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Reviewer: vegetarianvamps (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
Awww... how many whores slept with him?
At least Edward finally let her do something. But if he knows Bella has birth control and obviously she doesn't have a disease.. why did he wanted a condom? Maybe he has something?
Author's Response: Oh, he's not a man-whore, don't worry. He's just a normal teenager who is abnormally good looking - so some experience, but nothing whorish. And he wants to use a comdom so he's absolutely sure there's no chance of pregnancy or anything else - he doesn't ever want to go through anything like what he went through wth Bree. He's just being a very careful boy!
Reviewer: djsmommie316 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
Hmmmmmmmmmmm in my experience falling asleep while there is the possibility of parental arrival is never a good idea..............
Author's Response: Oh, he's too clever to fall asleep and get caught by Charlie, don't worry!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed!
Reviewer: ForeverATwilighter (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
DAMN right that makes me curious!!! *fans self* Okay god you are almost beating Wetward visual with all the descriptions you have of Hockeyward!!! He wasn't even playing hockey in this frickin chapter...just wet from the rain!! o.o Please give us more? We need more!!!
I squeal every time i see in my inbox an update of this story so please I can't wait for the next chapter! Although a thought did cross my mind....Ummmm they just fell asleep from the looks of the end of the chapter....won't charlie be coming home from work soon? Dun dun dun.....lol LOVE THE CHAPTER bring more please!!!! I believe we're all rather thirty for some more citrius and lemon hehehe
Author's Response: Ohh, almost beating Wetward? That is good! I think I trumped with wet Hockeyward...maybe? And I'm just thrilled and flattered that you look forward to teh updates - thank you, really, and I so apprecaite you telling me - it just makes me happy! And don't worry about Charlie - Edward didn't fall asleep, he's watching out for his girl.
Reviewer: SonnieShine (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
I seriously do a happy dance everytime I see that hockey stick and puck banner indicating there is a new chapter to this fic!. Way to go responsible Edward! And yeah I thought it was bad before waiting on an update but ith a teaser like that I don't know how I am going to wait!
Author's Response: That's such a thrill for me to hear, so thanks for telling me you look forward to the updates!
Reviewer: newecullen1 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
i'm very curios as to what happens next....that was pretty damn amazing for these two teenagers...kudos on the chapter
Author's Response: Such a relief to know you liked - there was a lot of UST to live up to, so thanks for letting me know it was okay!
Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
OH, how could this happen? shit....
can't wait for the next
Author's Response: Thanks, bb!
Reviewer: TessLouise (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
Um, yep. Pretty curious. :)
Author's Response: Teasers are fun - but not too long to wait (just until Saturday...)
Reviewer: warpedweaving (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
Haha your teaser does indeed make me curious. WTF??
This was perfect. And thanks for not writing every single second of every single day...it's really annoying when writers do that :)
Author's Response: Lots more fun to come! And I think I'd bore myself to tears trying to relate every little detail, even as much as I love this Edward - thanks for letting me know the timing is coming across well in the story!
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
woo hoo....go Bella and Edward...I just hope they dont get busted by Charlie
Author's Response: Oh, no, Edward didn't fall asleep - too busy looking out for (and just at!) his girl!
Reviewer: titan24 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
Uh oh. They fell asleep. That was hot. Great job.
Author's Response: Bella fell asleep, but Edward didn't, don't worry! Glad you liked!
Reviewer: HeToldMeBeSafe (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
Finally! I'm smiling like an idiot :D They are so cute together :)
Bree Tanner, fudge you!! I have a feeling we will hear more from her :(
And that teaser you left us.. Not fair! Why are he showing it to the world? :S
Author's Response: So glad you liked the refreshing little citrus! Lots more fun of all kinds to come.
Reviewer: LadyExcalibur (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
Hot...steamy...perfect. And that little snippet of the next chapter has me very curious. I look forward to it with great anticipation!
Author's Response: Thank you - I so appreciate knowing you like what you're reading!
Reviewer: kaybrans (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
So will Charlie catch them or will they wake-up in time??? :)
Author's Response: Edward didn't fall asleep - he's looking out for his girl, don't worry!
Reviewer: phoenixfan1 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
Wow... Edward sure is responsible! I don't know of many guys that would turn down condom free sex!
Author's Response: Well, they might for a BJ - just sayin'... ;0 He's more about not ever having to go through what Bree put him through, ever again. Scared him right into a comdom...!
Reviewer: mjwpg (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
Very well written scene between the two of them.
Awesome chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thank you - I so appreciate knowing you like what you're reading!
Reviewer: Cindy0510 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
Be still my beating heart. That was just WOW!
Author's Response: Thank you - I really love knowing you enjoyed their little refreshing citrus!
Reviewer: Nilla (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
Loved it, as always! :)
Author's Response: Thank you - so appreciate knowing you liked!
Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice
That was hot '')
Author's Response: Glad you liked! Thank you!
Reviewer: otherworld (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice
I am amazed, and know not what to say.
Seriously though, now I have to go take a cold shower. :-)
Author's Response: So glad you liked - lots more fun for these two to come!
Reviewer: she-rah (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice
Boy, between the Cullen appliances, Carlisle's desk, and Edward's leather couch (almost!), Bella is really bonding with the inanimate objects in the Cullen household! lol!
*sigh* Well, the bugler has indeed played taps for the Wings season. Guess we'll just have to enjoy the Forks Spartans and Defenseward to get our hockey fix!
Author's Response: Bonding with inanimate objest *snicker* My mind is firmly in the gutter tonight!
Still can't talk about the Wings *sniff*
Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice
This is just too cute and good.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks!
Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice
This is just too cute and good.
Reviewer: StephanieCullen (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice
WOW...that was really HOT! Need more...now!
Author's Response: Lots more fun stuff coming - thanks for reading, and I love hearing you're wanting more!
Reviewer: LadyExcalibur (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice
Sexy chapter. It's fun watching them interact as normal teenagers. Ah, the heat and excitement of first love!
Author's Response: Nothing like that rush of being in love for the first time, esp. with someone like our Hockeyward! Le sigh...
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