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Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 13
No matter how long your chapters are, they always end toooo soon! I loved the reunion with Jasper. So touching. When she said "stop it" Ugh. Greatness.
Reviewer: dhArma (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 13
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i love this
its so perfectly written, keep up the good work :D
Reviewer: twilightsagafan (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 13
I love it i think its cute how edwards whole family already loves chris. thanks for the update and I can't wait for the next one.
Reviewer: Jenimafer (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 13
Omg, Chris is so adorable!! And Jasper and Alice playing trains with him. Love it ^-^
Looking forward to the next chapter. Im interested to see what happens between Josh and Edward (if they meet that is).
Reviewer: rzokian (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 13
if he does, that's stinking awesome.
Reviewer: rzokian (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 13
does chris steal gifts?
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 13
Can Chris obsorb the Cullen's powers?? If so, very cool! Aro would love to get his hands on that!! :)
Love this story! Update soon! Please! Pretty please!!!
Reviewer: SuperFrog101 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 13
oh cant wait to see wat Josh rhinks of Bella wit a 17 year old lookin man
Reviewer: BabyBlues (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 13
Ahhh, i absolutely adore this story!! It's funny, but I actually dreamt something similar, only it turned out to be that Bella's son was actually Edward's... Love how in dreams, everything doesn't have to make sense...
Hope that they'll soon be making that trup to oregon... Emmet, Jasper, Edward and Chris now that'll be a laugh!
Ohh, and Josh -- please please update soon!
Reviewer: ClumsyHippy (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 13
Awwwwww, how adorable!
Reviewer: ClumsyHippy (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 13
Awwwwww, how adorable!
Reviewer: iheartcullenboyz (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 13
dude does the kid have physic abilities because he said that they would get to play trains!!!!hell yea i'm rite aren't i? jkjk lmao but really does he?
Reviewer: iheartcullenboyz (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 13
dude does the kid have physic abilities because he said that they would get to play trains!!!!hell yea i'm rite aren't i? jkjk lmao but really does he?
Reviewer: angel1babe86 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 13
such a treat! loved it..... I'm interested to meet Josh now.... can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Cyartia (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 13
It's been a while since I read the previous chapter, and now, as well as awed at the relationship between Edward and Chris, am slightly confused.
I think the answer is a no, but would you mind clarifying something for me? Does Edward know that Chris is his son........? (If Chris is his son for that matter... )
Another great chapter!
Alex
Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 13
uh oh..josh is coming. i love this story. fills me up and makes happy..at least right now when there isn't much conflict and drama. =)
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 13
hmm so Chris had a Vision... perhaps he's 'borrowing' the others' gifts or something? hehe
Just chuckling at the thought of Jasper playing trains though :)
Reviewer: lostinthought (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 13
ahhhhhhhhh he can take the powers of the vamps he is around. He saw the future b/c Alice can! Oh my gosh, SO cool! Cannot wait to read more!
Reviewer: renee721 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 13
It's no surprise that they're all in awe of Bella's little boy. This is really great!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 13
Awwww i LOVED it!!!! Fantastic chapter and I loved how easily Alice and Jasper came into Chris's life. But right at the beginning, Chris asked who the cool guy with Alice was and he got to play trains with him. Bella didn't pick up on that. Was he seeeing the vision through Edward's thoughts? Or has he picked up on other talents too?
Can't wait for more, I hope you update soon.
Reviewer: BeyondDreams19 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 13
Great chapter! The mystery of Chris continues, I can't wait to find out some answers :)
Reviewer: Jenn6 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great chapter! I can't wait to see how this will all work out!
Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 13
Awww this story is awesome, I'm so glad I gave in! I was just thinking about asking you when Josh would be back in it but you bet me to it, excellent!!!
Reviewer: Zoey0223 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 13
I've been waiting for Alice and Chris to meet each other forever! This chapter was great.
Reviewer: twimomof4 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 13
I love this story, I chose it because it sounded a bit lighter than what I've been reading. Love daddy Edward! Chris is just too cute, I think he's picking up all the abilities...I think he gave Bella that sense of calm following the little slide moment before he met Alice and Jasper! I want them to be a little family, but not sure how this is going to play out. Can't wait to see and for an update, keep them coming, this is great!
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