That sneaky Charlie, trying to throw a wrench into the works. Once Edward explained, it did the chief no good anyway. Boundaries were pushed just a bit further.

More progress and sharing the good news that Edward's excitement is making Bella happy. Too bad Charlie can't be happy, too. He just isn't thrilled that his little  girl will be spending the weekend in Seattle with her fiancee.

I can kind of see Edward's  thinking changing, slowly but surely.  With that vast vampire mind, he should be able to adapt better than most humans anyway.

Perhaps this Canadian hunting trip won't turn out so badly after all. If Carlisle or Jasper can give Edward any tips or provide him some confidence, it will have been worthwhile.

I hate to think of Edward as being prudish, but I guess that's really his basic problem. Every time he thinks he has a handle on his problem, another seems to pop up!

Trust Emmett to be as in your face as he can be! I guess he thinks he's helping!

Attaboy, Edward, now you're getting the idea! Trust Bella to come up with some sort of solution. Practice makes perfect, vampire boy!

It's a bit surprising that none of the three Edward has asked for advice has thiought to give him pointers on diffusing some of the energy built up during sex.

Looks like Edward is going to bite the bullet and ask his brothers for advice. Sure hope this works out for him. He's peobably going to teased, at least by Emmett, but maybe they both can help , too.

Great wedding night.  I have enjoyed the story.

It is nice to have the wedding from EPOV 

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I like the detail of using a real hotel in Seattle.  I'm really enjoying this story.  BD barely gave any time to the time before the wedding.  I think Edward would have tried to prepare.  Thanks for taking your time and all the details.

I really loved this story. What I liked most was how it seemed to fit in perfectly with Breaking Dawn but didn't change a thing about the book itself but you still added your own story in between the pages. You did a very good job, both with the story and keeping the characters very true to themselves. I thought it would get... montonious?... when they couldn't advance more than dictated in Breaking Dawn, but you proved me pleasently wrong. Not at one point in this story did I get bored. I was anxiously reaidng the chapters one after the other, almost without stopping.

My favourite chapter would have to be the wedding. I don't know what it is about that chapter, but it really got to me, more then the scene in the book did, but that's most likely because you went into more detail than Stephenie Meyer did. All the same, it was great.

Thank you for taking the time to write this story and to share it with us all over here. I had a blast reading this.