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Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 35: Game On
I totally forgot this was the last chapter. I kind of want to cry now. This was such an amazing story from start to finish, and it captured me completely. I really hope to get more from these two, I don't think I can let them go.
Your a great author, and thank you for writing the story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much - I love knowing you enjoyed the story. There will probably be an epilogue soemday, but not sure about anything else...
Reviewer: belled_70 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 35: Game On
OMG, I'm reall sad that this story has finished, I have loved every word of it, I hope you do some out takes. I will make sure I add you as one of my favourite authors. Thanks for the ride....lol
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and letting me know you enjoyed! There will probably be an epi...maybe some outtakes...I'm not sure yet!
Reviewer: jesicka309 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 35: Game On
Awwwww a happy ending! hooray!
Author's Response: Thank you - so glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 35: Game On
Thank you. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for for all of your comments and reviews - I really appreciate them, and knowing you enjoyed the story!
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 35: Game On
this was a great story...thx for sharing, will put u on author alert
Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed the story!
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 35: Game On
I have loved this story so much and am sad to see it end, but I love that they will live happily ever after. Isn't fiction grand? I have really enjoyed your style of writing and will eagerly look forward to whatever you come up with next. And yes....I wouldn't mind seeing these two every now and then...just to make sure they're doing okay, y'know? ;) Thanks for all your hard work and a truly wonderful story.
Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed the story...and there will most likely be an epi someday... :)
Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 35: Game On
Great ending! I loved it!!
I definitely wouldn't mind a sequel! :)
Author's Response: NOt sure about a sequel, but there might be an epi posted someday...! Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed the story.
Reviewer: smithle1 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 35: Game On
There has to be a sequel or a long epilogue. This was one of my most favorite stories. I will wait anxiously for anything else you write. Nice job.
Author's Response: Maybe an epi someday...not sure about a sequel...Thank you so much for reading and letting me know you enjoyed!
Reviewer: Shadowdragon13 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 35: Game On
EEEEP! I love these guys so much. Any chance there will be a sequel?
Author's Response: Not too sure about a sequel, but proabbaly an epi someday...Thank you so much for letting me know you enjoyed their adventures!
Reviewer: katiecave (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 35: Game On
Awwww!!! I'm so totally going to miss hockyward... :'( this was a great story. to think when i started reading it you only had like 20 reviews...now look...and you deserve each and every single one of them. Job well done. Can't wait to see what else you have up your sleeves...Talk to you soon...
Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with me to the end, and for letting me know you enjoyed throughout! There will most likely be an epi, and I do have a couple of other tales that want telling... :)
Reviewer: trixie11 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 35: Game On
Such phenomenal writing and fantastic characters!!! BAD NEWS: this wonderful story is coming to its end. GOOD NEWS: now I can read it over and over again from beginning to end without any of those frusterating cliffhangers! :) I eagerly await any new stories you may indulge us with... you are definetely a favorite author cuz YOU ARE CRAZY TALENTED!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love knowing you enjoyed the story and these two kids and their adventures.
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 35: Game On
i'm a little surprised this was the end, i didn't know it was that close, but it was nice :-)
Author's Response: There may be an epi to wrap things up in a neater little bow...but thanks for lettign me know you enjoyed and for all of your comments and reviews!
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 35: Game On
Thank you so much for taking the time to write this amazing story. I loved it, from beginning to end. thanks for giving them a happy ending.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for letting me know you enjoyed the story and for sticking with me until the end - I really appreciate it!
Reviewer: akers (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 35: Game On
Aww, very sweet. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed!
Reviewer: msbf84 (Anonymous) · Date: July 17, 2010 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 35: Game On
Beautiful ending, thank you for sharing this story with us.
Author's Response: THank you for reading and letting me know you enjoyed!
Reviewer: 8vamp8 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 35: Game On
end...? THE END?! :'(
wonderful writing, really. I loved this story!
Author's Response: Thank you - I appreciate you letting me know you enjoyed the story!
Reviewer: botsy (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 35: Game On
I would LOVE a sequel. I didn't want to ask- I'm sure your asked that question a lot- but you totally give me hope when you say 'maybe'. :D I don't even mind if you take time away from these two and play with your other ideas- I can hold out for a possible sequel.
