Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 45

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 45

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 46

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 46

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 47

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 47

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 48

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 48

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 49

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 45

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 45

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 46

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 46

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 47

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 47

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 48

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 48

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 49

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 45

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 45

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 46

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 46

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 47

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 47

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 48

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 48

Deprecated: Function eregi() is deprecated in /home/twilight/public_html/header.php on line 49
Twilighted :: All-Inclusive, High-Quality Twilight Fan Fiction






Your donations help keep this site running,
thank you very much for the support!
Reviews For Perspective
Reviewer: loveroftwilight (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 12

I feel bad for Carlisle, all of his family talk to him about personal things that no father wants to hear. Oh well, great chapter! Please update soon.

 



Author's Response:

lol. That is true although the father/child relationship is a bit different for them. I've always looked at it more as a more grown up child/parent relationship. Carlisle's other "children" are married so that brings another dynamic into the mix but even in Edward and Bella's case...to Carlisle she is already Edward's mate which in human terms would fall in the realm pretty close to wife already. She is who he has chosen. Although it might be a bit strange for Carlisle and Edward to be talking about practicing, I told think it made Carlisle overly uncomfortable. He's wanted to see Edward happy for years and is willing to do just about anything to see him so.

I hope that all made some sense. :)

Reviewer: KS123 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 12

You are doing such a great job!  I stayed up way too late to finish all of the chapters so far.  More, more, more!  =]



Author's Response:

Your a new reader then? Welcome. :) I'm so glad you took the time to read my story.

Now that validating is going a bit quicker, I'm going to try to post at least one chapter per week so you shouldn't have to wait too long for the next chapter. :)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. (oh and btw...I've stayed up way too late reading fics before too) ;)

Reviewer: MyBrownEyes (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 12

Edward has a lot to think about on this trip...what with Bella wanting to touch him during the honeymoon. At least he was able to start thinking things through. And I love that you wrote about him asking Carlisle to stand with him at the ceremony. I always liked that it was Carlisle up there with him.



Author's Response:

He really does. Edward is so worried he is going to lose control and hurt her. He'll be doing a lot of thinking this weekend about he and Bella and their future.

Carlisle and Edward's relationship is great. Very complex. And although Edward is close with his brothers, Carlisle is the one he has looked up to for the last 80 years. I don't think there was a doubt in Edward's mind who he wanted to stand beside him while he married Bella.

Reviewer: my1edward (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 12

Poor Edward!  Life is hard for the guy.  I liked his conversation with Carlisle and am looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

It really is atm. He's in a really difficult possition wanting to make Bella happy while scared of his own nature.

You got to love Carlisle. :)

Reviewer: SinAndShame (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 12

This is a beutiful rendition of this time in the saga.



Author's Response:

Aw. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: xoTinyxo (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 12

Loved the chapter :) Edward is such a worry wart! LoL He needs 2 chill, he'd have so much more fun if he did! Can't wait for the next chapter :)



Author's Response:

lol. Yes Edward is a worry wart and very much so. He does need to chill but this is Edward so don't look for it to happen and especially not while he is away from Bella.

Reviewer: mwild (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 12

Can't wait for the next chappie!  Is Jasper ever going to help Edward out by letting him "feel things"???



Author's Response:

lol. Now I would be spoilering you if I told you that. ;)

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 12

Squeal!  Talking to dady Carlisle was interesting to say the least!

A dad encouraging his son to practice LMAO!!!



Author's Response:

lol. Liked that did you? :)

Well we all know they don't exactly have a "normal" father/son relationship but Edward does respect Carlisle as a father figure. Edward needed to hear Carlisle's support and encouragement in this chapter, even about the practicing. ;) 

 

Reviewer: St0pSmackinMe07 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 12

lovely chapter.

poor edward. *smishes him*

 



Author's Response:

lol. Thanks. :)

Reviewer: Hermia (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 12

I never know what to say in reviews but I love the story so far. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and I think the characters are well written.



Author's Response:

Thank you Hermia. :) I felt the same way about reviews when I first started reading fic. I've found just telling the author what you liked or didn't like about the chapter is usually the way to go. Also you can ask for clarification on something if you need it. I've also seen ppl who have done speculation of what will happen in upcoming chapters in reviews.

Thanks for reading and review though. I'm glad like my story. :)

Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 12

Poor Edward...his mind really is not the most fun place to be. I kinda found myself wishing he would open up a little more and I was really glad when he finally did talk to Carlisle there at the end...and then when he asked Carlisle to be in the wedding...awww! Nice chapter...I really enjoyed it. I'm excited to see how the rest of the weekend goes! Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 12

Poor Edward...his mind really is not the most fun place to be. I kinda found myself wishing he would open up a little more and I was really glad when he finally did talk to Carlisle there at the end...and then when he asked Carlisle to be in the wedding...awww! Nice chapter...I really enjoyed it. I'm excited to see how the rest of the weekend goes! Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Edward's mind isn't a fun place to be. He is constantly thinking...and worrying but this upcoming wedding night has really sent him spirling more than normal. He wants to make this a happy memory for her, but he isn't sure he can.

