The detail you gave to the reception was beautiful. I loved it!

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Thank you! :)

I can't believe this story is winding down! I love Edward's POV on his relationship w/ Bella. I hope someday Stephenie will complete Midnight Sun

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Thank you. :)

I hope that as well. I really want to see the meadow scene from Edward's POV.

Very well done! I loved this retelling of the wedding and as usual you've really captured Edward's feelings perfectly! ;D

I can't wait to read the next chapter even if I'm sad because it means this story will end..

Update soon! :D

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Thank you! :)

Such an awesome retelling of the wedding! I had my hankie handy. I love this story and I'm always so happy to see an update. Can't wait for your version of the honeymoon, wink*wink*..:)

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Thank you! :D

I don't always think to review, but it doesn't mean I don't enjoy the story.

You know, this is the first fic I can remember reading that dealt with the canon wedding from Edward's POV (actually, second—Breaking Dawn: EPOV was the first). I think you handled his thoughts for the wedding and the reception perfectly, and you made me wonder (for the first time) whether Edward shot the garter at Mike with enough force to make it sting. As old fashioned as Edward is, I can see him deliberately doing that. I also wonder whether Bella danced with Jasper at the reception. We know she had one with Emmett, and it was mentioned in BD that there were a lot of people she'd yet to dance with, but no mention of Jazz. What do you think?

Can't wait to read more!

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I do think she danced with Jasper as well as Carlisle. I would have loved to read the dance between Carlisle and Bella. I think their conversation would have been interesting.

this is very well written

and i liked how you incorporated other scenes that werent necesarily written in BD

and that was interesting !! !!! :)

 

UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!

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Thank you. :)

Really good job, bb!

You got me all teary *pouts*

I can't wait to see how the next chapter plays out!

Great job!

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Thank you! :)

I'm so glad that you were right there with Edward and Bella in this emotional moment.

loved it

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Thanks. :)

nice edward wedding, looking forward to the next (possibly last) chapter.  i re-read the author's notes at the beginning of the story that said this was only going to be a 4 chapter story.  haha.  thank goodness you didn't stop at 4!!!!!!

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Thank you, and yes chapter 42 will be the last chapter in this story. It really is hard to believe, but it's time. If I pick up the story again, it will be in a sequel.

sooooooooooo sweet! loved it! please get the last chapter up soon my talented friend! :)

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Thanks! :)

I'm hoping to have the last chapter written sometime this month.

Absolutely beautiful. The wedding from Edward's point of view from his first glance at her as she approached him in front of family and friends.  Standard wedding vows. Knew Tanya would still be a little skanky when encountering Edward.  Good job of Edward to stop the hug as soon as possible.  Great instincts that Bella felt uncomfortable with Tanya and her physical forwardness.  The small guest list congratulating the couple in the living room after the ceremony.  Each person giving hugs, kisses, and handshakes to the happy couple.  The description of their faces and facial expressions as the two (Edward and Bella) gaze into each others eyes sent shivers down my spine.  The love and joy each felt and expressed towards the other.  The reception starting with guests passing the head table with bride and groom and their attendants giving them greetings, congratulations, and loving remarks.  Finally the bride and groom got into the buffet line to fill their plates.  Really funny thinking of all the vampires placing food they would never eat on their plates and making the humans believe they are actually eating.  Makes me chuckle.  Boy they sure get fooled don't they? I adore when Edward dances with his wife it is so romantic what he says to her.  As they dance to the music holding each other tighter and having at times silent communication, verbal innuendo banter, or just sweet nothings to each other. My favorites are the Mrs. Cullen/Mr. Cullen references among them.  I know when you're first married and your spouse says that to you with the look of love it's disarming.  It sends a chill throughout your body.  It's like that's me, that's my name now.  It is surreal.  When Jacob shows up and Edward has to pass the time away from Bella dancing with all the women in attendance at the wedding. He is just going through the motions.  Not enjoying it, not hating, just moving to the music.  All his focus and thoughts are towards the beautiful woman that promised to be with him forever.  Loved this chapter.  Looking forward to the next chapter, but sad as well.  Thoroughly have enjoyed this story from Chapter One to the present.

Author's Response:

Thank you! :D

There was so much I wanted to cover in this chapter. When reading BD I always felt that the wedding was rushed, and I didn't want to do that. These characters and their interactions are amazing. I wanted to explore that.

I've always viewed Edward as going through the motions pretty much any time he is away from Bella. She is a part of him and without her he is not whole.

cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Thanks. :)

It is in the que so it should be posted soon.

Hi, i did review earlier on but somehow trying to add to it i deleted it lol!!!! I am new to this website and fanfic too, i have to say your story is absolutely fantastic, you have edward's personality perfect and i cannot wait to read more - unfortunately i have to stop now and make lunch lol!

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Thank you! I'm so glad you are enjoying my story. :)