And I liked the ending- it fit the story and was a natural place to stop. It was great to see Edward on the ice again- I wish we had seen more ice-action in the story! Thats hot ;).
Well...... thank you for writing this story. It was a pleasure. I'll honestly admit that I saw it for some time on twilighted before I read it, and that the reason it took me so long to click and read was because I, stupidly, presumed I wouldn't be interested in a hockeyward. How wrong I was. When I finally did click and read, I literally couldn't stop until I had caught up. I am so thankful that I decided to give it a go because I not only proved how wrong I was but I also would have missed a really good story otherwise. I guess the saying is true: never judge a book by its cover. So again, thank you for writing. I look forward to your future stories and any sequel(!!) or outtakes you may write for this one.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for givng it a shot, and letting me kow you enjoyed! Hockey players are amazing, and a hockey playing Edward? In my opinion, just yum! I htink it's great that you weren't sure about Hockeyward at first, but now want to see more ice-time with him! :)) Not too sure about a sequel, but there will most likely be an epilogue someday.
Reviewer: hisgreeneyes1 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 35: Game On
OMG...That's it...NO...I mean what happened to James? Did they go off to college? So many questions. I'm glad everything worked out and all is good though.
Author's Response: James is in a criminal mental institution for the rest of his life...there was a mention of that in one of the last chapters. Glad you enjoyed - there may be a little epi someday soon to get a glimpse into their future... :)
Reviewer: Meiki (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 35: Game On
*roaring applause*
Damn you're good.
Author's Response: Thanks, bb, for all of your reviews and comments, and for sticking with my until the end! There may be an epilogue posted eventually... ;)
Reviewer: Fairest of Them All (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 35: Game On
What!? That's it? :(
Author's Response: I know, I was ssad to see the end, too. Glad you enjoyed, though - thanks!
Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 35: Game On
"He was big, hot, sweaty, and male, and it made me feel delicate, hot, thrilled, and feminine." That right there. Part of me objects when I feel that way because it seems so sexist, but hubs is 11 and about 80 lbs heavier than me (and over 100lbs pre-kids ;) and, yeah, there is just something really masculine about that situation. Plus your head fits really nicely in the dip between their pec and their shoulder.
Love this story. Can't believe it's over. I know stories have to end somewhere - and this is a great place. It leaves us with hope for the future, for them, for Edward and hockey, for Bella not fighting them going to college togther. But, that being said, I would love a short sequel or outtakes showing them at college, marriage, kids, pro-skating, whatever. They are just lovely together.
Author's Response: Nothing wrong with enjoying physical comfort and that thrilling sensation...ahh, yes. That's it exactly. Thank you so much for letting me know you enjoyed the story and this Edward and Bella! We may see a little glimpse into their future in the form of an epilogue someday... ;)
Reviewer: edwardsvolvo (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 35: Game On
Really nice work! Sorry that it has ended but really where can we go from here....I can think of a few places but.....
Look forward to more stories from your brain.
Author's Response: Thank you - I'm so glad you enjoyed the story! I'm not 100% sure where this will go in the future, but there is a strong possibility of outtakes, some EPOV, and probabaly an epilogue eventually...
Reviewer: tallgirl677 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 35: Game On
Wow. I was totally not expecting the ending so soon. But I love it anyway. PLease, please do an epiloge for these two characters, where Edward is playing for the NHL. This entire story from start to end has been an amazing journey, and you are such a talented author. Hope you plan to write again.
Author's Response: Thank you! There will probabaly be an epilogue someday soon, but I can't say with 100% certainty what else is in store. I do have some outtakes and EPOV, so maybe I'll get that up someday, too. I've got a couple of other ideas that want writing, too, so we'll see!
Reviewer: Wlbmh (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 35: Game On
Please let's hear more from these two. I love them :-)! I just re-read the entire story again and it was even better the second time! What a wonderful gift of writing you have, keep it up...
Laura
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love knowing the story was worth a second read. There will probably be an epilogue soemday soon, and maybe some outtakes and EPOV drabbles, but I'll have to see.
Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 35: Game On
LOVED THIS STORY! Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and letting me know you enjoyed!
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