i like this. i hope there is more soon.

Author's Response:

Glad you like my story. The next chapter is already written but it's been taking at least two weeks for them to post so hopefully it won't take too long. Thanks for reviewing. :)

I am thoroughly enjoying this ekimmuh.  Your characterizations, particularly Edward's "voice" are on the money.  I love how your Edward sees Bella.  I hope you continue this throughout the honeymoon and maybe even the end of BD.  Excellent work!

Author's Response:

I'm glad your enjoying it. I love Edward as a character for all his complications and his unconditional love for Bella. To the end of BD? Hm. Well... I don't know. This will be a very long fic if I do that so we will have to see. I guess if people are still reading and want me to continue... Let's just get to the honeymoon first. lol.

Edward shouldn't dismiss those books so quickly, lots of people have benefited from the Kama Sutra!  Poor Edward, it's gotta suck to be such a private person and have no privacy whatsoever.  At least everybody's not all up in Bella's face about things.  And Edward's trying so hard...

Author's Response:

I see Edward as being rather shy about sex in general. He's seen it from the outside many times of course through peoples thoughts and of course his experiences living with three happily married couples but it's not quite the same when talking about it for himself. I think you said it perfectly, he's a very private person and this is a rather embarressing situation for him outside of all the extra complications.

I was hoping you were going to take it in this direction!

Author's Response:

Hopefully my imagination will be able to fill three weeks of preperation. I have a few ideas and hopefully I'll be able to make them work.

Thanks for reviewing. :)

This is a wonderful story and I can't wait for the next chapter... You have captured the characters beautifully..... Thank you

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing Jennlyn. I've submitted the next chapter already, just waiting for the powers that be to approve it. Edward is a very complicated character and I've tried very hard to stay true to him especially. I'm so glad you feel I've accomplished it.

wow! i just found this story and read the whole thing through, its wonderful.you write so much like edward, and the characterizations are right on point. i am awestruck that not many ppl review this story,you truly deserve it. i'm adding you to my favorites. please update soon, you're a magnificent author, :D

<3 -morgan

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. As for not more people reviewing...well I'm a new author here. This is my first fic on this site so maybe it's b/c not very ppl are familiar with me. I dont' know.  I'm glad your enjoying the story so far. I've already submmited the next chapter, it's just waiting on the beta approval so hopefully it will be up soon.

this is great! I so want to know more!!! and i want him to let jasper help!

Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm hoping to have more up soon. I'm a little behind atm trying to get ready for the holidays but I'm hoping to have at least one more chapter up before Christmas.

Uhhh...Im so looking forward for their honeymoon...ok now i sound like a perv...LOL

Author's Response: lol. No you don't. I know this is my first Twilight fic but trust me those who read my fics know I'm known for my love scenes so don't feel like a perv on my account. :)

This is a good story. Keep up the great work. =)

Author's Response: Thanks. :)

Good story - looking forward to reading future chapters!

Author's Response: Thanks. :)

Excellent.  Very steamy.  You are doing a great job with this story and I am loving where it is going.  The chemistry is so strong!!  I think you have Edward's fears and anxieties described brillantly.  I can't wait to read the next chapter.  Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks. Some of the fic I've read make Edward seem much more confident than I view him to be and I wanted to show his struggle.

Yes Bella, stay away from the venomous teeth!

I like how Edward calls her "love" and your descriptions of their more intense kisses was great!  LOL about Edward researching foreplay.  I wish the human men would do that as well! :D 

"I wanted her close to me, as close as I could get her. I snaked my arms around her waist and pressed her to my cold body. She moaned and the heat in my belly increased. My instinct was to hold her closer. My mind was telling me to pull back. This was the constant war going on inside me whenever we were close. "

Poor Edward!

Beautiful chappie Eki.

Author's Response:

I was a little worried about the discriptions of their kisses since given their situation their "range of motion" is limited.

Edward is trying and your right it's very diffcult for him both emotionally and physically. Hopefully I will be able to show just how conflicted the situation is for Edward.

I think every woman in the world wishes their man would research foreplay. But I could just see Edward doing this. He would do anything to make Bella happy.