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Reviewer: helena_handbasket (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 14: Deke
“See you at lunch, Bella. Be safe.” He leaned down and kissed me senseless, before running his nose along my cheek until I felt his mouth at my ear. “Mine,” he breathed softly, and I froze in shock. “Finally.”
*meeep*
Just want to say that this story pretty much owns me.
Author's Response: Haha - I cracked up over your "meeep" - just exactly the response I had - and I hoped to get! So glad you're enjoying - and thanks for letting me know. It makes my day!
Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 7: Equalizer
now I can see he actually is interested in her! wondeful"! :D
Author's Response: Oh, he really is, and has been for a while!
Reviewer: WellMadeMistake (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 14: Deke
Awww.... how cute. I remember being that way with my highschool boyfriend too. Great chapter :)
And girl, do you know your hockey terminology! I love that.
Author's Response: Love me some hockey...I'm a fan. I grew up with a bunch of guys who played, and this Edward is a compilation of all their best qualities. Building the perfect boy...
Glad it brings back memories - hope they're good ones! ;)
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 14: Deke
this is a fun story I love. They are so cute together in their weirdness. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you - so glad you're enjoying! I update on Tues and Sat, so not too long until the next chappie!
Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 5: Scramble
I can edward is somewhat interested in her... but not as much as she is, right? are we having a EPOV?
I'm really into this story
Reviewer: titan24 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 14: Deke
That was adorable. And him carrying her in was hilarious.
Author's Response: Thnak you! Glad you liked him channeling his inner epic caveman.
Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 3: Power Forward
great plot! I'm really interested to see where it goes...
Author's Response: Thanks - hope you like their continuing adventures!
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 14: Deke
The tree outside her window is giving Bella ideas, maybe we will see Edward on a nighttime visit soon? You made me curious for the next chapter at Casa Cullen, can't imagine what she'll do.
Author's Response: Bella's got all kinds of ideas...she'll get to working on them very soon!
Reviewer: klingie (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 14: Deke
Too cute!!!!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks!
Reviewer: phoenixfan1 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 14: Deke
They are too cute together! I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks - so glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 14: Deke
Well that was another great chapter! Kudo points for the whole "caveman" thing, that was an excellent way to let the whole school know!
Well I can see it now, Tanya the obsessed one is going to cause trouble isn't she?
Well I can't wait to B meets Esme and Carlise! When will we all get to meet Rose and Emmett in this story? I can't wait to see the teasing by Emmett that poor Bella and Edward are going to have to put up with!
Author's Response: Thanks - glad you liked Edward channeling his inner caveman! Tanya...well, Bella's not going to let her get away with too much...
And yes, Emmett and Rose are coming back to Forks for the Christmas holidays, so we'll get to meet them later in the story.
Reviewer: ga4ever (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 04:53 AM · On: Chapter 14: Deke
Hi, love the last chaps :) sorry for not reviewing them one by one, but I got sick, and now I've read them all together :)
So, first: Finally, it was about time that Edward and Bella kissed, made out and got together :) love Alice .....
update soon
xx
Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know you're enjoying the story - hope you're feeling better! Updates on Tues and Sat, so not too long of a wait for the next chappie.
Reviewer: warpedweaving (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 14: Deke
Fun as always...wish I had more!
Author's Response: More coming, love hearing you think it's fun!
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 14: Deke
This story is so damn sappy and cute. I think some people over do the angst for these to in twific world. It's nice to see them hit it off so well without all of the drama sometimes.
Author's Response: I love the angst, but sometimes a happy, well adjusted Edward is fun...at least I hope...! There will be some conflict later, but not the usual relationship drama.
Reviewer: ForeverATwilighter (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 14: Deke
I have to say "Awwwwwwww" to the last part on the phone. That was very cute and adorable!! And i love Edward "upping his game" hehehe what girl could resist a sedutive hockey playing edward? I know i couldn't lol.
And if you're preview int he End Notes is any indication it looks like Slut Bella is starting to come out to play? X-D god i can't wait!!!!!!
Author's Response: Bella's got all kinds of thoughts she's going to want to start trying, especially now that she knows he's willing!
Reviewer: kaybrans (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 14: Deke
well who doesn't want to play doctor with him?? LOL :)
Author's Response: I know, right? Thanks - that made me chuckle.
Reviewer: Meghaja (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 14: Deke
This chapter brought a huge smile to my face. I feel like I am in love. I can only imagine what Bella is going to do next. I am looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Making you feel like you're in love is an amazing compliment, so thank you! I'm updating on Tues and Sat, so not too much longer for the next chapter.
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 14: Deke
Ben snorted with laughter. “That one’s actually kind of flattering if you think about it, Edward. You’d have to have the biggest set of brass balls in the world to do it in the back of your girlfriend’s father’s police car.”
Edward shuddered and put his arm causally around the back of my seat. “Sorry, guys, but they crawl up inside me just at the thought of her dad and his gun, let alone his police car.”
We all laughed, and Jasper cringed. “So do mine, come to think of it, and I’m not even dating her.”
OMG that is hilarious
Author's Response: Poor Edward - good thing he's a brave boy! Glad you liked.
Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 14: Deke
Can she be more inept? probably considering it is Bella
Author's Response: Bella's going to step up her own game soo, too, don't worry!
Reviewer: ande (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 14: Deke
This chapter left a smile on my face.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks for letting me know - i love hearing it!
Reviewer: Bluecanoe (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 14: Deke
Well if Edward Cullen was treating me the way Edward Cullen is currently treating Bella in this story, I'd get rather carried away myself.
Author's Response: I feel exactly the same way...carried away for sure!
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 14: Deke
Awe...they're just too damn cute! Great chapter, can't wait to find out more about Tanya...there just seems to be more to it. ;)
Author's Response: Ah, Tanya...don't worry, Bella'snot going to let her get away with much in this story!
Reviewer: vegetarianvamps (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 14: Deke
Awww I wanted to know what Alice was going to say! But I loved what Jasper did!
Umm.. Edward Cullen. I like- LOVE him more and more especially with that show *sigh* But Tanya.. *vomits* I hate Tanya and Edward/Tanya is the worst thing for me... I hate that whore XD Why do I think he slept with the whore *begs* please tell me he didn't, please tell me he didn't!!!
I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Slept with Tanya? Eww - no! He couldn't even get past the "feels like I'm kissing my sister" part. Don't worry, Bella's not going to let her get away with much in this story.
Reviewer: need2read (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 14: Deke
Awesome!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 14: Deke
i love Possesiveward! omg, when he said "mine" i swooned.....*sigh* so freaking hot
Author's Response: Just what I was going for - swoon-worthy Cave-Hockeyward - yum!
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