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Reviewer: St0pSmackinMe07 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 39
lovely chapter. great job. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 4
oh we all know edward has super control why does he doubt himself so, but it's good as that is in canon
Author's Response: He does have super control, but we all know he never views it like that.
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 3
at least they did not take the mickey although emmett future advice might leave a lot to desire knowing emmett ha ha
Author's Response: Yes, you know Emmett isn't going to leave it there given the situation. lol
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 2
think i'm going to enjoy this story alice is funny the planner extrordinare
Author's Response: Alice is hillarious. I just love her.
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 1
nice start i enjoy in canon fic so will be swiftly moving on
Author's Response: Thanks. This does stay pretty close to cannon the whole way through. :)
Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 39
I was so glad to see that you updated!! And it was such a great chapter. I'm glad that Bella put Renee in her place. How embarassing...
Anyway I can't wait for the next one!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
I'm should have the next one submitted before Christmas.
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 39
THIS WAS GREAT! CANT WAIT FOR THE WEDDING!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 39
Thanks for the update, I loved it. I'm getting a little impatient for the wedding day, just as Edward and Bella are, though I hope you aren't going to do to us what SM did when it came to their wedding night. That would be criminal! LOL.
Boy that Renee is something else, haha.
Author's Response: lol. You're welcome. The next chapter will go up to the wedding, so not much longer to wait. And not to worry, the wedding night will not be a fade to black moment. :)
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 39
Talk about embarassment - it really sounds like Renee - I would have freaked at my mum too! Poor Bella.
As usual nicely done - I almost wish I hadn't started reading this story now as I am terribly impatient and should have waited for it to be finished! :-)
How many more chapters are you planning?
A. x
Author's Response: It was a very Renee thing to do. She just says what she thinks without a filter. Her intentions are good, really, but Bella being who she is wouldn't want to share that type of information. You'd think she'd know that by now.
Thank you, but I'm glad you're reading it now. I should have the next chapter submitted at least before Christmas.
We have 3 chapters left.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 02:38 AM · On: Chapter 39
As the wedding approaches Edward seems more excited for the event AND the honeymoon, and much less apprehensive! In fact, he has been the one to be soothing the nerves and assuring Bella that she need not worry about her technique in the bedroom! It must have taken every ounce of his restraint not to protect Bella from Renee! I can't wait to see how his "bachelor party" goes!
Author's Response: He is excited about both, even though his nerves about the wedding night keep popping up here and there. Edward wants Bella to be his in every possible way. Bella has always been concerned about not being enough for him. I thought it was logical that would flow into the bedroom as well. As for the bachelor party...you know Emmett will be in rare form. ;)
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 39
can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 39
I loved all the details here, including Charlie finally accepting Edward and Bella giving Renee what for! Yess! I'm glad to see Bella show some backbone. She's going to need it with Emmett as a brother for eternity. LOL
Author's Response: There was a lot in this chapter. Bella standing up to her mother was a given imo. Her mom insulted her man, Bella couldn't stand for that. You're right though, Bella she'll need that firey spirt when dealing with Emmett for the rest of her existance. :)
Reviewer: littlehill (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 39
It was worth the wait
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Reviewer: NKubie (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 39
Great chapter. Renee is a hoot!
Author's Response: Thank you! She really is. :)
Reviewer: sillyvamp (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 39
Thanks for the new chapter! :)
Author's Response: Welcome. :)
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 38
Beautiful :) Can't wait to read more!
Achilles
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
The next chapter is in the que.
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 9
I love the way you are writing the kissing parts - sweet and ready for more I guess.
Achilles
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 7
Poor old Bella - her stomach always gives her away! Must admit I'd rather be kissing Edward than eating!
Achilles
Author's Response: I think most of us would rather be kissing Edward than doing a pesky 'human' thing like eating. ;)
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 2
So far it's nice and written well - fits in with the story nicely too.
Achilles
Author's Response: Thank you. :) My goal was that this story could be placed between Eclipse and Breaking Dawn with little to no effort.
Reviewer: Kristal_Victoria (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hi! I'm really enjoying the story, so will another chapter be up soon?
Author's Response: Thenk you. :)
The next chapter is waiting for validation so hopefully it will be up soon.
Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 38
It's been a while since I've read the update to this wonderful story of yours. I am a big fan of your writing (and also love Finding Bella). I think your story here is so beautiful because you really get into how much they mean to one another and how deeply Edward loves Bella. I can't wait to read more and hope you update again soon. :)
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
The next chapter is just waiting for validation and hopefully will be up soon.
Reviewer: alaahabib (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 38
i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeee this story- ive read this chapter twice!
pleaseeee pleaseeeeee hurrry!
Author's Response: Thank you. The next chapter is written. I'm waiting on the chapter of my other story to post here so that I can submit this one.
Reviewer: azhgirl (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 38
PLEASE update!!!!!!!!! Love your story don't want to wait anymore. love u :)
Author's Response: I just finished writing chapter 39 Thursday, so it will be submitted as soon as chapter 4 of Finding Bella posts. :)
Reviewer: azhgirl (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 38
PLEASE update soon! :)
Author's Response: I'm working on chapter 39, so I'll get it submitted as soon as it's finished. :)
Reviewer: minaq (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 38
Sorry, this is also my first time ever posting anything...forgot to enter the rating.
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