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Reviewer: edwardandbellaforever (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
i'm more than curious... i'm intrigued and excited too!
That was very hot and also really sweet. :) Oh Naked hockeyward, where have you been all my life! I think it's time for a cold shower!!!!
Author's Response: Mm, naked Hockeyward - that's just yummy!
Reviewer: VioletBlue (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Lineup
Ohhhh NOOOOoooooo WAKE UP, WAKE UP!!! I'm lovin your story. Sweet and sexy, never boring. It's nice to get away from the angst. Looking foward to your next chapter.
Author's Response: Don't worry, Edward didn't fall asleep! So glad you're enjoying...
Reviewer: ande (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
Uh, oh, cardinal sin: They fell asleep. I'll just have to hope they wake up before Charlie gets home and Edward's package on tv? Well, I'd watch. ;)
Author's Response: She fell asleep, he didn't. He's too clever to get caught like that, don't worry!
Reviewer: Bruiser (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
Oh noooo! They just drifted off to sleep, nekkid, in Bella's bed?!
I smell a Charlie moment coming on. <cringe>
But the action was hot while it lasted! :-D
Good for you, not letting them have sex without a condom! Can't be too careful (AND it helps build staying-power!)
Noooooow, we know why the story is called Major Misconduct. ;-D Thanks for sharing all this juicy badness with us!
Author's Response: Don't worry, Edward didn't fall asleep! Gald you liked - thanks!
Reviewer: Bruiser (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice
Holy cannoli, our young Edward went a bit Fifty for a moment there, didn't he?!
Otherwise I think you've captured teendom very accurately. Especially the embarrassment and the admonishments to the parents.
Methinks Charlie should have that Father-Daughter talk sooner rather than later. And Bella should probably visit a gynecologist. :-+
Thanks for sharing! I'm on a roll with another chapter tonight!! <woot>
Author's Response: I don't think anyone can imitate Fifty - he's his own entity! Glad you liked, though!
Reviewer: Bruiser (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 14: Deke
Oh wow...things are moving right along with the manhandling and lockerside kissing. :-) Gonna need to ice them down soon, I suspect! LOL!
I'm giddy...I have 2 more chapters to catch up!
Author's Response: Things are about to get interesting between these two...they can only take to much UST!
Reviewer: peltohen (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
Oh my, I hope Charlie wont catch them sleeping naked. End notes promise well - keep it coming!
Author's Response: Edward didn't fall asleep - don't worry! he's watching out for his girl. Glad you liked!
Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
DON'T GO TO SLEEP!!!!
seriously. Is Charlie going to come home and find them in bed, naked, sleeping? He is going to flip the fuck out. I am PRAYING that they wake up in time to get dressed and act like nothing happened. For some reason, I feel like they will get caught, but I'm really hoping they don't!!!
Great chapter! (and really effing hot! haha)
Author's Response: Edward didn't fall asleep - he's too clever for that rookie mistake! I love hearing you enjoyed the chapter - thanks!
Reviewer: chewycui2 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
Lol national tv? hmm...is he going to get excited during his game or something? haha great chapter as usual! :)
Author's Response: You'll find out soon - next chappie is in queue! Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed,
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
I love these two. I wish the first time I messed around like that was with Edward. And it's great to see how responsible he is being.
Author's Response: First time, second time...hell, any time! Glad you like responsible Edward - being a doctor's kid he knows the facts about the reliability of birth control, plus his past experience would make him be a lot more cautious than most.
Reviewer: seattlegirl (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
Warning: My comments may seem "old-fashioned" and conservative (which is not a word usually used to describe me!!), but I am going to share them anyway :)
Thank you, thank you, thank you for the slow progression of their physical relationship. I must admit that I was worried when you mentioned in the last chapter that lemons were coming up. I thought they were going to go from first kisses to sex in a matter of days. I was very happy to read that weeks had passed as they explored and slowly pushed boundaries. Although I enjoy a good lemon as much as the next person, I often avoid HS fics due to the strong sexual behavior of the teens portrayed. I also don't think it is realistic that Virgin Bellas have sex in the same make-out session where their breasts are being revealed for the first time, but that is how things are often written.
So thank you again for your sweet and realistic story. As always, I love your writing and can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: I don't think old fashioned or conservative - I like to think more good old common sense! There's a very frightening lack of it pretty much everywhere anymore! I'm glad you like the pace and progression of their relationship, I know it's a little slower than a lot of the fics out there. Not that it's necessarily better or worse, this just seems to fit for these two particular characters. Thank you!
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
That was hot and - from the crackling air of the lat chapter - overdue. Bella did handle the stick pretty well. Damn sure I'm curious about what makes Edward flash his privates.