Thanks. :)

Reviewer: annalia2000 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 12

Really good Edward POV!  I liked how you threw in how Carlisle became best man.  Very sweet!



Author's Response:

Thanks. I love Edward as a character (if you couldn't tell). I'm trying to work everything in that happened over the course of pre-BD and I think I've covered most of it. *crosses fingers*

Reviewer: jace (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 12

I liked this chapter, because I'm always fond of the male bonding viewpoints.  Also, Edward is really struggling with this, and it's nice to see Carlisle mentoring him.  And Edward is so sweet, wanting Bella to be happy!

You do a great job of describing the woods and the hunting; you make it seem so natural for them, which of course it is.

Looking forward to more, and of course I can't wait for Edward and Bella to be back together again!



Author's Response:

The male bonding is important. These four men do have a close relationship, they've been together for several decades. And yes, Edward is struggling. Everytime he turns around there is something else beging thrown in his path to worry about.

I'm glad the hunting seemed natural, that was what I was going for. :) There will some more in...chapter 14 I think.

Thanks for reviewing jace.

Reviewer: MyBrownEyes (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 11

LOL!! Edward was so nervous to tell about what she had said in her sleep...its so cute. And wow...Bella sure is into this whole practicing...lol. They're so cute. Can't wait to see what happens on the weekend!



Author's Response:

One of the things I love about Edward is that one min he is 108 and then next he's 17. He has so much experience in so many areas but sex is not one of them and it truely shows.

lol. You know Bella...she loves pushing boundries as far as Mr. Cullen will let her. :)

 

Reviewer: MyBrownEyes (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 10

I think it'll be an interesting hunting trip for Edward. Are they going to want to give him more advice? And its sweet how Edward sent Jacob an invitation knowing Bella would like to have him there.

And Bella's dream...Edward has a lot to think about after hearing her.



Author's Response:

This hunting trip is going to be very reflective for Edward. He's got a lot on his mind.

I wanted to address the invitation in this story. I felt it was such an important moment for Edward and I wanted to show he'd been struggling with it a bit.

lol. Bella's dream was quite a natural progression. I mean what normal human wouldn't have a dream like that if they were in Bella's shoes. Edward just had too many other things on his mind and was thinking in that tunnel vision of his.

Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 11

Very good.  See I told you, Edward deserves some Torture.



Author's Response:

lol. The Edward torutre is just begining.

Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 10

Very good. Don't worry about torturing Edward, as much as I love Edward, He deserves just a little torture. Good Job



Author's Response:

Thanks. It's hard to write EPOV without a little torture. Edward and torture just sorta go hand in hand. ;)

Reviewer: hollylovestwilight (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 11

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love it!

Reviewer: hollylovestwilight (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 11

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love it!



Author's Response:

lol. Thanks.

Reviewer: Rebecca123 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 11

I just have to repeat that I LOVE your story! you are so talented! i can´t wait for chapter 12 :D



Author's Response:

Thank you Rebecca. :)

Chapter 12 will be up soon so not too much longer.

Reviewer: icecoldhamster (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 11

I chuckled the whole way through their sex dream talk! It was so funny. Did Bella remeber it? I mean obviously not if she was surpriesed to find out she had a sex dream but what made her ask him in the first place? Did she remember a little bit?

Edward avoiding and Bella persisting and Edward giving in was so them it was scary. They're still completly in character! Well done! Seriously! I'd never be able to keep them in character for so long, you write it so well!

Poor Edward thinking he's a monster. I feel sorry for him... It's funny how hiding from Charlie in a closet brought him back  to those feelings. Seeky ass vampire.

Can't wait to see how they try somemore. Bella getting frustrated is so funny!

When he told her he was leaving to go hunt, and she went all pale... That was so sad... No wonder Edward hates himself with reactions like that. It must be like a constant guillt trip, however unintentional on Bella's part it is.

Poor vampy boy.

Loved this chapter!

Sooooo... *Checks watch* Updating today?? :D

 

-Katie



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed their talk. Bella didn't remember her dream. She's asked him in the past about her talking and his reaction set her into her follow up questions. She knows him very well and knew she must have said something given his reaction.

Thank you. :)

Edward is still struggling with a lot of things not just their wedding night and all of that is part of who he is and why he reacts the way he does. To take out and isolate his thoughts, actions and reactions would make him less of who he is. He's always been pulled in two different directions where Bella is concerned and that isn't something that is going to change overnight even if he has reconsiled himself to Bella's choice. Her choice of him.

