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Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 34 -
Awww. I cant wait until they find out she is pregnant. At first I REALLY wanted to read the wedding night, but know I REALLY want to read his thoughts on Renesmee.
Author's Response: Glad to hear you're enjoying it so much. :)
Reviewer: scotty studer (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 2
You write well. I think everyone always wanted to hear more from Edward's perspective. This is an interesting part of the story to explore, but would Carlilse have had more to say and so quickly have returned to his book? I'd like to hear more advise from him and have Edward more fully exress his thoughts.....I am engaged though....and will keep reading.
Thanks.
Author's Response: Thank you. Don't worry, there is more Carlisle later.
Reviewer: xxsiriahcullenxx (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 35
i cant wait to read the rest lol
Author's Response: :D I hope you enjoy it.
Reviewer: TaintedDarkInuShemeeko (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 35
This chapter was amazing, I loved every second of it. Especially the part where Charlie asked Bella if she thought Edward would like to have dinner with them.
Brie,
Author's Response: Thanks. :) So glad you enjoyed it. I just love Charlie. He is such a dad.
Reviewer: azhgirl (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 35
LOVE LOVE LOVE your story! Edward growling at her was unbelievably hot! Can't wait for more hope you will be writting this up untill the honeymoon.....I know your honeymoon version of events will be great!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
This story will end with their first night on Isle Esme, but there is a sequel planned that will cover the honeymoon.
Reviewer: Phae (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 35
I have a one track mind, too! And I like the idea of more practicing, don't you?
Bless Charlie, he's trying. Poor man. Fathers are overprotective enough, but a father who is a sheriff is probably off the radar in terms of being overprotective. Maybe a day of fishing will calm him down before dinner.
Good chapter!
Author's Response: LOL. Practicing definately has it's upside. ;)
Charlie is very protective and a good dad, but he's trying.
Thanks! :D
Reviewer: brandella14 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 35
That was a bomb chapter. Edward finally let go of some of his control.. And Bella liked it.. I loved how he reacted when she toold him that she liked it. So since they will have the day alone tomorow I wonder what other steps they will take? I can't wait to see what you have in store. I wonder if all this talking about Tanya is a setup for some drama to come? Will Jacob come back and cause any? Hmm.. I'll be watching for your next update..
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
lol. I really have your brain working overtime don't I. I love reading speculation, but I'm pretty closed lipped when it comes to my plots so you'll have to just wait and see. ;) (There are some teasers over on the forum thread for next chapter if you'd like to check those out.)
Reviewer: AliKatt (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 35
Great chapter... Thanks for the update. THX
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 35
SO DO I!!! *mwhaha*
Another nicely satisfying chapter. Great bit with Charlie!
Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: lol. Thank you! :D
Reviewer: kkendall (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 35
So do I!!! ;o) love it!
Author's Response: lol. Thanks. :)
Reviewer: xtothey (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 35
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 35
aaawww nice charlie.....yummy edward!
Author's Response: LOL. You are too funny. :)
Reviewer: tonya (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 12
You are doing a great job of capturing the characters! I wish SM would consider writing more of Twilight from Ed's perspective. Can't wait to read more of your story! Thanks.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad your enjoying it so far. I'm really hoping that SM at least finishes Midnight Sun. I loved the draft but I REALLY, REALLY want the meadow scene. :)
Reviewer: Fleuritup (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 35
thank you for writing this its nice to see edward enjoying himself. that made my night. thank you for updating. and i love that you have charlie making an effort. i think its cute that he'll be having dinner with them i just feel bad that he'll have to endure the human food but hey bellas worth it
Author's Response: He is finally starting to enjoy himself a little. Yay! :)
I'm almost to writing the dinner for next chapter now so it should be interesting with him sitting across the table from Charlie. hehehe
Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 35
Fantastic chapter. This absolutely felt like a scene that was missing from the series (and was just as hot at as the 'compromise' on the new bed scene in Eclipse.) :)
I was so happy when I saw an update from you! I really love this story!
Author's Response: So glad you like it. More soon. :)
Reviewer: Jensy (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 35
<< And when you awake, you will be like me. My mate. Forever. And if it takes a year or five for you to get yourself under control… For us to be like this again, that will be okay. What I told you earlier was true; you are giving me a gift. You are giving me your humanity. I will never, would never, take that for granted.” >>
This was beautiful, Eki. This chapter was very well-written! I love how the tension between Charlie and Edward built up until Charlie invited him over to dinner, awww. And the growl and Edward's reaction to it was super cute.
Author's Response: Aww thanks Jen. :D
There will definately be more growling Edward. ;)
Reviewer: nothing2do (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 35
Awww, I love it. I love how sweet they are and how Charlie is trying to be nice. I just love it.
Author's Response: Thanks. :) Charlie is trying but it's hard for him.
Reviewer: pclo (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 35
Charlie is such a great dad.
Lovely chapter. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: He really is. :)
Thanks!
Reviewer: Kristal_Victoria (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 35
So do I... lol Great chapter!
Author's Response: lol. Thanks. :)
Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 35
awwww. i also liked it when edward growled. its sexy.
update soon!!
Author's Response: Me too. :D
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 35
Well. That was just a touch citrusy... It's nice that Charlie is trying. I also like that Edward is discussing Bella's change more openly and answering her questions, which will alleviate her fears a bit. 5 days until the wedding, huh? Here's for more practicing!
Author's Response: Just a touch of citrus. ;)
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 35
It finally hit me what seems different about the chapters as it gets closer to their wedding. The chapters have gotten a whole lot better since Edward decided to really be truthful and honest and treat Bella as an equal. I don't mean your writing, which has always been good and made me feel like I was part of the story. I mean the story has gotten even better for me since Edward shows almost no hesitation in being completely honest with her and treating Bella as his true equal.
Yay! I'm only sad that I am caught up now and must wait for an update :)
Author's Response: Yes his tone has lightened up a little, not so depressing now that he's come to terms with some things and excepted Bella is going to be like him which means he shouldn't hide things from her.
Well hopefully you won't have to wait too long. I'm trying to post a chapter a week until the end with this one now. Let's see if I can acctually do it. ;)
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 34 -
Very good! I like how the chapters are still intense, yet seem to be more light-hearted at the same time.
Good one and I look forward to the next!
Author's Response: Yes it isn't quite as do or die as it was at the beinging as Edward is gaining some confidence. :)
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 35
Excellent chapter. Full of details of Charlie making an attempt to accept Edward. Charlie is concerned about Bella being hurt mentally again like she was when he left in New Moon. Bella spoke to Charlie and now Edward is going to eat dinner with them. Knowing he would need to expel it later. Edward believed that an effort has been made to accept him and their relationship. Lots of smooches are always nice. Makes all of us feel warm inside. Looking forward to the next chapter of the following day when Charlie is gone fishing all day. The countdown is getting closer and closerr.
Author's Response: A lot of things happened in this chapter that needed to before the wedding. Chapter 36 will deal with the dinner so you'll get to see all that fun stuff. ;)
Oh yes. :D Practicing is ALWAYS nice. hehehe
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 33
I work 2 jobs now and so don't have time to read and review as much as I'd like :(
This chapter was one of your best ones, I think. I like how Edward kinda just rolled with it when Bella was playing the more dominant role. I liked how it does not seem to take as long for Edward to 'calm down' now. Quite good :)
Author's Response: Sorry to hear you've been working so hard. One job is bad enough but two definately isn't fun. :(
I'm glad you liked this one. There really is only one thing Bella seems to get emotional over and that's Edward, which came out very agressively in this chapter. ;)
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