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Reviewer: MommylovesEdward (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 25
Can you IMAGINE??...ugh...even my cheeks are flushing for Bella's unknown embarrassment!!
Author's Response: I know I wouldn't want to be in Bella's position. Very embarressing.
Reviewer: MommylovesEdward (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 24
OMG OMG, I loved, loved, loved this chapter!! It was so likely to happen, and Vulnerable Edward is my favorite Edward next to Spontanious Edward !!
Author's Response: lol. I love making Edward feel uncomfortable. He's just too cute. :D
Reviewer: MommylovesEdward (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 22
What a great chapter!! And I'm anxious for the next one knowing it's the longest one yet...making me soooo happy!
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Reviewer: MommylovesEdward (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2009 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 21
May I just say AGAIN how much I love Carlisle??!! Only Carlisle could be a man to pass along a discipline and make the bearer of it feel more love coming out than going in...you know what I mean?
And of course Jasper, he's my hero too...and I couldn't love Alice more!
"my room-our room"...how sweet is that?!
Really well done all the way through so far...good job!!
Author's Response: I do. :)
So glad you're still enjoying it and you have quite a bit more to go!
Reviewer: Rachel M (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 36
can't wait for the final chapters!!
i hope you get time to finish off this story soon, im so addicted
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
I'm working on chapter 37 so I'm hoping to keep this story moving. We really are close to the end.
Reviewer: MommylovesEdward (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 12
Awwwwww....that was the sweetest ending to this chapter EVER! I so love Carlisle!
Author's Response: I love Carlisle as well. I've always thought he and Edward's relationship should have been explored a little more. Glad you are enjoying the story so far. :)
Reviewer: kkendall (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 36
Still loving it!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Reviewer: twilightfreak09 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 36
"Truthfully I thought that might be an insult to dirt."
Lol! That was funny! Poor Edward. He had to eat the whole thing. And poor Bella! She had to sit there and watch.
I liked the bit with Charlie watching Edward's hands , too! Such a dad like thing to do. I think it would have been funny if Edward had given her booty a little squeeze. I would have liked to hear Charlie's reaction to that. I don't think it would have been very nice! Lol!
Author's Response: Finally someone comments on my second favorite line of the chapter. lol. What's my first you ask? "Cow is cow no matter how you present it." lol.
You're right, Charlie's thoughts wouldn't have been pretty. And although it would have been funny for Edward to let his hands roam, I just couldn't see him doing it. He is still very proper even if he is letting lose a little more. :)
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 36
I'm still with you! :D Look forward to your new venture too.
I loved how he was tracking the hours! Great interactions this chapter (Esme, Charlie, as well as BxE).
Thanks for the great fic!!!
Author's Response: Edward is just as excited to try to be together this way as Bella is, he just hides it better. :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing. More soon...
Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 03:12 AM · On: Chapter 36
Hi, in case you didn't know, there is already a story called Finding Bella, by Wishingforlove, posted here on Twilighted. Unless you have posted it already you might want to reconsider your title, it could be a bit confusing for readers otherwise!
-Anna-
Author's Response: I didn't, but I chose Finding Bella because it is the best fit for my story. It is also posted elsewhere.
Reviewer: NKubie (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 36
Nice chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: EmeraldRomance (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 36
This was a wonderful chapter full of innocent heat. I think it's awesome that you worked in a dinner with Edward. I'm sure, pizza and wedding cake aside, he would've been forced into that situation eventually in the series.
Looking forward to more! But I understand about being patient:)
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
I always wondered about Edward eating and yea, you'd think that at least one dinner with Charlie had to happened at some point and time.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 36
Squee a new story!!! Thats fan freaking tastic!!!! You rock and this story has been one of my most favorite twist on the what ifs I love it! as you know I love my WHAT IF theory and since practice would have been helpful I so can't wait for your honeymoon! SWOON! Pant Pant Fans self LOL
Look forward to the next chapter!!!!
