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Reviewer: EdwardianVelvet (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 9 Stirring the Pot
I don't see anything wrong in him going to a strip club - my husband has - end of the night he comes back to me :)
Author's Response: I didn't know how it would go over, but I wanted it to be realistic!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: deleepowman (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 9 Stirring the Pot
I think Edward needs to tell Bella he loves her now instead of waiting until he returns home, she needs to know. Well, Edward got a lap dance that made him hard and Bella got drunk not even realizing guys were hitting on her. I call that a draw. Loved the phone smexing and I'm glad Edward is finally starting to stop denying his feelings for Bella.
Author's Response: He's figuring things out, albeit slowly. LOL.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: katydid (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2010 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 9 Stirring the Pot
The strip club was fine...there is a difference between getting a lapdance and getting having sex (any kind of sex). I cannot believe he hasn't told Bella he loves her yet. I had forgotten he had not until the end of the email.
Thanks so much for the update-Kate
Author's Response: Yeah, he's such a typical guy with the whole "she knows how I feel" bit. Girls want to HEAR it!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: courtney1022 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2010 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 8 Lost
nononononono I hope she didnt
Author's Response: I know. Bella's got some explaining to do. I just hope Edward doesn't do anything rash.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: FayRay (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2010 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 8 Lost
Please tell me jake did not take advantage of Bells when she was drunk and down !!!!!!!!This is not good !!!!!!! cant stand this cliffie !!!!!Hurry up /Will drive me insane till I see it!!!!!!!!!!!1
Author's Response: Hang in there, bb. The next chapter will be up on Tuesday or Wednesday!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 8 Lost
Please just say Bella passed out and Jake did the right thing and looked after her! Not that they slept together!
Author's Response: Bella made some bad decisions, but how will Edward react? Hmmm...
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Soccer1023 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 8 Lost
bella better not have screwed this up!
Author's Response: yeah, she's got some explaining to do. How will Edward react to this? Hmm...
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: k80cue (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 8 Lost
Hi
I liked this chapter apart from the Edward leaving part.
I dont think that Bella would sleep with Jake and I hope that Jake wouldnt take advantage of her.
The big question is will Bella tell Edward that she got so drunk that she couldnt remember the whole night and that she stayed at Jakes house - or not
Cant wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Yeah, this is going to be tough for Bella because not only did she get drunk and end up in someone's bed, but it had to be Jacob? Not good.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: aswinfor (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 8 Lost
I don't believe anything happened. Jake is too good for that correct???????? Love the story. Jealous Edward be gone please, he's a tad annoying.
Author's Response: I totally agree with you about the jealousy. A little jealousy= HOT! Too much= NOT HOT!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: aswinfor (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 1 Beginnings
I loved the first chapter, however, from the titles of the next several I am almost afraid to keep reading. You've really created a wonderful connection here between Edward and Bella. Their thoughts and the e-mails back and forth and then bringing it all together at the end with their reunion. I feel like this is going to be a teary story, but I'll keep going.
Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Hang in there with me. I set out to write a realistic view of the military but I'm not huge on endless chapters of angst.
I hope you'll keep reading!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
wandb
Reviewer: tinaconnor (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 8 Lost
This story is starting to get interesting. Looking forward to the updates and I have favorited it. I'm not too worried. I don't think that Jake took advantage, not that kind of guy. I do think that Bella needs to be a little less upset with the deployments. Come on! He is a Navy seal, he didn't join up after they started dating. Get a grip girl! She is just TOOO needy in this story.
Author's Response: Writing this, I actually tried to picture how I'd handle things and I think it would be incredibly hard to be away from your loved one for so long. It's got to get old really quick!
