Great update bb!! I got embarrrassed with the Minister Weber's talk and with Renee's talk. I even laughed at one point... I can't wait for your next update!

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Thank you! :)

Laughing is definatly a good thing. This chapter was full of ackward and very real moments.

That was some intense practice. Though it is sweet that he wants to wait to be with Bella to actually feel everything.

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lol. Just a little. ;)

Oh no! Not a bachelorette party! Bad Alice! Bad! Please tell me there's not gonna be a stripper?! I think the boys night at the diner is gonna be odd too.

Loved the chat with Rev. Webber. And Edwards talk with Charlie was really sweet! Can't wait for more!

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lol. You had to know Alice, being Alice wouldn't let something as traditional as a bachelorette party go unobserved now did you? ;) Don't worry, it won't be too bad. Edward will have her head if she went too far.

 

Thank you for continuing this story. As always, great characterizations. I'm sure that writing canon is far more difficult and you do it so well.

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You're welcome. Writing someone elses characters is more challenging than your own espcially when you are trying to stay true to them in every way possible.

Really great chapter. I liked all the dialogue.

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Thank you. :)

I loved that Bella kept on questioning Edward about the debacle with Jasper!  She knows that Edward can't hurt her, and tries to make her point over and over again.  Yet Edward constantly dismisses her statements as merely comfort or platitudes!  I can't wait to see what the boys have planned for Edward!

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Edward is a bit stubborn isn't he. ;) Thank goodness Bella knows that.

 OMG Poor Edward AND Jasper!!!  This must have been alot harder on Jasper then I could ever imagine!

Great Work Look forward to the next chapter!!

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I've actually written a one-shot (haven't posted it yet) picking up when Edward yells for him to stop. It's all in Jasper's POV so that should be fun. :)

Oops, sorry about that...looks like I had a computer glitch...thought the previous chapter I reviewed was the last, when this is the last!

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lol. That's okay.

It's good to know that you won't leave us hanging. :) It's so nice having the spaces filled in with such real emotion and I can almost feel the love between Bella and Edward. This is really special. *applauds loudly* I need to check out your new "Finding Bella"! Thanx!

*hugs*
Joan

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Thank you. :)

I want their love to come through more than anything else. These two have been through so much, and this is just another obsticle.

Another great chapter

I would love to see a Renne and Emmett conversation LOL

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lol. That would be fun. hehehe

Getting information from Edward is liking pulling teeth.  You have to keep probing and probing getting a little at a time.  It's like extracted inpacted wisdom teeth.  Breaking it in small pieces until you have the entire tooth extracted in pieces.  Good thing Bella is stubborn and once she wants information she will continue to probe until she is satisfied with his response and his facial expressions and reading his eyes.  What a busy day for them.  Dealing with Charlie for the afternoon.  Meeting the minister.  Picking up Renee and Phil.  Not to mention those embarassing questions from Renee regarding their sex life now and in near future.  Embarassing both Bella and Edward.  I feel so sorry for Bella for the party she will have to endure this evening with her families and friends.  Edward at least is at the diner.  What can possibly happen in a small town diner.  If Emmett does anything uncouth Edward will kill him.  Edward finally gained Charlie's acceptance, he doesn't need to have it destroyed by wild behavior.  Looking forward to the last four chapters.  Really sorry it is coming to a close.  I have enjoyed this story through all their times together and pushing the envelope just a bit more to be totally emotionally and physically ready for their life to come after their wedding.

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lol. It really is difficult to get information out of Edward, but of course Bella knows this. ;) She really is the perfect compainion for him since she is just as stubborn and will call him on things most others would just let go.

It was an insanely busy day for them! But I remember the days leading up to my wedding, everything that had to be done, and in all that I didn't have a Renee or an Alice. :)

Thank you. :) The good news is that you will see these two again, hopefully in the near future, in the sequel. It seems like there is enough interest that people want to see the honeymoon that SM just skimmed over.

Thank you for the much awaited chapter, it was wonderful and worth the wait. I am looking forward to the honeymoon on Isle Esmee because I remember when reading BD how disappointed I was that we weren't going to read anything about their first night "together". Having come to the Twilight saga late, (after only seeing the movie on DVD. Yeah, I can't believe it either!) then buying and reading the books, and finding the web sites devoted to it, not to mention fanfic (hehe), I realized SM just couldn't do that and came to appreciate her view. However, that said, I want to read about their wedding night in all it's glory!! LOL. So please don't disappoint me. :)

Loved this chapter, as I've loved each and every chapter you've written so far.

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I think there are more people out there than you think that have come to the saga after the movie.

As for the wedding night...well you will get an actual love scene, I don't fade to black. I'll try not to disappoint. ;)

Squeeeeeeeeeeeeee! Absolutely loved this... you know the characters soooo well! Can't wait for the rest! :)

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LOL. Thanks! :)