Ahh...so glad he's back with Bella. Boy time is great....especially with our big-mouthed Emmett, but there's just nothing like E&B time. Can't wait for more practicing!

Author's Response:

I agree. There is nothing like E&B time.

Wow   that was great     the hunting scene was very well done,  but Edward coming to her room  that was perfect     

Author's Response:

Thank you. It's so nice that Edward is home again. :)

Great chapter!  I'm happy he is home with Bella again!

Author's Response:

Thanks. :) I think everyone is very happy he is home with Bella again. Including me.

I actually really enjoyed the feeding part (idk if thats creepy lol). I just cant get over how well you write edward's POV! i especially liked this ending line "I Buried my nose in her hair and enjoyed the searing burn. I was Home" really really good!

Author's Response:

Well I didn't want the feeding to be creepy and it wasn't to me either so if something is wrong with you then it's wrong with me too. :) I did want it to be real though and not glossed over.

I really like that line as well. The weekend was long and I wanted to convey just how wonderful it was for him to be with her again.

I really like this story. I always thought it was weird in BD that neither of them thought to really practice before the wedding. Even though there is a "slight" mention in BD, but its not really what was expected. Anyway, I'm enjoying this story and can't wait for an update. Don't worry, the hunting was very nicely described and didn't freak me out or anything, although I can see how younger kids might be, but they shouldn't be reading an NC 17 story anyway

Author's Response:

Your right. There was a slight mention of them practicing in BD but we never really got to see what they did exactly to prepare. I mean the night before the wedding Edward was shirtless but that's really all we got. I had to imagine they would prepare, even within the boundries Edward set, and so this story took shape.

I personally didn't find the hunting that bad but I've found I'm a bit desensitized to vampire feeding given my research on vampire lore over the years. As for youngsters not reading NC17 fics...well I agree they aren't supposed to but we all know some of them do.

So glad your enjoying this ride. I know I am. :)

btw...I see your a Buffy fan too.

Loved it! (And I'd always kinda wondered about that time of the month.  I mean, it's one thing for your fella to know it's that time fo the month and a wholly other thing for him to know.  ACK!  :-)

Author's Response:

Thanks. :)

The time of the month was something I always wondered about as well since SM never addressed it. And with the wedding coming up I thought it was needed.

very nice chapter. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks. :)

finally he's back!!! Their hunting trip was too long !lol can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response:

lol. Yes he is back and he's not going away again until the night before the wedding; at least not for more than a night. I know the trip was long but Edward had a lot to work through while he was away with the boys. It will be back to practicing with the next chapter.

Oh, this was so sweet.  You remind me of why I fell in love with Edward in the first place...because he is so completely and totally in love with Bella.  Your Edward is sweet, and cautious, and sensuous - such an amazing combination!  I'm glad he made peace with Emmett, and I'm glad, glad, glad that he's back with Bella!

My favorite part of this one is the end:

"Her body immediately responded by curling toward me. Bella’s arm came up to circle me as her head found my chest. She sighed and her warm breath brushed against me.

I kept my hands and arms away from her; not wanting to make her too cold. I buried my nose in her hair and enjoyed the searing burn. I was home."

So. Sweet.

Thank you!

Author's Response:

I love the sweet moments between Bella and Edward and the fact that she's asleep and doing it without thinking, just makes it even better. Edward is amazing and his love for Bella is unmatched.

I NEED YOU TO WRITE MORE PLEASEEEEEEEEE!

I'M SO EXCITED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTERS PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!

Author's Response:

lol. The next chapter is already written and ready to go. I'll probibly post it toward the end of the week so not too long of a wait and it's all Bella and Edward.

good chapter. Wait, jasper is gonna try and help?! Oh, man, this is gettin good! Please update as soon as possible! I gotta find out!

Author's Response:

Yes Jasper is going to try and help Edward. It won't be for a few chapters though. We have to finish the hunting trip and I have something else I'm going to throw in Edward's way first. :)

Squeal!  I have no clue where to suggest this goes.  I mean I hate to say it but Edward needs to work with Jasper.  I mean if his fully clothed imagination is getting the best of him imagine a reality with a release its going to be earth shattering.  So he either needs to try a few things with bella or have Jasper help him out.  (emotionally only) 

 

I know there are a few out there who thinks he shuold either do something physically with someone else or with Jasper and I mentally smack you all sick! 

Author's Response:

First let me say that I'm not writing slash nor is Edward going to cheat on Bella. And he does have a ways to go before he's ready to "try" with Bella and he knows it. That's the reason he has agreed to Jasper's help. Seeing his handprints in the soil made him realize just how much help he needs.