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Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 6

Alice! I have to say the idea was a bit strange even to me! hhha

But anyway, I live the fact that Edward and Bella had figured out by themselves a way to resolve their issues. That is how a couple that is about to marry should act. And Edward seem much more mature by accepting Bella's help and suggesting a solution himself. I liked that.



Author's Response:

lol. You are not the only one that made that comment after reading this chapter.

:) Edward is far from perfect, but he does try.

Reviewer: lmlx8 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 33

I'm reviwing, cuz last time you were cut off.. I love this story, don't get me wrong, smut is good, but when you are writing caonon, you should stick to the script. I'm excited to see how the next chapter plays out with Jasper.  this one was sweet, with hormones flying and erections growing, but Edaward reined it in, and kept his control. Which is what he would do.. Keep going, six more days!



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

Yes, I love good smut as much as anyone but it has to fit the situtation and the characters.

Reviewer: twiguyemt11 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 33

awesome loved it



Author's Response:

Thanks. :)

Reviewer: JoseeCullen (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 33

I don't think I have left you a review yet, so here it goes.

I really like your story! What I particularly enjoy is how you manage to keep this canon, while still having Bella and Edward have plenty of fun! Keep up the good work!

I can't wait to read about the next session with Jasper! Your next update can't come (or cum! Tee hee hee) fast enough!



Author's Response:

Thank you. I have tried hard to keep this in line with what SM gave us.

lol. The next chapter is already in the que so hopefully it will be up soon. :)

Reviewer: scricez (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 33

Wonderful chapter, I'm glad you've managed to post it!


Loved the conversation between Edward and Bella..very realistic and lol, Edward reading the kamasutra!! Yeah, I think it's better not ask Emmett too or he'll be scarred for eternity! ;)


I'm glad that Edward and Alice have talked and I can't wait for the next Jasper chapter!!


The interaction between Edward and Carlisle was awesome..


Please update soon!! ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Bella does have a very realistic concern although we all know that Edward would never even consider it. And no, talking to Emmett would NOT be a good idea. lol.

Edward is very reactive but Alice is his favorite sister, he would never stay mad at her for long.

I love Carlisle. :)

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 5

Bella is so horny that she becomes naive and irresponsible. Can't blame her, though.



Author's Response:

That and she trusts him completely. She really does believe that he isn't able to hurt her.

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 4

Edward as ever overthinking. But this time I have to give it to him, he has more than reasons to be that worried...



Author's Response:

Yes but that is our Edward. :) And yes, he does have very valid reasons to be worried.

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 3

well, that wasn't as helpful as I thought but I guess it is just realistic, right? After all, none of them have been through something remotely similar. I guess the saving grace is going to be Alice...



Author's Response:

Actually, you might be surprised who his saving grace turns out to be.

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 2

that is going to be an interesting conversation... I am anxious to hear Emmett's take on the matter!



Author's Response:

Hopefully you will find my take on things as  you go through interesting. Welcome to the story btw. :)

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 1

Carslile is such a lovely person.... Poor Edward.. we always think about the lemon (by we i really mean me) but never stop to think about the position he was in.. and the fear of killing his other half...



Author's Response:

I know! I love Carlisle. :)

lol. And no, you are not the only one that thinks about the lemon. ;) But I promise, we will get to it. I wouldn't leave you all hanging like that.

Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2009 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 33

My (18) year old daughter came home with the Cookie Sutra. You can probably imagine what that's all about :D.

You're doing well and have been all along. True Edwardy goodness. I'm sorry if I didn't review last chapter. Been in a bit of a slump lately and haven't had a lot of words.

You've stuck with it and you're almost there! Watch Trailer #3 for New Moon. Very dramatic - perhaps some inspiration will pop up.

 

 



Author's Response:

Hm. The Cookie Sutra... lol.

We are almost there. :D I think I'm just as anxious as everyone else to get to their wedding night. ;)

And I LOVED the #3 New Moon Trailer. I so can't wait for Nov. 20th.

 

Reviewer: twilightfreak09 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 33

Wow! That was hot! Thank goodness they finally got it posted! But on the bright side that means we won't have to wait long for the next chapter! :) hopefully anyway... Yay!!! More Jasper next chapter! I love Jasper! I think he will be shocked at how far Edward has come in such a short space of time. Last time they had a practice session it didn't seem too promising but Edward is doing so much better now! Poor guy really doesn't give himself enough credit does he?

Author's Response:

lol. Yes, I was very, very glad it posted. Turns out I was assinged a new beta but had no idea. Basicly it did get lost in the que. :( But on the up side, I have a new beta and hopefully all will be good now. I submitted chapter 34 last night. :)

Chapter 34 is over 4000 words so a lot happens.

Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 33

Hngghhhnnn!  Another Jasper chapter!  Whoo hoo!  :D

This was a great chapter.  Nice view into his day.  Giggle worthy exploration fo the Khama Sutra!!  Fricking HOT post dream interaction!!!  Their conversation was perfect.  I really felt its authenticity.  Love the details you bring!  I wish I did as well with my lemon-ball! You insprite me to do better, be less remote.  Thanks for all the hard work I'm certain you put into one of the few fics I get really excited for!!!  And thanks for entertaining us so well!!!



Author's Response:

Aw thank you. That really means a lot and to 'inspire you'? Wow. I am humbled. Thank you again. :)

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 33

Good God, woman! When the day finally comes for these two to surrender to their passion, it's going to be unbelievable. You write their love and need for each other with such power, it is wonderfully consuming and delicious. 

I cannot wait to read more. 



Author's Response:

LOL. Well their first time will be a long chapter. I have no idea how long but long. I have no doubts it will be the longest of the entire story. But yes, it will be a big deal. They've wanted each other for so long but yet still have so much to explore to get to know each other sexually.

Reviewer: showme8900 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 33

That chapter was much more like it. LOL

I mean, they need a little more sexing. I like lusty Bella a whole whole lot...

And i thought their convo was good. Def a bella like worry

Good job!



Author's Response:

LOL. She does make an appearance every once and a while. ;)

Yes, a very realistic worry.

Thanks!

Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 33

Read your story today it is more realistic as to what might have accured  between Bella And EDward than some of the otther stories I;v read.



Author's Response:

Thank you. That is the reason why I started writing it. I'd read so many 'practice' fics and every time I'd get maybe half way through them I'd end up saying to myself, 'they so didn't do that' or 'Edward, would not say that'. I'm not SM and obviously this is my own imagination at work here, but I am trying very hard to keep them in cannon. I'm glad you've decided to join the journey. :)

Reviewer: pclo (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 33

thanks for writing. Looking forward to the next jasper chapter.

Author's Response:

You're very welcome. :)

Reviewer: TaintedDarkInuShemeeko (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 33

Wow! Go, Bella. Not that it looked like she needs to be cheered on. I think my favorite part was towards the end when Edward was hunting with Carlisle. When Edward was talking about the elk's blood.

"The warm liquid felt good going down my throat and I felt the heat seep through my limbs. It reminded me of Bella’s heat how it got inside and worked it’s magic all the way down to my toes. That thought, of course, let to others including the feel of her mouth last night and I groaned.

 Carlisle lifted his head and looked over at me. Then a knowing smirk crossed his lips."

Loved it.



Author's Response:

lol. No, she really didn't. I'd say she pretty much took matters into her own hands.

I'm really lucky that sometimes phrases or passages like that one there at the end just come to me in the moment. This one was perfect for both the scene and the moment. I just love it when that happens. :)

Thanks!

Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 33

Good story! I can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thanks. More very soon. :)

Reviewer: Randy (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 33

Nice Chapter. Looking forward to the next. 



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

Reviewer: melissa95 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 33

wonderful chapter as usual! i enjoyed the quiet hunt between father and son i'm looking forward to the next chapter and many more chapters in the future! xoxo Melissa



Author's Response:

Thank you. :) And I'm with you. I really enjoy father/son time.

Reviewer: Simona (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 33

Fiesty Bella strikes again! For a split moment there I thought she'd succeeded in getting a dry hump from Edward ;)

Edward's thoughts will reading the Karma Sutra were quite entertaining. I'd bet Emmmet had done them all too, and probably invented his own!



Author's Response:

lol. Well for a little bit she did but not all the way to the finish. ;)

Oh I have no doubt Emmett could write his own version of the Karma Sutra. hehehe

Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 33

Yay! another chapter up. awesome! update soon!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks. The next chapter was submitted today so hopefully it will be up very soon. :)

Reviewer: mOrE_tHeN_mY_oWn_LiFe (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 33

Yeahh!! The wedding is soon!! I think he will be able to do it!  I love the jasper chapters, I can wait!



Author's Response:

lol. Yep. It's getting closer. :)

Reviewer: Jensy (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 33

Lovely conversation between them. Edward did in fact leave once, so I can totally understand why Bella would be scared about that.

I thought Alice was going to explain how she let it slip?

<< The warm liquid felt good going down my throat and I felt the heat seep through my limbs. It reminded me of Bella’s heat how it got inside and worked it’s magic all the way down to my toes. >>

Wonderfully vivid!



Author's Response:

Yes, her questioning is very natural. As for Alice, well it just didn't work once I started writing it. I've thought about doing an outtake but I didn't want to take the time out of writing the stories to actually do it. Maybe once it's done.

Thanks. :)

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