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Reviewer: ReaderAdrift (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2012 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 1 One-shot
Light hearted and humorous, this piece made me smile. I liked how nicely it fit in with the original story, complete with leg hitch and lip-tracing tongue. It definitely could have been included in the original story quite nicely. Of course, maybe Edward would have steered clear of the bed after seeing Alice's vision. You also captured the personalities of the characters as written by the author with your dialogue. Loved their banter! Thanks!
Reviewer: TheRugbymom (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2012 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 1 One-shot
Ha! Nicely done!
Reviewer: Betsie (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2012 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 1 One-shot
Rosalie is brings the perfect final note. It was nice to read thanks !
Reviewer: MelanieHeleyna (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2011 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 1 One-shot
You could tell they really love Edward. Hahaha, poor Edward!!
Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2011 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 1 One-shot
That was really good! Are you planning on continuing? It has been "awhile" since you came back to this juicy tale... Please don't leave us guessing (even though we know the out come)
Nice job!
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2011 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 1 One-shot
very funny banter!
Reviewer: cuppycake (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2011 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 1 One-shot
this is AWESOME.....i couldnt stop laughing for 5 minutes. i hope you write more coz i absolutely love your style and your plots:D
Reviewer: tonilexington (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2011 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 1 One-shot
Cute!
Reviewer: helenareject (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2011 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 1 One-shot
Hahahahaha!
Reviewer: roslyn (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2011 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 1 One-shot
hahahahahahahaha thats great! love love love it ! keep going i want moreee (:
Reviewer: veer (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2011 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 1 One-shot
Loved it! PLEASE write some more!
Reviewer: princessmcgotty (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2011 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 1 One-shot
omg!!!!!!!lol...
luv the last sentence...teeheehee
great one-shot!!!!!!!
Reviewer: bellasnake (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2011 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 1 One-shot
adorable! I loved it!
Reviewer: mamadog93 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2011 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 1 One-shot
Too Funny! Now....if only that had been an actual scene in Eclipse! Why oh why don't they let us do some scriptwriting?
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2010 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 1 One-shot
hahah. Hi. I love your little story. Poor Edward, he needs vulume. haha.
I love your story's. I just read the first 12 chapter of training. but decided to start reading the other one to understand it better.
Excellent writting.. A+ Leona
Reviewer: xxsweet_miseryxx (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2010 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 1 One-shot
Aw I love Rose =)
Reviewer: Gone_Crazy109 (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2010 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 1 One-shot
WOW. that was hilarious!!!!!
Reviewer: Evelyn208 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 1 One-shot
This was one of the funniest fanfics I have ever read. Loved it!!!
Reviewer: Melanie Carter (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2010 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 1 One-shot
I loved this!
It made me laugh so much - especially the last line!
So many one-shots you read are deep and thoughtful, I thought the light nature of this was perfect. I stumbled across this by accident, I really did, and it's made my evening.
Well done!
Reviewer: xiolaperry (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 1 One-shot
please continue!!
Reviewer: AngieSaar (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2010 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 1 One-shot
cool and funny
Reviewer: sept13 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 1 One-shot
Too funny! Totally in canon, too, IMHO.
Reviewer: ilovealion (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 1 One-shot
Leg hitch- favorite scene in the original series... Modified leg hitch in FanFiction stories is much better. Thank you for adding to the original. I love your writing style...looking forward to more.
Reviewer: Sonia Mari (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2010 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 1 One-shot
ROFLMAO
*wipes eyes*
HILARIOUS.
I love it!
Reviewer: lueree (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2010 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 1 One-shot
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! I love it!!
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