Author's Response: lol. I love getting reviews from you.
This new story is a complete 180 from Perspective so I hope you'll enjoy it. :)
Reviewer: GreatEscape (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 36
Okay just read chapters 20-36! This is a great story but I must admit I feel like it's starting to get a little too repetitive. i still love what you're doing with the characters and I love all the funny Emmett parts!
Author's Response: I'm curious as to what parts you felt were repetitive. Chapter 20-36 covers a lot of territory including his first session with Jasper and their weekend in Seattle. This story does have slow pacing, and that is for two reasons; one, my personal style of writing, I don't like to rush to get to the end, and two, this is Edward's POV and that's just his personality.
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 36
Getting closer to D-Day. A lot of talking with Bella/Edward no lemons sucks!!! Edward had to eat real food. Ha-Ha Poor boy now he has to get rid of it. Lots of reading and talking about what is to come in 102+ hours. Getting prepared for Jasper and having emotions intensified to help with his control. Charlie and his suspicions always watching Edward. Not too much longer before the wedding. Looking forward to the evening with Jasper and the entire day tomorrow.
Author's Response: It is really getting closer to D-Day. The talking is important though. Gotta know what your partner wants and doesn't want. ;)
Reviewer: AliKatt (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 36
Good chapter. Gotta love Charlie. THX
Author's Response: Yep. Gotta love Charlie. :)
Reviewer: fanofcullens (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 36
Enjoying the story and fills in some holes between books
Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you. This was such an important time for Bella and Edward and I was very sad that SM left it out.
Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 11:02 AM · On: Chapter 36
Awesome chappie! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: scricez (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 36
Excellent chapter!! Loved it, especially at the end when Charlie was watching where Edward's hands went, lol!! He's such a dad..
Poor Edward, I feel bad too that he has had to eat the entire meal..at least his effort was not wasted since it seems that Charlie is more accepting now!
I can't wait for the next Jasper chapter and I'll make sure to chack your new story once you post it!
Author's Response: Charlie is such a dad, but that is why we love him. :)
I debated if I'd make Edward meet the entire meal or not, but it just seemed to fit. I mean when you think about it, this is the first meal Edward has sat down and had with Charlie and Bella, and considering the length of time they have been dating, it's been a long time coming.
Thanks. I hope you like the new one. :D
Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 36
I always feel as though I'm leaving you the same damned review. It's a bit frustrating. So, again. You've done an incredible job with this. Rarely do I read a story that follows cannon so closely and actually really enjoy it as I do yours.
Looking forward to your new one and the next chapter of this.
Author's Response: lol. You are fine. I'm glad you are still getting enjoyment out of reading it. :)
Reviewer: mundanemomma (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 36
I'm disappointed to hear that the next chapter will be delayed; I do so look forward to each new chapter! However, I am pleased to hear you are writing a new story, you are an excellent writer and stay so true to character, this story has been wonderful.
Author's Response: Hopefully it won't take too long for the new story. I'm not sweating it yet, since I've yet to put anything for chapter 37 down on paper yet. If I get it done, and a week later its still not up then I'll beging to get hyper.
The new story is an AU-Human but only one person is going to be a little out of character.
Thank you for following this story and I hope you like the new one as well. :)
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 36
this was great - charlie will be charlie!
Author's Response: Thank you. :) I don't think I can have enough of Charlie. He is such a great dad.
Reviewer: bb123 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 36
Write more please
Author's Response: lol. Working on it.
Reviewer: Kristal_Victoria (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 36
aaaaaaagh!!! can't stand the suspense! :)
Author's Response: lol. What suspense? You mean the teasing? The almost there, but not quite? ;)
Reviewer: azhgirl (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2009 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 36
I just love you. You made me laugh the way you write Charlie very amusing :) Pls. update soon I so look forward to this..... I will be sure to chk out your new fic as well.
Author's Response: lol. Thanks. :D
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