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Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 32
I get such a kick out of Edward and Bella reading 'Sex for Dummies'. Only about 1 week left until E&B tie the knot and honeymoon. I can't wait.
Author's Response: I love writing those parts. These two are just too funny when they talk about sex in the specific. lol
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 32
Good chapter. Seattle weekend was a very moving experience for both of them. Only a week left, time will appear to drag. I know Edward is upset with Alice for her remarks. But Alice was only trying to help her avoid more embarrassment later. At least this chapter Edward admits part of her feelings was his fault because he didn't mention it to her before. Learning curve for both of them. Waiting for the last week before the wedding and all the running around for last minute items. Enjoying the story immensely. Looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Alice was only trying to help and be a best friend trying to prepare Bella for her big day.
Edward may be 100+ years old but this is his first relationship same as Bella. I think sometimes that is forgotten.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 32
I think everything will be ok between Bella and Edward. He hasm ore control than he gives himself credit for.
Please update soon?
Great chapter, btw!
Author's Response: Yes, he does. Edward is a worrier though. It will probibly be two weeks for the next update unless something crazy happens before then. I will post a teaser on the thread at the end of the week though. :)
Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 32
Excellent.
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Reviewer: AmoreBella88 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 32
Aw! I love Pike's Place, it's so cool! Great chapter!
Author's Response: I've never been there but I did do some research on line. It looks like it would be so much fun!
Reviewer: iluvthecolts (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 32
Loved it! Can't wait til they get to the island!
Author's Response: Thank you. :) I'm really looking forward to writing the wedding, trip and first night.
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 32
can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Reviewer: scricez (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 32
Awww, that's just soo sweet..their alone moments together are so loving and tender, they're making me melt!! *smile*
Anyway, great chapter as always, I really enjoied the trip at the market and especially the fact that now Edward feels more confortable about talking to Bella about delicate issues, he's definetely getting better!
It's funny also when he starts repeating '8 more days, 8 more days' over and over in his head, because he's waited for Bella more than a century and now this week, only 7 days seem to be infinite!! (I bet Bella's thinking along the same lines too! ;D)
Emmett is really a big brother, he can't lose the opportunity to make fun of his little brother and I can understand that Edward's angry with Alice..but I hope they'll clear things up soon.
Now I can't wait to read about the last week before the wedding!
Oh and of course you have to keep writing after this story is finished if not continuing this one then beginnin with new ones because your writing is really amazing!
Author's Response: They are a very loving and affectionate couple. :)
He has come a long way over the course of this story. And yes, this last week is going to make the last 100 years feel like nothing.
Emmett. What can I say. lol. He is just Emmett.
Oh don't worry I have plenty to keep me busy on the writing front. I'm almost finished writing my novel and then I also have two new fics I've started working on that will post as soon as this one is complete. I'm not going anywhere. :)
Reviewer: TaintedDarkInuShemeeko (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 32
Recap of my favorite moment.
I’m sorry, Edward. I didn’t know she’d…
It didn’t matter. I didn’t want to hear her excuses. A low growl rumbled in my chest.
Jasper reacted instinctively to protect his mate. Everyone else looked back and forth between us, waiting.
Neither of us spoke verbally. Her mind was racing to show me what had happened between the two of them, what she’d said. I was also able to see some of what Bella had told me last night about trying on what my love felt were clothes that would make me uncomfortable.
What she was showing me was not helping my temper. It was true she hadn’t come out and told Bella but she knew how perceptive she was. Alice, more than anyone else, was aware of my loves ability to put the pieces of a puzzle together given enough opportunity. Her subtle hints to try and get my fiancée to share with her exactly how far our ‘practices’ had gone was just too much. “Stay out of it, Alice,” I growled.
Everyone was watching us now even Carlisle who’d just came through the back door. It was a face off.
I didn’t see my father until he was beside me. His hand came to rest on my shoulder and I pushed it off. He brought it down again and this time made sure I would not shrug him off. “Edward, stop. I’m sure Alice didn’t mean…”
“She told Bella we could ‘smell her’,” I said through gritted teeth. No one seemed to get it though. Taking a deep breath, I pinched the bridge of my nose and then looked at Carlisle so he’d know I didn’t plan on pouncing on Alice anytime soon.
He released me and nodded. I picked up my bags again and headed toward the stairs not even glancing at my sister.
They let me go but I could hear first the question in their minds and then again as they vocalized and asked Alice what was going on. She down played it of course. Alice didn’t sit with Bella in her arms while watching her eyes well up with tears of frustration and embarrassment.
So there you had it, I love it when our favorite pixie can push Edward's buttons. It doesn't take long which I find to be cute.
