that their relationship is progressing at a good pace. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying the pacing - thank you for letting me know you like the story!
Reviewer: edwardandbellaforever (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 13: Slow Whistle
The whole latter part of that chapter i was thinking Charlie was gonna burst in. Thank you for saving my poor heart from spontaneously combusting! I'm loving how they're moving on in their relationship (and the whole 'accidental' meeting at the grocery store was so cute!)
Can't wait to read the next chapter. I always do a happy dance everytime i see it's been updated!!!!
Author's Response: I think if I kissblocked again there would be an uprising...! I promise I won't to that again - these two are feeling good about what's going on between them and they're ready to have some fun! It makes my day to know you're looking forward to the chapters, so thanks!
Reviewer: Caroline (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 13: Slow Whistle
Love it, update soon
Author's Response: Thank you! Next update on Tuesday.
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 13: Slow Whistle
So Edward is checking out the environment and Bella is checking out Edward. What a suggestive book-cover LOL.
Author's Response: There's all kinds of checking going on! And the graphic for the book cover is the background on my Twitter page - it's actually a real book!
Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 13: Slow Whistle
They should really get it on :L (:
Author's Response: Get it on, they shall - soon!
Reviewer: hisgreeneyes1 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 13: Slow Whistle
All by them selves what trouble they could get into!! I loved the chapter and can't wait for more!
Author's Response: As they start feeling more secure with each other, the more fun they'll have! Thanks - so glad you liked.
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 13: Slow Whistle
Too cute that he wanted to accidently on purpose run into her. He just gets better and better.
Also, I thought Bella's gesture at the end was one of the sweetest I have ever seen. I just adore them!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I just love that whole curling up on a good old male chest idea...
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 02:26 AM · On: Chapter 13: Slow Whistle
Aww nothing like a little make out session to get the young hormones flowing :)
Author's Response: Making out wiht Edward kind of gets my hormones flowing, and they passed young a while ago...! ;)
Reviewer: OCDE (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 13: Slow Whistle
oh. cant wait
Author's Response: Next chapter up on Tuesday - thanks!
Reviewer: chewycui2 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 13: Slow Whistle
oooh love the part at the grocery store where Bella told Edward he missed. Glad to see Bella being more proactive, even though it probably was just a lack of verbal filter at the sight of delicious Edward. hahaha
Author's Response: Bella's getting braver - good girl! She's leaving those insecurities behind, and I think we'll start seeing a much more assertive Bellas from here on out!
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 13: Slow Whistle
great chapter....why cant I get anyone like Edward to go to the grocery store with me....lol...maybe then I would like to go grocery shopping...please continue
Author's Response: I know! I hate grocery shopping, but how much fun would going with Edward be? Food and Edward...hmm, I thnk I might have to work that into a story sometime soon...
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 13: Slow Whistle
another wonderful chapter, very entertaining and highly enjoyable. I can't wait to see what happens next, especially with the teaser you posted in the chapter end notes, I can't wait to see how Edward out thems as a couple, will it be the same as twilights out of the closet moment, or different. Either way I can't wait, because I am sure it will be just as great as this chapter.
Author's Response: So glad you liked both the chapter and the teaser. It will be a classic Hockeyward moment - at least I think so!
Reviewer: naner26 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 13: Slow Whistle
Awesome chapter
Author's Response: Thank you - glad you liked!
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