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Reviewer: cravingtwilight (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 32
Sorry I've been absent for so long RL computer probs. suck. Anyway this chapter was wonderful! I still find the two of them reading the sex book highly amusing. The day in Seattle was fantastic! Glad that Edward had a face off w. Alice, it was deserved!
Reviewer: twilightfreak09 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 34 -
Yay! Yet another wonderful chapter! Emmett is so funny. I think the fact that Edward hasn't put him thru a wall yet is yet another example of Edward's super self control. I mean with all the sexual tension building up I'm surprised he didn't snap. And poor Jasper! I bet he can't stand being in the same house with Edward and having to feel what he's feeling all the time! Especially during the practice sessions! Oh well. At least Jasper has a way to get some relief! I bet Alice isn't complaining!
Author's Response: He really is. I do enjoy writing his interaction with Edward. As for the wall...if you couldn't tell here, Edward really wanted to. lol.
I somehow don't think Alice is complaining at all. ;)
Reviewer: Jensy (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 34 -
1800 is mine! Oh, yes!
Author's Response: lol. You are a riot!
Reviewer: Shellbowen (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 34 -
Great chapter. Things are moving along quickly now. I am enjoying the ride that you are taking us on. Keep up the good work and thanks again for all the quick updates.
Author's Response: Thank you. Yeah, things are moving a little quicker. :)
Reviewer: lizzierichards (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 34 -
Hi! I'm a new reader and just finished reading this story from beginning to the latest chapter and now can't wait to read more.
Both have them have come a long way dealing with their intimacy issue. What a journey! Thanks for taking us along for the ride... Write more soon!!!
Author's Response: Hello and welcome. I always love hearing that someone else has stumbled across my story and is enjoying Edward's jouney.
They both have really come a long way in this jouney and it hasn't always been easy. The next chapter shouldn't be too long of a wait. :)
Reviewer: showme8900 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 34 -
This was great! and very very sweet
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: roxieredrose (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 34 -
so good i cant stop reading and waiting for more to come
Author's Response: Thank you. The next chapter should be done soon. :)
Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 34 -
I still adore the way you write Edward. I have read countless fics on this site, but I still think you keep him the most in canon. I always give you kudos for the Bella questions at the end. Seems odd she never asked them in the series. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you. :) I really wished SM would have explored her change questions too but that's what fan fiction is for.
Reviewer: Cepstein1980 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 1
Author's Response: I'm not sure if you meant to leave a review or not, but it came across blank.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 33
Very good.
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 32
Very Good
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 34 -
Doing well.
Author's Response: :D
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 31 - (J)
good.
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Reviewer: kim1974a (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 34 -
Always the weight of the world on his shoulders, I have a soft spot for Charlie
Author's Response: That's our Edward, always over thinking.
And yeah, I have a soft spot for Charlie too. He really is a good dad to Bella.
Reviewer: NKubie (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 34 -
Counting down... I love the feeling of anticipatuiion that you are able to convey.
Author's Response: I think I can safely say we are all counting down at this point. :) More soon!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 34 -
beautiful chapter..that is my perspective of the story
Author's Response: lol. Thanks. :)
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 34 -
GREAT CHAPTER!
Author's Response: LOL. Thank You! :)
Reviewer: amiebug (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 34 -
I really enjoy this story...but I have to admit it's starting to drag just a bit. I am all for a long story but maybe we could skip a couple of days and get down to the wedding already.
Other than that, great job!
Author's Response: Thank you. It does move slow at times and I know the anticipation to just get to the main event is there too, but I feel this is Edward's story and it has to move at his pace. He doesn't do anything without over thinking it and personally I hate stories that just rush to get to the end. I've tried to comprimise with the pacing by writing longer chapters so we will techincally get to the end sooner.
Reviewer: xtothey (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 34 -
Great chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: michaelsgirl (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 34 -
Ok, I just read the last 6 chapters (while allowing my 3 year old to watch Dora, Diego, Max and Ruby, and who knows what is on now) - lol I'm ready for the next chapter! I thought it said completed when I started the story. I'm wondering if you did complete it and decide to take it further? I love it. I'm glad you won the award and I'm sorry for not reviewing more often - just in a hurry to get to the next chapter!
Author's Response: LOL. When I read this I just couldn't help but laugh. It reminded me of a friend of mine who I finally got to start reading this once I reached chapter 31. She litterally put off getting things ready for her kids birthday party because she couldn't stop reading. Now she hounds me for updates everytime she sees me. :)
Hm. I'm not sure why it showed completed for you. I checked and it does say NO beside completed. I did originally plan on only writing the first four chapters but by chapter three I had already decided to go on with it.
Thank you and it shouldn't be too long until the next chapter.
Reviewer: brandella14 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 34 -
I was so happy to see two chapters posting so close together. It felt like a just because gift. So Tanya insecurities came out of no where. I wasn't expecting that insecurity to come up after the weeked they just shared. I am so in love with this story. Where do you come up with these ideas? I hope you keep them coming. So I'm wondering if Edward is going to have to put Tanya in her place when she does finally arrive.. I guess I'll just wait and see. I have a feeling you are going to have the bestest lemons ever. You are amazingly descriptive & imaginative and I'm loving every second of the suspense.. I'll be watching out for you next update. Until then, stay healthy & creating those ideas we all can't get enoug of.
Author's Response: Chapter 33 sorta got lost in the validation que so chapter 34 was more than ready by the time that one posted. Hopefully chapter 35 won't be too long coming though. :)
Not really out of nowhere but Bella's mind is pretty much revolving around two main things right now: being with Edward for the first time on their honeymoon and her soon to be coming change.
lol. Well I'm glad you have confindence in my lemons. I'm really excited to write their first time. :)
Thank you for the well wishes.
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 34 -
can't wait for more
Author's Response: I'm working on the next chapter now. :)
Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 34 -
good chapter! i really enjoyed it!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: scricez (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 34 -
Amazing chapter! Emmett can't resist teasing his little bro, can he? *grin*
Loved the practice with Jasper and I really like that you've put those questions Bella's asked in your story, it feels more realistic (in the book that part was not so much addressed), great job!
I really appreciate your rendering of Charlie..he tries his best to be a good father for Bella and of course having her married at such a young age, with a boy that has left her already once..honestly I can understand his worries (maybe he also fear that Bella's marriage will end like his one with Renee, after all they got married when they were young too..)
by the way it was absolutely awesome when Edward said to Bella that she was giving him the greatest gift!
Can't wait for next chapter, please update soon! ;)
Author's Response: lol. No, he really can't. Edward has been such a prude for so long and now that he is starting to come out of his shell... ;)
Thank you! I wish SM would have address some of this stuff too but since she didn't, I can.
That is one of Charlie's biggest fears for her. No father wants their children to make the same mistakes they did.
I'm working on chapter 35 now, so hopefully not too long a wait. :)
Reviewer: loveAnnie (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 34 -
Woo Hoo!
I love the Jasper sessions. *sigh*
Author's Response: lol. Well there will be one more. I believe it's going to be chapter 36.
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