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Reviewer: TheTwilightChick (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 20
Wow, that was worth the build up! Great chapter!!!
Reviewer: TheTwilightChick (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 19
Squeel! Edward and Jasper! This one has my attention! ;)
Reviewer: TheTwilightChick (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 18
Damn it, im ready for Seattle!!!!!!! ;)
Reviewer: TheTwilightChick (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 17
This whole Jasper thing has me quite curious! Cant wait to read more!
Reviewer: TheTwilightChick (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 16
Still loving this! I really liked how you covered Bellas monthly period a chap or 2 back. Was completly silly that SM never even hinted at it. Oh well, again, thats why there is fan-fic! ;)
Reviewer: TheTwilightChick (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 15
Now were getting there! Loved this!!! ;)
Reviewer: TheTwilightChick (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 14 (J)
This was a GREAT chapter. Edwards love for Bella makes me ache!!! He truly is the perfect man! More reading now... :)
Reviewer: TheTwilightChick (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 12
Still amazed at how well you capture the characters. Again, i say this is how BD should have been written!!! :)
Reviewer: TheTwilightChick (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 10
OMG! Poor Edward! Feel so bad for him! Great writing, Edward the prude is too funny! Great job!
Reviewer: TheTwilightChick (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 9
Again, I get catought up reading and forget 2 review. This is really good, I love Alice and you are spot on with her and everone else. I feel like this is how BD should have been written (the dog should NEVER have been allowed to talk if Edward cant)!!!
Reviewer: TheTwilightChick (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 5
This really is amazing. You captured the characters perfectly! This is fast becoming a fan-fic favorite!!! :)
Reviewer: TheTwilightChick (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 4
So glad you decided to continue! :)
Reviewer: TheTwilightChick (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 2
Just found this story and am really loving it! Very good! Im bad to get into a story and forget to review (oops), sorry! At least you know im enjoying it! LOL
Very glad to be reading EPOV. SM did Edward so wrong by not allowing his side of things, allow his voice to show. Guess thats why there is fan-fic!!!
Reviewer: DJamethyst (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 13
Have Bella and Edward watch a porn flic for educational purposes, of course.
Author's Response: lol. I couldn't see SM approving that type of 'educational' activity.
Reviewer: tightlybound (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 7
Spot on for Edwards POV.. It's not easy to think the thought of a man , when your a woman . If you know what I mean..
Reviewer: tightlybound (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 5
Do love the meadow.. Always sweet. I had a thought .. Oh my .. Lets just tie eddie up and have at him!!Can't hurt anybody that way.. Right ?
Reviewer: tightlybound (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 2
Do love weddings !! Poor Edward, Bella's not helping ,but she hardly ever does.
Reviewer: tightlybound (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 1
Ahh, like the way you mixed the wording from Twilight in the story.. Excellent start; so rarely get to hear Edward .. Like so far..
Reviewer: lulaalice (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 42
Your story was really good. Do you plan on doing a part 2?
Author's Response: Yes, eventually, I do plan on writing a follow up to this one.
Reviewer: silvaneous (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 42
it was nice. i thot that sometimes it took a little too long, but on the other hand, it was nicely detailed. u shouldn't have stopped =)
Author's Response: Thank you. There might be a sequel eventually, but I haven't decided yet and my life is a bit busy at the moment.
Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 42
I enjoyed reading this story... its a shame that you didn't continue throughtout all of Breaking Dawn from Edwards POV... I thought that you really did well with his 'perspective'... I would have loved to read that... Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you. I might be writing a sequel to this one in the future, but that hasn't been decided yet.
Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 41
I really think that you did a wonderful job giving us Edwards POV... you really seem to get into his beautiful head in a really good way... thanks for that!
I have only one quick question that has been really bugging me to no end... when did Edward get changed into his tux or was he hunting in it... did I just overlook that part???
Author's Response: Edward did get changed, but it was only referrenced in one line so you night have missed it.
Reviewer: Dijah (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 41
I really think that you did a wonderful job giving us Edwards POV... you really seem to get into his beautiful head in a really good way... thanks for that!
I have only one quick question that has been really bugging me to no end... when did Edward get changed into his tux or was he hunting in it... did I just overlook that part???
Author's Response: It's in there, but it's just one line if I remember correctly.
Reviewer: kisbydog (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 42
That was great! You did a wonderful job keeping it canon - it must have been tough.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
It was challenging at time, but my stories tend to be that way. Or at least they always seem to. lol.
Reviewer: Shanshu (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 42
This is the first Twilight fanfic I've ever read. Actually it's the first proper fanfic of any kind that I've ever read. I started reading it and didn't stop until I had finished it.
I was really impressed - it really sounded like Edward's voice and the way you covered his side of the story was beautiful.
I have to say I was gutted when it was ended... I would love to read your take on what happened next... right up to the birth. I hope you return to the story some day...
Anyway - thanks for posting this. I seem to have started with the best fanfic!
Author's Response: Than you! I tried very hard to keep this story in line with both the story and with Edward's character when I wrote this story.
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