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Reviewer: pclo (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 34 -

wow. such a great chapter. You got to love Charlie--always loving Bella.
Thanks for writing.

Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

I do love Charlie. He really is a good dad.

Reviewer: TaintedDarkInuShemeeko (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 34 -

At last, at last I've finally been able to read this chapter and it was amazing. Just like Jasper and Edward. I dont think I have ever read a chapter in this story with the both of them in it that I didn't like.

Brieanna



Author's Response:

Yay! :D

Hopefully the next chapter will be up soon and there will be one more Jasper and Edward chapter.

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 34 -

excellent ... all of it!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you are enjoying it. :D

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 34 -

See now why can't I get my chapter to sound as emotionally attached as yours are!

I loved this chapter it was very heart warming.  Its good to see Bella asking questions showing some interest and concern.  I am glad he is being honest with her as well.  I love how well you are bringing your characters together now if only mine could be have as nicely LOL

Look forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

I don't know. :( I've just always had the ability to explain things. Maybe it comes from working with customers and their problems from such a young age.

I think she does need to ask question. I was amazed in the saga that she really didn't ask many. I would have loved to see/read that.

Thanks! :)

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 34 -

See now why can't I get my chapter to sound as emotionally attached as yours are!

I loved this chapter it was very heart warming.  Its good to see Bella asking questions showing some interest and concern.  I am glad he is being honest with her as well.  I love how well you are bringing your characters together now if only mine could be have as nicely LOL

Look forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 30

WTF Alice??? But then again... this is Alice, and nothing she does is without a reason...



Author's Response:

LOL. Wasn't expecting that were you. ;)

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 29

I am shocked how their exploring was arousing.... It reminds me of those make-out sessions we have when we are virgins and pure and you don't even get to second base but think nothing can get better than that! Remember? And it is true because the sensations are so new and unexpected that the impact is much greater. Nothing is taken for granted.

It was cool that Edward has shown much more control than he expected, both when he gave a great step in their intimacy and also when he was strong enough to stop. I hope this is going to give him a boost of confidence...

thx for the chapter! :)



Author's Response:

Oh yes, those firsts are always so full of sensation. Plus the fact they've been tip toeing around their intamacy for so long doesn't help the situation either.

He really is. He's come such a long way.

Reviewer: booklover08 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 34 -

Lovely description from Edward's POV while recalling and then re-imagining the scenes so he can "practice" - Poor Jasper, having to hide out and block out while all this is going on!!  TMI, brother!!  The last days here are going to take a toll on both of them!  ;)



Author's Response:

Yeah it really is taking it's toll. They only have one more practice session left. I was hoping to get it into chapter 36 but chapter 35 just became a monster and I had to cut it off early so it's looking to be in 37.

Reviewer: booklover08 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 33

Poor conflicted Bella - she seems always afraid to lose Edward.......nice how Charlie plays into that. replaying his poor marriage history back to her!  Hope Edward and Jasper can help Edward work out the last of his pre-wedding jitters??



Author's Response:

She has real fears though and so does Charlie. But it's good she is voicing them. These two have to talk to each other!

 

Reviewer: booklover08 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 32

As always, the give and take between them - she tries to be considerate and he tries to protect!  And he can't always protect her from everything!



Author's Response:

No he can't, but he tries none the less.

Reviewer: booklover08 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 31 - (J)

I really loved the tension between desire and fear! The aching need that both of them describe (as you have so aptly ascribed to them) and yet the excitement and Edward's mixture of fear and lust and horror at the thought of what might happen....it is mixed in delightfully here!!



Author's Response:

Thank you. I really wanted the complexity of emotion to come through in this story.

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 28

The synphony, the red dress... such a Pretty Woman moment! hahah



Author's Response:

lol. Yep, a little. :)

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 26

Gosh! You are portraiting his struggle so well... honestly, it is really something i think would actually have happened. Very canon, indeed.

And it does make total sense! Why, with the intensity of his love and obsession for Bella and the fact that he is a 100 years old virgin, very passionate vampire... yeah, intense is a good word to describe it all.

Thx for the chapter!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you! :D

I really want this story to fill that gap we all wish was in there between Eclipse and BD.

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 24

That was hot! I can only imagine how he must be completely out of control, as when she will be turned. Jesus!



Author's Response:

hehehe. Thanks. :)

Yes, Edward out of control will be a sight to see. ;)

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 23

hmmmmmm.... interesting topic. Each chapter I like your Bella more! :D



Author's Response:

:D Glad to hear it.

Reviewer: azhgirl (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 15

that was hot in a gross sort of way :)  loving the story!



Author's Response:

lol. Well he is a vampire after all.

Reviewer: MyBrownEyes (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 34 -

Emmett is hilarious. Edward is doing a lot better on his "practicing" with Jasper. I love that Bella asked questions about her change. And Charlie...worried about losing his daughter...I love him. Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Emmett is always good for getting under Edward's skin when it comes to sex especially. And yeah he is getting much better.

Thanks! :)

Reviewer: MyBrownEyes (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 33

One week until the wedding and the sexual tension is killing me. Edward has some serious will power for stopping Bella after she just attacked him.



Author's Response:

Yes, he REALLY does. That boy is going to combust one of these days. ;)

Reviewer: swt-vixen (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 34 -

Two Thumbs Up :)



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Kristal_Victoria (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 34 -

loved it as usual! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

Reviewer: elisena (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 34 -

great chapter.  i really like how you're having bella bring up some of her concerns with edward.



Author's Response:

Thanks. :)

I really wish we got to see some of those concerns brought up in the actual saga.

Reviewer: kkendall (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 34 -

Never a disappointment

Author's Response:

Thank you! :D

Reviewer: violet2009 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 34 -

Aww, Edward is doing so well with his lessons! ;) Loved the chapter-update soon!! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

Reviewer: cravingtwilight (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 34 -

A few of the passers by glanced at her stomach looking for a tale tail bump.—change tale tail to [tell tale]


 


Really enjoyed the chapter. Em can be kinda an ass. I’m glad E/J had a successful outing. Really looking forward to how you write the wedding!



Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. :)

Reviewer: cravingtwilight (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 33

I feel bad about you’re a/n and only getting 50 reviews last ch. I’m sorry! I was out of town for weeks, in an area w. no internet access, and then my computer broke. Anyway, I still love your story and writing and still think it’s the better than what SM came up with! So, sorry for the delay, but still massive amounts of love!


 


Kissing and licking up my stomach and chest, she until she reached my right nipple.—omit the first [she]


 


I whispered while continuing to try and sooth her with my hands.—change sooth to [soothe]


 


Taking my queue, she lowed herself to sit beside me.—change queue to [que] (note: a queue is a line, like you formed a queue at the grocery store checkout)


 


It was actually a surprise he’d not marked the pages for me of his favorites.—rofl


 

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