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Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice

i love bellas reaction to edwards world and the family. and carlisle in the study, that was awesome!



Author's Response:

Thanks - so glad you enjoyed meet the parents. Carlisle in the study is one of my faves, too.

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice

I'm with Bella, I think I'd never leave.  And I can understand why things are about to go into the R rating.  Those kisses are just way to explosive!  Can't keep them apart much longer!



Author's Response:

All that UST is about to explode all over them - and us. Yay!

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice

What will Bella take for the team?  Edward maybe?  Oh that will be great!  That new love is so fantastic.  I love your characters.  Charlie was cute.  Wonder if he'll try the birds and bees talk?



Author's Response:

Yep, Bella is willing to sacrifice herself...not that any of us are complaining! S glad you're enjoying the story.

Reviewer: ceri2 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice

I honestly can't get enough of this story, it's like an addiction! I can't wait for the next update



Author's Response:

Thanks - I love hearing you're enjoying the story! Updating on Tuesdays and Saturdays, so not too long of a wait.

Reviewer: roxie1207 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice

aaaargh--what a mean way to end a chapter!  And on mothers day...:)  Will wait for an update, and yes, unfortunately, I am well over the age of 18;)



Author's Response:

I know, but...even a teaser about a half-naked Edward is pretty good stuff on Mother's Day, right?

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice

Bella almost climbing over the desk, I can understand her. They can't keep their hands to each other anymore.



Author's Response:

They're about to start haivng some fun together. I love resolving some UST...

Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice

wow, I love this story... just as a LOVED tangled web! you are truly an amazing author! thanks!



Author's Response:

Thank *you*! I so appreciate knowing you like both stories - makes my day!

Reviewer: warpedweaving (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice

Well now I can't wait for next chapter...



Author's Response:

Fun for everyone next chappie - up on Tuesday!

Reviewer: HeToldMeBeSafe (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice

I love this story.. I catch myself smiling everytime I see you have updated :D Can't get enough. Poor Bella, a half naked Edward... It's a hard life ;P



Author's Response:

Aw, I love that it makes you smile - makes my day to hear it! I know - I figured Bella deserved some fun for all the UST I've put her through...

Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice

Okay, I know I have said this before, but these two kids are going to go up in flames from the feelings for each other if they don't get to have some lemony action soon!

I am glad that we finally got to meet Carlisle and Esme!  I can't wait to meet Emmett and Rose!

Finally, just which half of Edward is naked?  I cant wait for this one!  Are we going to get some lemony stuff?



Author's Response:

They're about to go nuclear - going to have all kinds of citrusy fun. Glad you liked meet the parents, we'll meet Rose and Emmett when they come home for the holidays.  Eeny meenie miney moe on which half of Edward is naked...maybe if we're lucky it will be both...;)

Reviewer: jaja02 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice

OMG THIS STORY IS THE BEST!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you - so glad you're enjoying!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice

Charlie and Carlisle are too freaking funny...hope they got their studying done ( i know i wouldn't be able to concentrate...lol)

Author's Response:

My dad thougth he was a comedian, too, when I was dating. Fun times. Glad you liked!

Reviewer: chewycui2 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice

lol Carlisle the comedian. I wonder why fathers all like to think they're funny. hahaha



Author's Response:

Mine sure did - thought he was a riot. I didn't think so at the time!

Reviewer: Dada2612 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice

Sooo hot. Please update soon!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked - next update on Tuesday.

Reviewer: tmacdon552 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice

Thud!!!



Author's Response:

Ha - I'm going t take that as a you liked it!

Reviewer: ForeverATwilighter (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice

o.o *JUST STARES at the teaser in chapter notes* Oh come on!!!!! That's so unfair lmao!!! But i LOVE that you put that in your end notes :D i don't think i've seen any other author do that. (if i have and any other reviewers are authors who do this i apologize this is just from stories i've read so far).

 

And....*applauds bella* hehe i love this kind of edward and bella!!! the shy inexperienced girl who's experiencing everything new with Edward. The stays to himself shy but loveable to his family and close friends Edward. Oh and very seductive when he knows what he wants *grins impishly* please please update soon!!! i actually want more hockey scenes o.O they've very addicting. that one game alone had me panting and fanning myself after he walked away to go to the locker room to change! Almost as good as Wetward *grins* Hockward takes #2 slot for me hehehe

and that's visual not personality. personality wise nothing beats dirty talking Domward O.O



Author's Response:

Good to know you like the teasers at the end - I wasn't sure when I started doing that if it was silly or not...There will be more hockey scenes, and some citrus of all kinds coming up in furture chapters. Oh, Hockeyward, how I love you...! And I agree with you on both the visual and the personality - yum!

Reviewer: kaybrans (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice

alright screw the books... I'll play doctor with Edward if Bella is to shy!!! Hope you update soon !! :)



Author's Response:

Really - who needs to study. Books, that is...Next update Tuesday!

Reviewer: newecullen1 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice

oh..my...alright bella!!! that was pretty sexy getting hot and heavy with the 'rents just down the hall...reminds me of my hot and heavy HS days and my little fantasies about a certain football player *gazes out the window, lost in thought and lets out a deep sigh* kudos on the chapter....



Author's Response:

I love hearing this brings back fun HS memories - so thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: Bluecanoe (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice

So, where was Edward Fucking Cullen when I was in high school?!!  *sigh*..passionate boy that Edward!!



Author's Response:

I know! Unfortunately, the same place this Edward is, I fear - in our heads! Oh well, we can have fun with him now - better late than never, right?

Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice

i hope these two get some serious alone time next chapter, they need it, LOL



Author's Response:

They need an outlet for all the UST - and so de we! They'll be having citrus fun of all kinds, coming up soon!

Reviewer: Nilla (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice

Yet another amazing chapter. It just gets better and better. More please! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you - love heairng you're enjoying - lots more fun coming right up!

Reviewer: need2read (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice

Fantastic chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you - love hearing you're enjoying!

Reviewer: tallgirl677 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice

Really good. Dieing for the next update.



Author's Response:

Thanks - next chappie up on Tuesday!

Reviewer: roxxidoll (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice

Oooooooh, can't wait for the next chapter. Loved this one! And I love how fast you update, keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thank you for letting me know you like!

Reviewer: vegetarianvamps (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice

'Let me get my keys. And my pants. I’ll drive you to school.' I laughed so much with that! The image of Charlie driving Bella to school wearing boxers HILARIOUS! And then 'the talk' hahaha I loved that.

They have a floor each? Nice! And the intercom system.. Wow. I thought the part with Esme pulling his ear and kissing him was so.. Aww! Carlisle and his jokes.. I love Carlisle. One thing I love about this story is that is canon and you get the characters, I said it before but I'm never going to get tired.

So.. Edward as a doctor? I agree! Y-U-M-MY XD.. and I that teaser! I'm dying for the next chapter :)



Author's Response:

What's even more fun is trying to imagine the design on his boxers! Smiley faces? Hearts? Glad you liked meet the parents - I love me some Carlisle, too. next chappie up on Tues - look out!

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