Bella tries to hide her reactions but Edward's vampire senses pick up on even the slightest change. And with Bella's face being "an open book", Edward is very much aware of how much his leaving hurts her even if she doesn't want him to be.

Reviewer: icecoldhamster (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 10

Rose. Lol, oh Rose. She's so blunt it's funny! Gotta admire the honesty.

It's kinda sad that Edward doesn't have fun with them anymore, you'd think they'd resent Bella a little becasue of it... Edwards guilt had me aw-ing out loud. He doesn't have to think of her all the time... Poor confused sweet vampire boy. 

Ew Jacob. Had to be said. I know it's necissary for the plotline but still. Ew.

The book had me cracking up! I could totally picture him in my head looking at a book in shock horror at the word 'Masturbation' hahahhahahahhh. Too bad he's too proper to ask Bella if she does, that would be a funny conversation! Lol!

Heheh, he wanted to close the book when he got to the picture! Aww Edward, lol!

In character, in character, in character! Done so well!!

Bella having the sex dream was great! So amusing! That's what you get when your vampire messes with your hormones during the day!

Great chapter!

 

-Katie



Author's Response:

This is one thing you can always count on Rose for...honesty.

The only reason I think they don't resent Bella taking Edward away is b/c they do see how happy she makes him. Their brother has been so sad and distant for so long. I always got the impression that before Bella he rarely ever smiled or laughed. I can see him playing with his brothers pre-Bella and it being a very serious affair for him. More like mock fighting rather than playing. A means to and end in a way.

lol. yes Jacob had to be addresssed sorry. And since this is cannon, he will show up at the wedding as he did in BD.

So could I. In Edward's time boys were told they would go blind if they masturbated. Even if Edward knows that isn't true, it is still a hard mindset to change once its been engrained.

Yea I don't see Edward as the type to have ever looked at porn and from his point of view that would be exactly what he was looking at.

Your right he so set her up to have that dream after that kiss they shared. With the wedding so close and the horemones flowing it would be impossible for a human not to be thinking and dreaming along those lines given the sexual frustration line these two have been walking.

Reviewer: icecoldhamster (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 9

Bella doesn't like attention about her car... So Bella. You still manage to keep them completly in character! It amazes me, I've never read a fic where someone was able to do that before!

Aw no. That's sad. Everyone thinks she's pregnant. I suppose it's not exactly a rediculious assumption but it's still kinda sad.

Edward seriously didn't think Bella would be right about that?

...At least Angela's still cool about it.

Lol, I like fish... It doesn't smell when it's cooked... Much... :P LMAO! XD

The kissing! The kissing again! Wow!

"Bella's body was moving now." She gets so into it! (You're a genius)

It's kinda sweet that Edward's learning what to do with her and where to put his hands. I like it!

When Charlie came in, whoa! His thoughts made me laugh so hard, it's such a dad thing. "They'd better not be up in her room." Loved that! Protective father, lol! Oh Charlie... :P

The tomato thing was great. Loved that! Grinned like a fool...

It's funny how Edward just doesn't get that Bella doesn't care about Charlie walking in on them!

Aw I loved it!

Reading more...

 

-Katie

 



Author's Response:

Aw thank you. I really do appreciate the compliment.

Yea the grocery store trip was harsh but very realistic. There aren't many people who would believe two 18 year olds would get married right out of high school for any other reason besides "they have to." Anglea of course has always been in their corner and Edward has always liked Bella's friend. +

Hm. I'm seeing a theme here with you and the kissing scenes. :)

Yep mister prim and proper is trying to walk that lovely little line in the sand he's created.

lol. I love Charlie! I so couldn't resist adding that part.

No he doesn't get that Bella doesn't care. Again this is a generation gap thing. In 1918, it would not be something you would want your future father-in-law walking in on. In the 21st century....well it's quite normal. If you notice, Edward doesn't really kiss Bella in front of his family either. He kissed her once in Twilight, and he's kissed her in front of Jacob (I'm talking real kisses, not pecks). Other than that any affection between the two in front of others has been rather chaste.

 

 

Reviewer: icecoldhamster (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2009 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 8

Hehe, aww this was a fun chapter!

I love Esme! As I said, it's hilarious that everyone wants to help him! She is just the iceing on the cake!

No secrets, lol. Must be tough.

Hahah, trust Emmett to ruin Edwards arousal! The books were a great touch! Emmett's playfulness is so much fn to read! I love it!

Okay, I'm sorry, but this is going to have to be a short review... I really want to read the next chapter!

I loved it!

 

-Katie



Author's Response:

Nope. No secrets in the Cullen household. Esme is great though isn't she? :)

Emmett does know how to ruin a moment doesn't he. hehehe

lol. Impatient are we? ;)

You must login (register) to review.




Share/Save/Bookmark


© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.