Author's Response: They had a lot of UST to resolve, didn't they? And I've bben wanting to use that particular hockey term as a chappie title - it just seemed to fit!
Reviewer: kyokomarea (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
i just started reading this story this week.. but couldnt stop til i caught up with where you're posting... LOVE it. look forward to the next installment!
Author's Response: Glad you found us - thanks for letting me know you're enjoying the story!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
At least we released some sexual tension. You're killing me over here lol. The whole idea of the rain scene reminds me of the Notebook or Romeo and Juliet (the Leo version). Bella gets two minutes for holding...Edward's cock lol
Author's Response: Ha - at least it wasn't two minutes for slashing *shudders* That would be an entirely different story! And a wet Hockeyward? Way too yummy to resist!
Reviewer: childrenwith4legs (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
hahaha!!! I love your one liner teasers at the end of each chapter. They definitely keep your readers wanting more!
Nice Chapter, I just adore your story! Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad to know you like the teasers - I'm having fun pulling them from the next chapters.
Reviewer: pugsmomma (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
Found you because of a recommendation from someone I follow on Twitter - Loving the story! Can't wait to read more! Super well written, great characters...Love it!
Author's Response: Tell them thanks! I'm always so thrilled and humbled when I hear this has been rec'd. So glad you're enjoying - thank you for letting me know!
Reviewer: Nikkycoly (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
Omg Bella is giving blow jobs already NICE lol Ten bucks Edward dies have sex with her without a condom after things heat up. I was on the depo shot in high school...that shit is full proof lol anywho that was hot I see more fooling around in the near future wooooohoooo
Author's Response: Some things are just irresistable..! ;) That's got to top the list, I'm thinking. Esp. with all of her fun, wicked little thoughts and her enjoyment of reading romance novels!
Reviewer: albalola (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
wow,no words , i'm just ........sigh.....that was ..........hoooooot,and beautiful and i can't waith for the next chapter okay??? don't take to long !!!!thank you
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! Glad you enjoed the little bit of citrus. Next chappie up on Saturday.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
OMG! You CAN'T fall asleep like that. That's a rookie mistake. I love the title of this chapter BTW.
Author's Response: Oh, he didn't fall asleep, he's no rookie! That wouldbe our Bella! The title has to be my fave - I was dying to use it, and it just fit soooo perfectly!
Reviewer: kayphere (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
Oh my, oh my. Wonderful lemon you wrote! My two kids kept trying to talk to me while I was reading (poor things) and I couldn't put my phone down to stop. So I had to reread it a couple more times to make sure I read it all...
Love this story and E x B. Thanks for the quick updates!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the refreshing little lemon -t haks! Such a shame you had to reas dit over again, right? ;)
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
So please tell me that they didn't fall asleep and Charlie comes home to catch them!
I couldn't help but be kinda hurt at the condom excuse. I mean I can completely agree and understand. I have a little boy, don't think I won't tell him to do the same thing.....but I felt for Bella, that he didn't trust her...I know that is just crazy...but I can't help the way that made me feel.
Author's Response: No, Edward doesn't fall asleep - he takes better care of his girl than that! And the condom thing - it's less about trust and more about making sure he never has to go through that again, taking the responsibility on himself. Plus, it's been so ingrained into them to use condoms that it doesn't seem weird - good parenting, right? Ha - can you imagine Carlisle sitting down and having that talk wiht Edward. Or Emmett? Hope that makes you feel a little better!
Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
Beautiful...simply, fantastic! I was a little worried about the pregnancy thing at first, then he continued to explain. One question, exactly how long have they been together?
Anyways, great job as usual. Yes, I'm foaming at the mouth in antisipation over the next chapter. Again, great job. ;)
Author's Response: So glad you liked - thank you! They met in Sept. at the beginning of the school year, and now it's just before Thanksgiving, so end of Nov.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
Damn! Where are those pesky condoms when you need them? Well, I guess they did the next best thing! Now, let's just hope they set the alarm, eh?
Author's Response: Oh, Edward didn't fall asleep - he takes good care of his girl, so don't worry! And I don't think either of them will forget to have a comdom on them somewhere after that!
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
love how the title of this chapter works in with it's content. Very tounge in check. I just love how Bella and Edwards relationship is going ahead in leaps and bounds, not to mention the well written advancements in their physical relationship. I also loved the banter that the characters continue to share, especially Edward and Bella, but Alice and Bella where very entertaining at the start of the chapter.
I can't wait to see what happens next, and find out just how Edward exposes himself on national television. I am sure it will be great.
Author's Response: I have to admit, I love the chpater title - it just fit too perfectly! Dialog is one of my favorite things, so I'm so glad to hear you're enjoying it.
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you!
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