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Reviews For Coatl
Reviewer: sheba (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2011 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 2

I really like how this story starts, and I'd love to see more!  Please continue this story.

Reviewer: sarah01 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 2

This is a seriously good story. I love the idea behind it and it's interresting how you are advancing Bella's character. I love the shiny thing. It's cool.

Have you got any more chapters yet? Perhaps posted the same story on another site? If so, will you please tell me, because I can't wait for more. If not then you must really update soon. :D

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 2

OH YES! I am so thrilled you updated! And what a great chapter, too. It had it all...history, emotion, and humor. I laughed out loud when our beloved Bella fell out of her truck. I cannot WAIT to read more on E&B's first day of school together! 

WOO-HOO!!!!

Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 2

I just found this story and it's fantastic! I love stories in which Bella is something other, and this has to be the most unusual other that I've seen. I love the attention to detail. I'm not familiar with coatl lore, so it is fascinating thus far. I'm quite indignant for Bella's sake at her treatment at the vampires' hands, even though there was no malicious intent. I really hope she gets her feathers back too. Did it hurt when Edward pulled them out, I wonder? Will she reveal herself to them? Surely her scent will give her away? I hope she gives them all an earful for treating her like some Disney ride. That's just not kosher. Thanks so much for sharing your story, really liking it so far!

Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 2

Must admit it caught and held my interest.  Totally off the wall to boot!  I'm enjoying this story and look forward to MORE.  :-)

Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent!

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2010 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 1

I cannot believe how amazingly wonderful and refreshing this story is! It's fantastically creative and original. I've never read anything like it before, and God help me I've read SO MANY fanfics out there! But yours is just gloriously addictive and beautifully written. 

I thought the action sequence was powerful and filled with playful suspense. I just absolutely love the idea of Edward being so enchanted with this magnificent creature who will undoubtedly become the love of his existence. Damnit! I need more! LOL!

I can honestly say that I am thrilled with it and CANNOT WAIT to read more. Please post more asap!

Godspeed, Darlin'.

(This is going to be a great ride! WOO-HOO!)

Reviewer: gabby871 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2010 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 1

interesting. please update soon. thanks

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