Next up, we'll see how Edward feels about all this.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: mayghen12 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 8 Lost
MMMMMM some drama and you leaveus on a cllif. I love it. I just hope I have hair left on my head by next update. LOL ;-)
Author's Response: Sorry about the cliffie, BB. Couldn't be helped! Next up we'll see how Edward feels.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: deleepowman (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 04:13 AM · On: Chapter 8 Lost
i'M HOPING HE JUST BROUGHT HER BACK TO HIS PLACE BECAUSE SHE WAS SO DRUNK AND HE WORRIED ABOUT LEAVING HER ALONE AND HE UNDRESSED HER AND PUT HIS SWEATS ON HER AND PUT HER IN bED?
Author's Response: Bella was just trying to make the pain of missing Edward go away. She wasn't trying to flirt with random guys. In fact, she drank so much that she didn't even realize that guys were hitting on her. Hang in there with me!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: timidvampire (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2010 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 8 Lost
oh Bella you havent,, have you ?
Author's Response: She's going to have some explaining to do, that's for sure.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: bmccall2068 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 8 Lost
What a dumb ass....I've never been a fan of people who can't handle their liquor. If she did cheat on him with jake...which I doubt she did...then she deserves edward to kick her to the curb
Author's Response: Yeah, she made some bad decisions that she's going to have to explain. Next up, we'll see how Edward feels.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 8 Lost
please tell me nothing happened
Author's Response: Bella didn't mean for any of this to happen. She was just trying to make the pain go away. Now, she's got some explaining to do.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: krjemb (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 8 Lost
Nothing happened. Bella was wasted and Jake knew it, if he took advantage of her then he's a rapist because there's no way she could have given consent.
Author's Response: Bella definitely made some bad choices. Now we need to see what the ramifications of those choices are.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: bellaed68 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 7 Companions
I just love the last two chapters & I totally understand Edwards point of view over Jacob I think Jacob likes her more than she thinks and Edward some how can see that. I also love that Edward has finally toll Bella about his mother. keep up the good work by the way how do I go abou8t getting stories alert from you.
Kind regards
Cassy
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you're enjoying it.
To get alerts, add this story to your favorites.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: katy3963 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 03:35 AM · On: Chapter 4 Goodbye
i'm really hoping that this time apart is good for Edward and he will hopefully learn to open up to her in their emails. Katy :)
Author's Response: Thanks for all your reviews! I appreciate the feedback very much and hope that you continue to enjoy the story!
Reviewer: katy3963 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 3 Uncertainty
I understand that he needs to be able to close himself off emotionally for his job but he really needs to learn to open up more to Bella about everything. Katy :)
Author's Response: My goal with this Edward was to portray the him like the guys I knew in my 20's: completely clueless! He's not a bad guy, he just doesn't get it. AT.ALL.
Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: katy3963 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 2 Homecoming
Ahhhhh bless him, this is his first serious relationship and he is teffied of the feelings he has for Bella as well as the fearing of 'fucking it up'...... I'm loving what i have read so far and can't wait to read more. Katy :0
Reviewer: katy3963 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 2 Homecoming
Ahhhhh bless him, this is his first serious relationship and he is teffied of the feelings he has for Bella as well as the fearing of 'fucking it up'...... I'm loving what i have read so far and can't wait to read more. Katy :0
Reviewer: katy3963 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 2 Homecoming
Ahhhhh bless him, this is his first serious relationship and he is teffied of the feelings he has for Bella as well as the fearing of 'fucking it up'...... I'm loving what i have read so far and can't wait to read more. Katy :0
Reviewer: katy3963 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 1 Beginnings
OMG that was awesome, i can't wait to read more and see what you have in store for these two. Katy :)
Reviewer: CaliMum (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2010 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 7 Companions
Definitely enjoyed this chapter. It was nice to have them spend some time away from the distractions of everyday life. Seemed like the perfect setting for Bella to ask Edward about his mother. Such a tragic loss, but I'm glad Bella told Edward that she planned on sticking around and being there for him.
Thank you for the new chapter. Always great to see that you've updated!
Author's Response: Edward needs to hear about Bella's commitment for him to get past his fears! i'm glad you enjoyed this chapter!
Thanks for the review!
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