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Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 03:37 PM · On: 17 - Revelation

Seriously...What the Hell? Jesus...poor Bella is gonna have a breakdown at the rate these people are throwing things at her. I sure hope to good things start lookin up for the poor girl. I am anxious to see what you throw at us next.



Author's Response:

Sometimes you need to go through hell to get to heaven.  Tough times often make people tougher, don't you think? 

Reviewer: BellsSara24 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 03:37 PM · On: 17 - Revelation

Gah! Evil evil woman leaving me on a cliffhanger like that! :D (Looking forward to the next update . . .)

Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 03:01 PM · On: 17 - Revelation

what did you do Edward ?

Reviewer: lilygirl88 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 02:59 PM · On: 17 - Revelation

WTF!!! Nooo why the cliffie..
WTH does Edward have to do with James?
Ugh too many questions floating in my head can't wait till the next chap and see what Edward tells her regarding James?

Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 02:43 PM · On: 17 - Revelation

Argh!

Stupid cliffie :)

Keep up the great work!

Please update soon!

Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 02:35 PM · On: 17 - Revelation

okay rollercoaster ride is over - we need something solid to stand on please - something to bond to. Anything will do - it just needs to be consistant - Either Bella and Edwards confidence in each other or Bella's relationship with her friends - something. It is like standing in a room filled with yelling people and they are all pointing at each other accusingly. Some resolution please. Otherwise it is a very interesting story - Thanks very much for the post

Reviewer: heathernoel (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 12:50 PM · On: 17 - Revelation

I hate Jake. As much as I hate James and Mike. My least fav. character, and I hope Bella and Edward leave him tattered and torn. Can I bitch slap him, please?

Loving the story, and loving your updates!! YOU ROCK :)

Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 09:03 PM · On: 16 - Dreams

Thanks for the super quick update!

Keep up the awesome work!

Please update soon!

Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 08:30 PM · On: 16 - Dreams

Wow! Oh no whatta nightmare--literally

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 08:29 PM · On: 16 - Dreams

OMG!! That bastard took thier baby!! Ok so now I'm gonna hunt down that jackass and beat his ass myself. How could a person be so cruel.

Oh please update soon.

Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 05:42 PM · On: 16 - Dreams

so now there is a baby involved too?  This is getting too complicated for me!  I'm pretty sure I don't want to know what James did to her?  And where is he now?  I guess Bella is lucky that Edward is such a mean son of a bitch!

Reviewer: lilygirl88 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 02:51 PM · On: 16 - Dreams

Oh crap things are getting crazy.
Hmm I wonder who was there with Bella could it be Edwards mother or someone else. Can't wait to see what happens when they talk to the mom

Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 02:39 PM · On: 16 - Dreams

well I am trying to keep the timeline straight -

She was pregnant at -16-17 yrs we she left

9 months

But she doesn't remember anything before seventeen so

the pregnacy and birth must have happened prior to the memory cutoff point

what are all the cuts and scars on her from? C-section? when did she see a doctor to prescibe birth control? If she has been gone from Edwards life for 6 yrs - minus 9 months for pregancy - there is a five year old out there somewhere - unless it did not survive.

Thanks for the post

Reviewer: BellsSara24 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 01:10 PM · On: 16 - Dreams

Ahhh!

Reviewer: deleepowman (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 12:39 PM · On: 16 - Dreams

wow, I wasn't expecting that. Where is the baby? Did he live? I'm really confused now

Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 12:38 PM · On: 16 - Dreams

is he even really dead ?

Reviewer: BellsSara24 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 12:24 PM · On: 12 - Switch

Really good, heart-wrenching writing!

Reviewer: BellsSara24 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 11:42 AM · On: 9 - Shroud Lifted

I'm truly fascinated.

Reviewer: BellsSara24 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 11:32 AM · On: 8 - Past

Loving this story, you've built up the intrigue and suspense really well!! :D

Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 10:46 PM · On: 15 - Blind

very very good chapter keep going and post soon

Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 09:26 PM · On: 15 - Blind

This story has been so amazing!

I love how long the chapters are, and how fulfilling and satisfying they truly are :)

Keep up the awesome work!

Please update soon!

Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 04:32 PM · On: 15 - Blind

I want to love like that everyday

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 03:02 PM · On: 15 - Blind

Damn that man knows how to treat a gal right. It would seem Edward's brokeness is slowly healing. Bella's walls are slowly coming down, I can't wait to see what happens in the aftermath.

Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 10:47 AM · On: 15 - Blind

Well,you got me now...don't let me down!!  Update quickly!  Love this story.

Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 09:32 AM · On: 15 - Blind

Very nice job on the chocolate lemon!  The hut out in the ocean-very original.  I went back to the early chapters to see where this takes place and I am assuming it is not Seattle-because the ocean is way too cold there!!  Thanks for the quick update.

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