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Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 19: Score
Edward could have easily slept in Bella's room, couldn't he? Who woud have known? This was beautiful. It bothers me that they haven't really discussed Edward's sexual history, though. Bella should know all of that and Edward should have been forthcoming. How many girls has he slept with???
Author's Response: The discussion of Edward's sexual history is coming soon - we'll all learn a little bit about his past endeavors. He could have satayed, but Charlie would definitly be chacking on Bella when he gets home, esp. when he doesn't see her truck in the drive! Edward's way too clever to get caight like that!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 18: The Point
THey are SO precious!
Author's Response: I love knowing you like their characterizations - thanks!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 17: Screen
So was it Tanya who he has sex with? I can't imagine it would have gone that far if he thinks of her so sisterly.... who was it??? He is taking his time with Bella..... I am dying to know the circumstances, how is Bella not curious?
Author's Response: No, not Tanya. We'll get some details of those circumstances later in the story - promise!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 16: Stick Handling
Ugh. Is it wrong that I am disappointed that he's had sex before? he just doesn't seem like the time to do it if he wasn't in love with the girl...
Author's Response: I know...but a boy that good looking, and a hockey player, and seventeen years old...we'll eventually get the info on his past romantic experience.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 15: Home Ice
I love that they can't keep their hands off of eachother!
Author's Response: All that UST building up...yum... ;)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 14: Deke
Gah, I am in love with this story. I can't get enough!
Author's Response: Makes my night - thank you!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 13: Slow Whistle
I just can't read this story without a huge grin on my face. They are precious together!
Author's Response: That's just great - thank you!
Reviewer: junior88 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 22: Clutch and Grab
can't wait to read more, soon..
Author's Response: Thank you! Next one up on Saturday!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 12: Save
THank the heavens. I love it. Now, I can sleep. ;o)
Author's Response: Glad you liked, even after all that blocking! Thanks!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 11:Power Play
I really need to go to sleep but I just can't stop!
Author's Response: That's something every writer loves to hear - sorry you're losing sleep, but thanks! ;)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 10: Give And Go
THrey are so precious. This story brings back all of those teenage hormones. insecurities and excitements. I love it. Your characters are endearing and compelling. It is SO veru enjoyable!
Author's Response: I really appreciate knowing it can bring back all those memories...thank you so much!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 9: One On One
BRing on the kissing. I think they are both eager! As am I!!!
Author's Response: Everyone's ready for some smooching at this point! Bear with me...
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 8: Shot On Goal
I am a sucker for their flirtation. I have been reading a ton of emo fics lately and I can't tell you how much this story has made me smile. I am thoroughly enjoying it!
Author's Response: I love knowing it made you smile - that's great! Thank you!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 7: Equalizer
This was absolutely precious!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 6: Rebound
I am SO excited to read more!!!
Author's Response: Great - thanks!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 5: Scramble
Edward was adorable in this chapter and Bella was clueless. So true life!
Author's Response: More true to life than I like to remember...!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 4: Checking
I am already an addict!
Author's Response: We have meetings twice per week, on Tuesdays and Saturdays... ;)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 3: Power Forward
It seems as though the attraction is not so one sided. I love this!
Author's Response: Edward's had his eye on Bella for a while. Now they both have to deal with their mutual attraction, when neither has any idea! Thanks!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 2: Hand Pass
I adore this story so far!
Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know you're enjoying!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 1: Starting Lineup
I am intrigued by this story and eager to see how it develops!
Author's Response: Thanks for joining us!
Reviewer: Drnifer (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 22: Clutch and Grab
I love your Bella. She's the perfect mix of sweet, funny, confident, and sexy. I can't wait for the ice action next chapter - I'm watching hockey now imagining Edward out there.
Author's Response: Thank you - I love hearing you like Bella's character. Edward in uniform and on ice next chappie - yum!
Reviewer: Drnifer (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 21: Long Bomb
I'm still loving Emmett and his pranks, but holy crap was the rest of this chapter hot! I find myself wondering how Edward got to be such as sex god at such a young age, but then realize that when the sex is this hot it doesn't really matter;)
Author's Response: We'll learn a little more about Edward's past sexual endeavors soon - and he really wouldn't let me write him any other way!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 22: Clutch and Grab
What can I say-lucky girl! I'm watching the stanley cup finals now, so I'm really into the whole wide shouldered hockeyward!
Author's Response: Oh, I know! I watched the game last night, and was laughing to myself - those boys just do it for me! Love me a man in a hockey uniform...
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 22: Clutch and Grab
Going at it like a bunch of horny jack rabbits! Can't wait for more Edward on the ice!
Author's Response: Or a horny hockey player...! Edward in uniform and on the ice next chappie - hubba hubba!
Reviewer: Lulabell75 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 22: Clutch and Grab
I started this over the weekend and just now got caught up! I'm so glad you told us what days you update, altough I gathered it was fairly often. I'm loving these two!
Author's Response: Thanks for joining us - so glad you're enjoying the story!
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