Brie,
Author's Response: I always have fun writing the Cullens. Their different personalities always create such a wonderful dynamic.
Reviewer: Amanda Wilder (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 32
Why does Alice keep butting in? This all seems a bit extreme, even from Alice. Is she not getting enough attention from Jasper?
Author's Response: Because she is Alice. Keep in mind the suitcase she packed for Bella for the Island. Bella is Alice's best friend and really she wasn't doing anything more than most best friend/maid of honors would do a week before their friend's wedding, it's just that Bella isn't a typical girl and Alice isn't either.
Reviewer: Unfable (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 32
Ah wonderful xD Still hoping for a little Edward loss of control and all, but still love the pace you set this. Can't wait for more as usual.
Author's Response: Thanks. :) If you haven't noticed, Edward is very careful while he's with Bella. We'll get to see a little more of his control challenged during his next session with Jasper.
Reviewer: St0pSmackinMe07 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 32
good chapter. i liked it. :)
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Reviewer: vamp1975 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 31 - (J)
Ok I love this story but I need more I have read only three full ones ans a couple of the one shots. But I need you to please keep going as I am looking forward to reading the rest. Great work and you keep me so wanting more I think I am a lot like Bella and you just wont give me what I really want. :) Can't wait for the rest
Author's Response: I'm so glad you hear you're loving it so far. Don't worry, I'm not going anywhere. I will finish the story. :)
Reviewer: writz (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 31 - (J)
I like the details, so I would prefer you continue on the same pace.
Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you for the input.
Reviewer: MyBrownEyes (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 31 - (J)
Awesome chapter! Edward seems to be more in control though I think now its the sexual frustration that's affecting him. I love the pace of the story. I think its suits Edward. And congrats on the award!
Author's Response: Thank you and yes he is in better control of himself. The practice is helping but yep the other side of that is the sexual frustration. As he pointed out early on in their relationship, he is still a man.
Reviewer: closetwi (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 31 - (J)
I just read your response to my first comment. i am brand new at this, and i apologize, that was totally rude. I LOVE your writing and cannot WAIT until you post again!
Are you sure you arent Stephenie Meyers?! :) seriously! SO GOOD!
Author's Response: That's okay, believe me I've had worse. I don't really have a beta so although I re-read the chapters several times, I do miss stuff.
And nope, not Stephanie. lol. You aren't the first person to ask me that either. I'd love her paycheck though. I am almost finished with my first novel though so maybe one day you'll see my book out on bookshelves or at least amazon. :)
Reviewer: closetwi (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 31 - (J)
WOW again!!!
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Reviewer: closetwi (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 29
WOW. that was VERY good!!!!! best i've ever read!
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you! :)
Reviewer: closetwi (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 16
Just REALLY love this story line. it was hinted to in the books, and you've done such a great job filling the gaps!
Author's Response: Thanks. :) I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. I am really trying to keep it in cannon as much as I can.
Reviewer: closetwi (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 3
Really love this story.
Suggestion: Turning to face them I looked them both in the eye before I spoke. “You are my brother’s and…”
It should be "brothers" - personal pet peeve, don't take offense. :)
Author's Response: lol. Yep it should have been. I missed it. I'm sure it won't be the only one you find either.
Reviewer: Maryale (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2009 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 31 - (J)
Don't speed things up!!!! please!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the input. :)
Reviewer: rohmareng (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2009 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 31 - (J)
hey! thanks for asking about the pace of the story and what we think. I really enjoy your rather slow pacing, but I would love to leave out things that are not so interesting, although I found all of your chapters to be interesting ;-) wow, this sounds like a stupid review.
In this chapter for example you brought up the arrangement between Edward and Bella in terms of financial aspects, which comes up in the first chapter of Breaking Dawn and is very interesting to know about. So really... I dont know, I can't wait for the wedding, but if there are interesting things in between, which there are, then I would like to hear them too. :)
Author's Response: lol. You're welcome. :)
I try to make my characters and thier lives as realistic as possible, which means dealing with issues that are important to them and affect their lives. You should enjoy the next chapter as it deals with the rest of Saturday night and all of Sunday.
Reviewer: Amanda Wilder (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 31 - (J)
Very cool! Congrats on the award. For my vote, I think another couple of near misses would be hot. I like the idea of him finding confidence and some pleasure in the thought of making love to her, but he has to have more confidence in himself before he can do that.
Author's Response: Thank you!
His confidence is growing, along with his sexual frustration. ;) It's just slow going like everything else for him.
Reviewer: Lilly9999 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 31 - (J)
Another great chapter. I wouldn't mind if you sped things up a little.
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 31 - (J)
Keep going!!! I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
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